Date: 06/15/09 07:11 am Title: Of Sasha and Georg
Yea, I think that Georg is incredibly hot:-))
Author's Response: He's mine. I don't share. XD
Date: 06/15/09 04:51 am Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
I love it! I think it's because Sasha is sooo cute and we all just want a prgress with Tom and Bill;D If you know what i mean;D
Author's Response: I do know what you mean. Thanks so much for your support in like, all my stories. I wuvs you
Date: 06/15/09 12:23 am Title: Of Sasha and Georg
my tongue was the first thing that i got pierced nd it didnt hurt neither did my lip the only piercings that hurt were my nose nd my eyebrow..........tongue studs only hurt if u move the stud the wrong way in ur mouth nd nearly rip it while its healing
Author's Response: My belly was my first piercing. My lip hurt, but my eyebrow didn't.
Date: 06/15/09 12:09 am Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
Tom just accepted that?! Accepted the offer for Bill to blow him??!! That scumbag, to pay him back. All I want to do is bitchslap him.
By the way, I don't know about your other readers, but I normally go to fanfiction for entertainment, rather than good writing. I think it's really great, but some more detail wouldn't hurt.
Author's Response: Yes. Tom was a typical male and thought with the other head. Feel free to bitchslap him all you want XD Thank you so much for the feedback. I'll do my best to add more.
Date: 06/15/09 12:02 am Title: Of Media And Mansions
I have a feeling it isn't, too. I love how Bill's heart speeds up when he looks at Tom, but he isn't like "I love you, even though you're an ass, I know you'll change". It's more realistic...like, "I love looking at you, but what comes out of your mouth turns me off." I like it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I enjoy writing parts like that. They make me giggle XD I can't believe you've reviewed every chapter. I wuv you.
Date: 06/14/09 11:57 pm Title: Of Parks And Girl Cooties
Oh, dear. Bill took care of Sasha by...whoring himself? That's terrible. This fic is really making me cry. I love it. I want everyone to be better, though.
Author's Response: He did. Poor Bill.
Date: 06/14/09 11:52 pm Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
So as of this chapter, what does Bill's hair look like?
Author's Response: Good question. Basically, it's straight and black. No white. . .. yet XD
Date: 06/14/09 11:51 pm Title: Of Andreas And First Visits
AH! Bill feels something for Tom, Andi feels something for Georg, and all is right with world. Almost...I love this. Sasha just makes me melt!!
Author's Response: why do you say almost?
Date: 06/14/09 11:47 pm Title: Of Results And Homecomings
Sasha is the cutest little boy I've ever heard of. He reminds that not all four-six year olds are as nightmarish as my little cousin. I want to hug Sasha forever!! I hope Bill lives...
Author's Response: Nein, not all fou-six year olds are bad. My neice is one of the greatest little kids ever.
Date: 06/14/09 11:42 pm Title: Of Rats and Escalades
AH! What does he have?! I'm so worried, I hope Bill doesn't die. *runs off to next chapter*
Author's Response: *giggles* Run minion run!
Date: 06/14/09 11:39 pm Title: Of Ratty Shacks and McDonald's
Georg is such a perfect little citizen. I feel so bad for Bill and Sasha. I really love this, but I hope Tom becomes a nicer person soon.
I know it's really late now, but Happy Birthday! I know how it feels to have friends abandon you.
Author's Response: Thank you. I don't mind that it's late. I appreciate that you still took the time to say it.
Date: 06/14/09 11:30 pm Title: Of Sasha and Georg
Tom is an ass. Who wouldn't be upset by a little boy saying he was going hungry and his brother was dying. He's so cute, so sweet. I'd be crying. I hope he warms up.
Author's Response: Tom is an ass, but he (unintentionally) gets funnier later on. In my opinion, anyways XD
Date: 06/14/09 10:43 pm Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
I like this story how is Synnie!!! =DD
Yay for Bill getting a ton of new stuff for practically free!!!!! *Does Happy Dance*
Lolz, I can so totes see mega rich Tom eating Fruit Loops in a plastic bowl. I think it's because he's so thug!!
