Date: 09/24/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Confession
you are bloody brilliant
Author's Response: It makes me so happy to know that. Thankyou :D
Date: 09/24/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Flight
porn sweet porn ohhh how i missed you
Date: 04/20/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Peeping Tom
That was really really hot!
Author's Response: Oh thankyou so much. rnrnYou should check out my co-write :Drnrnxxxx
Date: 04/18/10 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Hypocrite
Tom's so cute when he's jelous. Nasty lil' fucker. :P
Really good chappie.
Author's Response: Aww I'm so glad you like it. Thanks so much :Drnxx
Date: 04/17/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Flight
Great start, and you managed to keep "sweet Bill" in character. Not alot of people can do both sweet and naughty Bill. I'm impressed.
Date: 11/06/09 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Hypocrite
Even just after reading two chapters I`m hooked! To be a first time writer, this is pretty darn good! :D
Author's Response: Thankyou so much for being my 60th reviewer :D It makes me happy to hear you say that. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story. xxxx
Date: 11/06/09 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1 - Flight
Oh, I forgot to say that I actually LOVED this chapter! And I dont have to image myself as Bee cuz I AM Bee! Yey! =D The twin bit worked really well, i love how uncomfortable and terrified Tom was with it, it made it more endearing than full-on twincest. Nice writing my love! I loved some of the words you used to describe things in this chapter, im in too much of an 'OMG' daze after reading it to pinpoint one right now, but I remember being surprised by some of the words thinking 'Id have never thought to describe it like that, but it works really well!' This is your genre girl! Love it, love you xx
Author's Response: I really like writing as Tom. He's defnitely the easiest character i think. I just have alot of inspiration for him, when I'm in that role. Terrified Tomi is definitely cute <3 & i'm glad you liked the TWC bit, because I felt i should put a bit in there, but it needed to be just right. The style I wrote signified love alot more than just sex, i felt. It was brotherly. Haha if you think of the words you liked, tell me, i'm interested to know what's good and what isnt. :D Again, thanks & i'm sooo glad you love it.rnLove you too. xxxxxxxx
Date: 11/06/09 01:01 am Title: Chapter 8 - Intimacy
Jess, you are an absolute legend! I actually love you for writing this story for me! It was incredible to read and I only hope my story back to you can do the sexual escapades in this one any justice! ;) Thanks again, ily xxx
Author's Response: :) Thankyouu. If you want any more stories, drop me a line, because atm, I want to write, i just have no ideas >< rnI can't wait to read yours. It's going to be amazing. I can tell. rnILY 2 xxxxxx
Date: 10/27/09 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Intimacy
well youve basically had my review on msn XD
Author's Response: hahah yes thankyou sooooooooo much .rnxxx
Date: 10/27/09 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Confrontation
O_____O must read on!!!!!!! i looooove it
Date: 10/27/09 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Flight
OMG i actually love this....*reading on* hehe
Author's Response: Yayyy! It gets better i promise.rnThanks so much.rnxxx
Date: 10/25/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Intimacy
this was DEFINITELY worth the wait....
*licks lips*
i am imagining myself as Bee right now...
DON'T JUDGE ME!!
=D
Author's Response: Haha i think we all imagined ourselves as Bee ;)rnThanks for being patient & reviewing :Drnxx
Date: 10/24/09 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Intimacy
Damn that was hot!
Author's Response: Aaah thanks so much :D Im so happy you liked it.rnxxx
Date: 10/24/09 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Intimacy
*feverishly fans self*
good lord, you have the whole erotic literature thing down pat!
i love the little twin connection, too, it made so much sense in more of a sweet way than an incestual way. you did a good job of portraying that =]
Author's Response: Fuck you just made my day even more orgasmic. :) Thankyou so much for the amazing review; i'm glad the twincestual non-twincest worked. I was worried it'd ruin it. But thankyou greatly. :Drnxxx
Date: 10/24/09 08:53 am Title: Chapter 8 - Intimacy
WOW Loveee IT!
Author's Response: Thankyou soooo much :Drnxxx
Date: 09/17/09 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Confession
Angry & upset Tom is hott! *drool* I love this chapter Jess, cant wait for the last! ;) You're writing has improved so much from those first few stories you sent me!
Author's Response: *plans to write more angsty Tom* He's really fun to write with actually.rnI can not describe just how much i love you enjoying this story. rnImproving is always good too.rnMaybe you will get more stories for being so generous to my ego :DrnThanks for reviewing xxxxxxxxxxxrn
Date: 09/13/09 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Flight
Yaaaay for reading mine :)
and LOL NO. I HAVE IT TRACKED. I'm just lazy and actually haven't been on this site much today. D:
I'm on it now. 8D
Author's Response: Haha I'm now really worried, cz it probably sucks.rnBut, next time you go to the dentist, you'l have something to take your mind off it lol.rnxxx
Date: 09/12/09 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Confession
TOW. That is WIN. :D
I also love your use of metaphors all the time. Loved it, as per usual :)
p.s sorry for my lateness :)
Author's Response: Thankyou dearest; I do try my best to use some techniques in there.rnTOW just had to be placed in there somewhere, i'd been thinking about it all holiday. LOL.rnThanks for reviewing. :)rnxxxrnI shall go read yours now. rnP.S you read my slash one shot? Or was it that terrible you didnt review?rnxxxx
Date: 09/07/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Confession
omg are they going to share her lol? good chapter
Author's Response: Tehe maybeeee :prnYou'l have to read the next chapter to find out (when I write it lol)rnThanks so much for reviewing.rnxx
Date: 09/06/09 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Confession
uh ohhh....i know wuts gonna happen lol
AND I CAN'T WAIT!!
=D
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)rnI hope my writing lives up to your expectations.rnxx