Date: 07/13/09 03:03 am Title: Of Saki And Speeches
wow....you had 25-40 reviews a chapter!!! O.O th ebggest i ever got was forty, and that was like,..once...wow...but go tom!!! make Bill yours...or something.
Author's Response: I'm not even kidding. This one's at 34 XD I nearly SHIT myself when I hit 22 for the first chapter.
Date: 07/12/09 11:49 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Well, rats. Right before the confrontation and everything. I'm so anxious! This is going wonderfully, I think. A lot is banking on this conversation between Bill and Tom, though.
Author's Response: *Bites nails* I'm so hoping I don't mess this up. Ugh. Now I'm more nervous than I already was.
Date: 07/12/09 09:40 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
I think Bill did a good job raising Sasha by himself. He was sick and everyting, and he did better than some people who are rich and perfectly healthy. Caroline raised a wonderful boy herself.
That's Tom at the door, isn't it? He chased after Bill! That's amazing. Georg's gonna open the door, and Tom'll be all like, "Where's Bill? I need him!" Well, probably not, but that'd be nice!
Author's Response: I think Bill did a good job too, but I think he just needed to hear it. And of course it's Tomi at the door XD
Date: 07/12/09 07:23 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
I just have two things to say...
One, I think this story is perfectly fine how it is. So don't change it =D
And two, if I walked in on Tom and Andi, and they really were "like that", I sure as hell wouldn't leave...if you catch my drift...;) (But in Bill's position I totes would...that is if they really were "like that" and Bill was just the guy on the side, which he isn't and hopefully Tom will explain everything in the next chapter which I hope can come soon.=D)
God, this story's awesomesauce in a can. =DDD
Author's Response: One: XD THANK YOU!!! Two: I would leave! XD Tom and Bill I'd like to stay and watch, but Andi . . . I really hope Tom doesn't screw everything up next chapter.
Date: 07/12/09 06:06 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Yeah, you're a spoiled little synnie. Meh, you need to come up with a nice excuse for Andi and Tom before I bite your head off. I'd give you a nicer review, but this laptop works when it wants, as well as wifi...and i can't as well go back home just when i got here.
Author's Response: XD I like being a spoiled Synnie. And don't worry. I have it ALL planned out XD
Date: 07/12/09 04:25 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
i likez it..but fix billa and tomi plzplzplzplz thx soso much=]=]
Date: 07/12/09 03:19 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Beautiful chapter!! Yes, Bill is a wonderful brother, and Georg is so sweet with Sasha!!!
I`m sure that unexpected guest would be Tom, searching for Bill:-)
Author's Response: Of course it is XD and thanks so much
Date: 07/12/09 03:19 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
I am sorry about the reviews. I read the last chapter, but didn't get a chance to review. I sorry :( BUT.. I love this story. This chapter was SO sweet. Hopefully something GOOD can become of Bill and Tom's .. 'relationship'.
Author's Response: That's ok. I appreciate the review this time around XD
Date: 07/12/09 02:50 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
can't wait for the next chapter!!! it was awesome. :)
Author's Response: XD thanks!
Date: 07/12/09 02:43 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
TT~TT... its so beautiful TT~TT, BUT! super amazing!!! *runs off and does the 'super omega kawii' dance >.
Author's Response: I wanna learn that dance .. .
Date: 07/12/09 02:24 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
It's good!!!!! Don't stop writing this!!
I can't wait for Tom and Bill's talk, in the next chapter I'm assuming.
Author's Response: You assume correct XD
Date: 07/12/09 01:31 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Mmmmm i think that i gave you a review last chap. But as always i like the story! XD And Tom is chasing after Bill!!!
Author's Response: I think you did too XD Thanks!
Date: 07/12/09 01:11 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Aw yay! I really loved this chapter! And I'm sure Bills mom would be proud of the way he raised his little brother.
Author's Response: I think she would be too. Thank you!
Date: 07/12/09 01:11 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Aww, Tomi's coming! :d
I love it. Update soon please. :)
Author's Response: Hehee Tom's about to come *cough* sorry
Date: 07/12/09 12:33 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Oh god! That was just.. so amazing! I loved it so much! Tom, you better get inside that house and explain to poor Bill what the fuck is going on in your stupid little head!
