Date: 07/19/09 11:39 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
I really love Sundays because this story is updated. I just wish the chapters were a little longer, I'm greedy like that. :)
Author's Response: I think it would've been like 4000 words if I wouldn't have broken it up o.O
Date: 07/19/09 10:57 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
Awww! That was so sweet! Aww, feel sorry for you! No animal should fart on you! You're too fluffy!
Author's Response: *Laughs* YES! Thats awesome. I'm fluffy
Date: 07/19/09 10:51 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
I liked it... with all the drama talking of the guys... and i love georg! another chap soon??? *w*
Author's Response: I love Geo too XD sure there will be another chapter soon
Date: 07/19/09 10:51 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
I liked it... with all the drama talking of the guys... and i love georg! another chap soon??? *w*
Date: 07/19/09 10:40 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
oooeeeeewww cat fartzzz..... okiea back to the serious stuffs, meh, so what if Tom was OOC, it happens, sometimes people who we think fit a certain mold break out of it and surprise us all, and leting the charachter take ove ris always best, it actually means you've set out a, like, personality for them, i know i have the same Tom (not the Idiot one) come out in almost every story and ....well at least i know he's consistant :) lol, but no i like htis chappy and look at that! -pointsup- a LONG review! (kinda!) YAY! i did it!
Author's Response: Cat farts be very icky. Tom really is always consistant. I always let my characters take over. He enjoys being an ass, but he was so much...nicer this time... And WOOOO! for the long review XD
Date: 07/19/09 10:27 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
awww, poor hun, kitty farted on you... that can't be all that pleasant... n_n anyway, I have to say I really like this chapter, even though Tom seemed a little OCC (like an itty-bitty bit that I wasn't even going to mention) lol, I know you'll probably roll your eyes or something, but I've got to say I think there was like a perfect amount of detail in this one. hahaha, yeah....like it wasn't so much it was overwhelming, but not like underwhelming too... so yea!!! lol...
He looked like he'd rather have a sandpaper covered Eiffel Tower wrapped with barbed wire stuffed up his ass rather than have a kid around
lol, I know I should probably be feeling sorry for Tom, but I can't really. Lol, I keep laughing at imagining Tom's face, which just wow, it looks so funny... yeah... lol, not the most pleasant of imagery, but wow, it works so well n_n
Tom was just so happy Bill agreed to come home that he didn't entirely hear the condition he was nodding too.
I liked this line, because even though Tom agreed, it's like how some people agree to things, they don't think about what they're agreeing to as long as they get what they want. And well, of course it will keep the story from going all smooth, bumpy roads are the best!! Rollar coasters are good too...
He marched his scrawny little ass over to the older man.
That is such a funny little line. Lol, I love it. Scrawny little ass!!!! yeah... I love how you have Saki, I LUV Saki, I think I've said that before, but he's just so awesome n_n hehehe, he's like playing matchmaker, and a damn fine one at that.
I liked your explanation of Tom and Andi, I wasn't sure what you were going to do, and how I would feel about it, but I like it :) hmm, this might just me over thinking it, but I wonder if Andi will react when/if he finds out that Tom told Bill kind of his deepest darkest secret.
"You're supposed to explain yourself, kiss the living daylights out him, and convince him to return home with you!" the brunette said, flailing his arms in the air.
And I love Georg here too!! I love this sentence for first the horribly awesomely cheesy idea that Georg has stuck in his head, and then the action. lol, FLAILIN!!! lol, after splayed, flail has to be like my favorite word in this fandom, and it seems to come up a lot... hehehe, I love it! *squeeze* just made my day by using the word!! and well, by posting too... you sure you couldn't have made an extra long chapter? extra long chapters are amazing... :D But anyway, I was very happy with this chapter
Author's Response: Kitty farts totes aren't pleasant. YAY for perfect amount of detail *does happy dance*. *Giggles* Tom really has some of the greatest expressions sometimes. I'm guilty for agreeing to somethings without really hearing the details. I figured Tom seemed like the type. I adore Saki. The man has an awesome name and I just love him. I HAVE to write him in. And Bill DOES have a scrawny little ass! I loved Georg there too! I flail ALL the time.
Date: 07/19/09 10:05 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
Awww this was cute! Poor Andi, though. -huggles him- And -huggles you- Poor thing. Your cat is purely evil.
Author's Response: It was poor Andi. But definitely poor me more XD
Date: 07/19/09 10:00 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
aww evil cat :P XD
and i loved this chapoter tom was so cute :D
Author's Response: XD Thanks so much!
Date: 07/19/09 04:48 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
lol. cat farts is smelly xD but really, i like this chapter. tom ooc or not, it's a progress.
Author's Response: Cat farts ARE smelly. So are dog ones. And thanks for the review!
Date: 07/19/09 03:30 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
Awwww~ :)
Author's Response: Thanks XD
Date: 07/19/09 03:04 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
ooc? out of control??
plzplzpzl update soon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: Out Of Character. Tom seemed too.....nice in this one... I thought anyways
Date: 07/19/09 03:01 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
I'm dumb but what's OOC?
Anyways I loved it. It was sad where Bill had to chose between his brother and Tom. I can't wait until some steamy scenes between the two of them. update soon!
Author's Response: OOC is out of character. Thanks so much for the review. I want some steaminess to happen too XD
Date: 07/19/09 03:00 am Title: Of Pasts And Tough Decisions
love it
Author's Response: Yay!
Date: 07/16/09 04:38 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
awww i was going to cry too !
but uh..i`m not supposed to be looking at other stuff in this conference room so i`m sucking it up lmao.
Author's Response: Haha good job!
Date: 07/16/09 04:38 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
awww i was going to cry too !
but uh..i`m not supposed to be looking at other stuff in this conference room so i`m sucking it up lmao.
Date: 07/14/09 01:55 am Title: Of Sasha and Georg
Yes it was.
Date: 07/13/09 06:58 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
awwwwwwwwwwwww mannnnnnn i was so intrested in the story and it had to end here and im like noooooooooooooooo it has to continue plz hurry this story is so sweet and sad and romantic
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you like it. It'll continue soon enough.
Date: 07/13/09 06:39 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
howdy!!
ok the one and only thing i dont like is... the cliff hangers! its s tense! tell em what happens!! arghhhhhhhh
um yeah that was incredably unhelpful but hmm yeah anywho
i love this stoy and have been reading ti since chapter one *proud* although im not a very consistent reviewer caus i normally read them on my itouch which is really hard to type on and im lazy so yeah but now my computer is fixed be prepared for long and rambling reviews ellie style which basically means they will have ery little to do with the actually story but oh well
anywho
i ADORE this story please keep writing it! *glomps*
and sooooooooooooooooooon
bibi!
much love
ellie with a guitar ... oooh shiny!
xXx
Author's Response: XD I like cliffies XD Thank you SOOOO much for following this for so long! I wuv you!
Date: 07/13/09 02:28 pm Title: Of Saki And Speeches
I just read all of this and I think it's lovely... I can't wait for more of it.
Author's Response: XD thank you for even just giving it a chance!
Date: 07/13/09 11:18 am Title: Of Saki And Speeches
Hey I wanted to rewiev I'll tell u something that I love about this fction "children talk" I loved it :D hims beautiful :D those talk is soo cute :D :D soo that's it xD write soon
Author's Response: XD Thank you so much. I wish all kids were like Sasha . . .