Oh no...is Tom really going to make Bill..."pay"? =(
Author's Response: I don't like Bill. I'm jealous of him. I want a major shopping spree, with everything paid for by someone else! *pouts* But yes...Bill must pay up. Oh, and do you have msn or yahoo or anything? Hit me up if you do.
Date: 06/14/09 10:11 pm Title: Of Sasha and Georg
Gah, of course you can have it! Glad I helped some. <3
Date: 06/14/09 05:16 pm Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
y does every1 always write that tongue studs hurt when they get pierced?they dont.good story by the way.
Author's Response: Really? Hm. I've never done mine. But I know my lip hurt. I just figured it would. I mean, it hurts when I just bite mine XD That, and plus it's Bill's first piercing. Those always hurt more, no matter where it is.
Date: 06/14/09 03:53 pm Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
*new reader alert*
oh noes!! there's no more!! =0
this was sooo awsome!! i just didn't want it to stop! =0 it was totally amazing and i can't wait for more!! sasha is ADORABLE!! and so is georg ^^ and i really like tom and andi's relationship! =D and bill is kinda naiv, even if he's far from it, if u know what i mean?
but ye, to make a long story short, i LOVE this fic!!! =D =D =D
please update soon? (A) (A) (A)
Author's Response: WOOO!!!! *tackles* I love new readers! Sadly, no, there is no more. BUT there will be an update every saturday. Bill is pretty naive, but I think that's what makes him so much more tragic. Thank you SOOO much for giving this story a chance.
Date: 06/14/09 03:27 pm Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
I definitely like where this is going, please update soon.
Author's Response: Yay! Glad to hear it. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 06/14/09 02:45 pm Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
omfg xDDD TOM AGREE WITH BILL?????
I wasn't expecting that stuff with the tongue piercing xD
um... I think that ther's a lot of details um... but not in the "space" part...like places...I don't imagine Tom house...no no but I imagine "Bill's"
and god why andreas has a room in Tom mansion!! xDDD didn't he slept in tom's room in a past chap? o.O and he was like very excited by the idea of sleeping in tom's house .-.
u know I think is a good story...but where is sasha? D:
u can put more problems in Bill life xDDd I'm mean D:
okei that is it :0 people don't like when I write a big review xD sooo BYE :DD
Ps: thanks xD I'm better now...um I'm like a huge strawberry xD
ok kisses ;D
.nekito.
Author's Response: *giggles* You will find out why Andi has his own room, and why he doesn't really use it. But then, is there much more of a reason needed other than: it's Andreas ? XD Don't worry. Sasha hasn't been forgotten about. He's coming up in the next chapter. People don't like long reviews from you o.O For me, I say go for it! I LOVE when people write long ones!
Date: 06/14/09 02:17 pm Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
Let's see... the lack of detail isn't as felt when the plot is nice, that's why no one asks you those ;) they aren't needed, I feel, because people only want to know the facts when a plot runs by so smoothly. Got what I mean? As for this chapter, I really didn't appreciate what Tom did with Bill, the way he just categorized him as an object - I really thought he was different... but perhaps you have something planned for the future, so I'll wait and see... please post soon! ;)
Author's Response: Really? It's seriously not minded? Hm ok. As for future plans, well, hopefully they won't disappoint. Thanks SO much for reviewing!
Date: 06/14/09 02:04 pm Title: Of Malls And Makeovers
i hv to agree wit u dat da image of Tom nd fruit loops put a HUGE smile on my face....nd i'm curious bwt these other piercing ure talkin bwt O.O'''''
i think that too much detail can actually causes the story to seem too plotted and planned. though a lil maw description wudnt hurt...
i love this story but i really cant wait till it gets to the climax (excuse the pun) lol
cnt wait for da update...ciao
Author's Response: Alright, I will do my best in future chapters. And yay for climaxes haha! As for Tom's piercings, well there isn't many more, and nothing overly interesting, you shall see later XD And YES! Someone else who says ciao! Woo! XD Ciao!