Author's Response: Tom really does need to smarten up
Date: 07/12/09 11:54 am Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Uh oh Tom is there!!! Ooh this is going to be good. Bill did do the best he could and I hope he doesn't let Tom walk all over him, but I do hope that Tom comes around and treats Bill like a real person and know that Bill is truly amasing.
Author's Response: I would like for Tom to do that too. Let's wait and see, shall we?
Date: 07/12/09 10:26 am Title: Of Saki And Speeches
I am uber confused about why Tom and Andi were in bed naked together...And I desperately want you to update soon? Please? I'm sorry you only got fifteen reviews...
Author's Response: That gets explained next chapter, don't worry
Date: 07/12/09 10:16 am Title: Of Saki And Speeches
aww whattt i love this story nothing wrong with it =] but i wanna kill andi now.. hes spoiling bill and toms relationship :P
Author's Response: Andi will get straightened out, don't worry xD
Date: 07/12/09 09:17 am Title: Of Saki And Speeches
awww I do like this one :) hehehe, Tomi is chasing after Billa!!! um... *blush* just realized I didn't review the last chapter...I was looking to mention in this review on something that I mentioned in my last review, but apparently it never got written...I was juts thinking about writing it, and apparently forgot... *sobs* sorry... :( okay, so yeah... anyway....
Tom is chasing after his wonderful Bill!!! Yea!!! Ecstatic about that, because I think things between the two of them are being nicely picked up. it's just great, and OMG!!! YOU added SAKI back IN for a brief MOMENT!!!!!!!!! *squeeze* I love you!!!! yeah... Saki's cool...
I tried did try
this could just be me, coming from a weird world, but the sentence doesn't quite sound like. Like I know what Bill means, but tried, try just sounds a little funky. But then again funky is good!!!!
After a few years of having the tiny form curled up next to him at night, Bill would freak out from time to time at Tom's house when he'd wake and find Sasha not there.
Awww, that is so adorable. But I feel sorry for Bill because of that. I want to like shove Sasha in his arms (at Tom's awesome mansion house mind you) and say, hug him and go to sleep! Hahaha, but obviously that isn't happening -_- damn it... Waiting so impatiently for the showdown between Tom and Bill. So many different ways I can see it in my mind!! There can be the oh, see this is what I meant. Then everyone is happy!! There could be shouting match. THOSE are FUN!!!!! Or, there could be um... well, a shouting/talking/something match. *coughcough* something!!!! *cough* Just scared about the fight happening when Sasha is there. I'm afraid Tom will let something slip, and Sasha might find out that his brother had it rough, and then he might get sad and depressed, and then Bill would be overly pissed, and Georg would be trying to fix everything, and Tom would be evil on the outside, but sobbing on the inside...
"But I heard you sing alot. It'll be quiet."
See, that is while I love Saki. He picks up on all the best things, and is so nice n_n Okay, so I have a suggestion, sort of maybe? Of course this chapter kind of contradicts what I'm about to say, but anyway...
It seems that a lot of the time you either have just the chapter focused on Bill, Bill and Tom, Sasha, or Sasha and Georg. Like they don't have bonding moments with everything at the same time. Like you had chapters that did (don't get me wrong there) but they seemed to just be there for the sake of being there. So they don't really add to the story except to show, oh cute moments, or just showing the passing of time. Then in some chapters it seems like Sasha is becoming more of the main focus, than Bill and Tom (which I thought was the main focus) You need to find a happy medium (lol in my opinion which doesn't count for too much here) where everyone has their own stories, and they all sort of are able to be together. I think you're still working to find the happy medium.... lol, if that makes any sense at all, which is probably didn't! yea! lol, *cough* anyway... *squeeze* I so want to see the showdown (let me call it that) between Tom and Bill, and Tom's genius explanation. Ooo so ready for that one! :)
Author's Response: *sobs* How DARE you not review the last one! I look forward to your reviews especially! I love Saki! Of COURSE I had to write him in. I warned you it was unbeta'd XD I didn't even look over it once XD I'm so nervous about Tom showing up. So many ways I could mess it up. Basically, Tom and Bill are my mains. I mostly write in Sasha cos I don't want people forgetting about him. He really does kind of live in his own world right now though
Date: 07/12/09 09:12 am Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Great chapter, georg and his mum really are good people!
and i was pleased with tom's reaction, he needs bill ^^
can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: They are. And yes, he does need Bill. I'm glad you were pleased