Date: 08/09/09 10:41 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Oh no! I can't believe that. That was a ridiculous turn of events at the end there. I would be slightly embarrassed if I were Bill but I hope he's okay.
Author's Response: I am so glad I'm not the only one that would be embarrassed!
Date: 08/09/09 08:49 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
i hope Bill will be alright!! update soon..*or else!*
Author's Response: Or else? *gulps* Does next saturday count as a quick update?
Date: 08/09/09 08:13 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
>_< im confused wats wrong with bill
Author's Response: You'll see next chapter
Date: 08/09/09 08:13 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Aww I hope everything is okay with Bill. :(
I was glad to see how their relationship progressed though. Update again soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing XD
Date: 08/09/09 07:35 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
The hospital again!? What's wrong with him this time? h God, I hope it's not serious...
Sasha is still priceless. What a loving child.
I like the love scene, cuz it was hot without being smutty. Nice job.
Author's Response: It's one of those it CAN be serious type sicknesses, but since Bill's only recently showed symptoms, he'll be just fine. Thanks so much. I like writing love scenes like that. Smut is fun and all, but sometimes the curtains blowing in the soft breeze kind of stuff is better.
Date: 08/09/09 05:44 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Ooo, I liked this chapter n_n So it got happy, and sweet, and cuddly, and it was just so Awww!! And then in the end we get angst!! hahaha! (I love that stuff) There actually weren't all that many mistakes in here, so it's all good. The only thing that threw me off was...
However, the Tom Andreas entered the living room to see was not the one he was expecting to find.
I think you're missing a comma after 'see' lol, but I just noticed that because I'm in the mood for staring at commas, so yeah... n_n
Little by little, their kisses got deeper, their touches a little more southern.
I don't know quite why, but I just felt that was such a sweet line, it was like, kind of innocent, but not really, if you get what I mean :) it was like such a happy time, and then the hospital, and now I'm so worried. btw, Andi's letter was just the best, it was like a little cliché, but it was so sweet n_n when Andi saw them I was afraid for whatever reason he was going to run off or do something stupid and harmful, but I'm so glad he didn't. The letter is just so sweet :D
He crawled into the bed and laid down, keeping the phone close to his ear.
Awww!! That whole section was just so adorable, and I think I mentioned somewhere in reviews as a rant that you need to find a Sasha and Bill/Tom balance, and I think this chapter did it well n_n there was Sasha, but then there was still Bill. Hehehe, maybe because that whole part was just so sweet, it felt like everything balanced...lol, idk, good job n_n such a lovely chapter :D
Author's Response: Considering the time frame I wrote it in and no beta, not too shabby at all, I think XD I nearly fell asleep posting it. I never noticed the letter was cliche, but then, I also didn't read over it. I just wrote it and posted it. To be honest, I don't even remember what was said. . . .I should probably check XD I'm glad you thought I balanced Sasha and Bill out. I felt the change too, it goes together a lot better now. Thanks so much for reviewing! Yours make my day!
Date: 08/09/09 05:11 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Uh OH! Poor Bill. Maybe too soon? Or is it just the sickness coming back? I don't know, but I hope he's ok. He's been taking his meds right? Oh I really hope Bill is ok. Update soon.
Author's Response: I will say it's not typhus again. That's all I'll say though.
Date: 08/09/09 05:05 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Aww!
I've just read the entire story and I absolutely love it. It realle is amazing, no other way to describe it (:
It's both funny, sweet, hot and exiting at the same time and when I first started reading I couldn't stop again ö
Keep it going!
Author's Response: Aww thank you SO much! The next post will be up on Saturday
Date: 08/09/09 03:15 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
aww there soso cute=]=]=]=] i luvz billa and tomi..i hope bills ok..update sooon thx=]
Date: 08/09/09 02:48 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
I was in the hospital too, earlier today. :(
Poor Billa... But uhm, Tomi was totally sweet though. I love him like this. :)
Update soon again hun, and make Bill feel better. :P
Author's Response: Oh no! Are you ok? And of course I'll make Bill feel better.
Date: 08/09/09 02:41 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Poor little Bill:-( But an anxious Tom and a feverish Bill is still sweet:-)
And Sasha was adorable, as Georg:-))
And last but not least I really hope that Andreas will find the one who love him back!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked them. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 08/09/09 01:40 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Bill is back in the hospital. :(
Hopefully Tom realizes he DIDN'T take advantage of Bill .. that Bill wanted it.
Author's Response: He is back there, but he'll still straighten Tom out while he's there.
Date: 08/09/09 01:32 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
What happened to Bill? Oo
I really love your story, which is amazing! Your characters are really developped and I like each of them. The relationship between Bill and Tom is so sweet! I trully enjoy reading this fiction and I expect the next chapter!
Author's Response: You'll see next chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Date: 08/09/09 01:32 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
ohhh shitt.
Author's Response: I know, right?
Date: 08/09/09 12:33 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Holy shit! I wonder if Bill will remember what happened and calm Tom's fears about taking advantage....
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: You have a really pretty username. Just thought I'd point that out XD Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/09/09 12:30 pm Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Damn, poor Bill. Finally getting into Tom's softer side but then getting sick.
Very few mistakes, mostly grammatical and wording.
Author's Response: Really? Awesome! It's a miracle considering when I wrote it. Thanks!
Date: 08/09/09 11:48 am Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
aww hes back at the hospital
:'[
Author's Response: He is. He should just live there XD Just kidding, anyways, thanks for reviewing
Date: 08/09/09 11:38 am Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
won`t they both be sick then? :O
nooo bill =/
Author's Response: I guess you'll just have to wait and see, won't you ;)
Date: 08/09/09 11:00 am Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
o.o you're just as bad as me with these cliffes hon. -huffs- :D u kno i luff it ^^
Author's Response: Are you kidding me? Blood Friend? NOTHING beats that cliffie. Fuck. . .
Date: 08/09/09 10:53 am Title: Of Nightmares And Being Together
Okay... I just need to go read it all one more time, cause, this was... dare I say it... Straight-to-heaven/Hell good! Awe, Andi is sad. *Gives Andi a hug* It's gonna be okay!
Awwww! Bill and Tom had sex? No... they made love, aww so sweet! Too bad Bill is sporting a fever!
Aww, Sasha is soooo sweet! I loved it!
Author's Response: Really? It was that good? Don't worry, Andi will get happier. AWWWWWWWW!!!! Saying they made love made me all gushy. They really did though, didn't they? Thanks so much for reviewing, hun!