Date: 05/25/09 07:05 am Title: Chapter 10 - Not What I Wanted To Find
uuuu i love this story it's very dark and twisted :D lol keep up the good work:D
Author's Response: Oh thanxs so much sweets!! Hope you enjoy the rest! :)
Date: 05/25/09 02:55 am Title: Chapter 9 - Didn't Exactly Mean It
so hes really crazy... god this story is great.. i almost want to learn more about tom and the stuff that made him actually go crazy.. like shit that haooened kinda like this.. idk i loike this chapter alot.. probably one of my gavorite if not my favorite.
Author's Response: Lolz well thanxs so much!! Glad you like it so much. I really enjoy writing Toms character. I feel kinda weird tho cause he is one of my favs(I like em all really) in the band and I'm writing him as some crazy dude.rnThank god for fiction huh?! XDrnMuch love sweets!! :)
Date: 05/24/09 03:23 am Title: Prologue
AM-ZA-ZING story. I HONESTLY don't know why you don't have that many views. THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!
I'm SO hooked!!!
Can't wait for the NEWWWWW update :D
Author's Response: Awwwweeee Thank you SO much! It means a lot to me to hear that you really like it. And its so great to have people tell you your story is amazing!rnThis is probably the best story I've ever written,a nd its so much fun.rnrnPromise my update will be soon!! Thanxs so much and keep enjoying!!! :)
Date: 05/24/09 12:11 am Title: Chapter 9 - Didn't Exactly Mean It
so.. that last part... did tom hit his mother too.. "..frantically looking over at his wife's body and then up towards his son."
It confused me, but maybe I'm just dumb ^_^
Twas a good chapter. Exciting.. twisted.. scary >_>.
But awesome. Much love =]
Author's Response: Thanx for the review. And no, Tom didnt hit his mom, it was upposed to be that she fell down the satirs. Srry for teh confusion. I thought I sorta explained it somewhere in there...but my OWN mother was tlaking a lot to me when I wrote this..and I'm dumb enough to not check over my work.rnrnThanxs anyways tho!! Hope it was okay. :)
Date: 05/23/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 8 - What Happened To Him?!
this was such a good chapter.....nice way to end it too.....cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanxs so much sweets! New chap up real soon!! :)
Date: 05/23/09 03:41 am Title: Chapter 8 - What Happened To Him?!
it was good.. dont worry bb. just hurry and post the next chapter
Author's Response: Hahaha...will do! Promise. Just like I said. :)
Date: 05/23/09 03:20 am Title: Chapter 8 - What Happened To Him?!
ooh!! glad bill has had his eyes opened up a bit. :)
Author's Response: Hahaha. He has hasn't he. But only a bit...rnThanxs for your review!!
Date: 05/23/09 01:25 am Title: Chapter 8 - What Happened To Him?!
That wasn't a bad chapter. I enjoyed it quite a bit. I want to know exactly what is going on with tom. True-the chapter was abut short but that just makes me more eager for the next installment. Oh and I love gustav and georg in this story you write them well
Author's Response: Well thank you for your review. Gosh I know the chapter was short. I felt like i had written an introduction paragraph to a speech or something. Which really in a sense I guess I could look at this as an intro to Tom. lolzrnAnd thanxs so much on your comment about the G's. It means a lot to have you just review the story.rnrnKeep reading I hope, and enjoy!! :)
Date: 05/23/09 01:14 am Title: Chapter 8 - What Happened To Him?!
O_O
ohhhhhhhh what a way to end the chapter v.v
lol, It was very good though, despite of what you think =]
update soon? ^^
Author's Response: Srry *hides under blanket and pokes head out* It means a lot that you actually liked it tho. I wasn't sure, still feel a little uneasy. But its great to have you say you thought it was good. That means a lot. :)rnAnd odn't worry...update will be tomorrow. Wrote some other stuff. XD *wink*
Date: 05/20/09 06:25 am Title: Chapter 7 - In The Dark.
tom just gets more interesting all the time. i cant wait to learn more about him. keep up the good work--hope your internet gets better. :)
Author's Response: He does doesnt he? Lolz. And thanxs so much, I hope it gets better too! XDrnGetting ready to update real soon!! rnrnKeep reading!! :)
Date: 05/17/09 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 7 - In The Dark.
Oh... oh my lol.
I LOVE 'mental institution' stories on this site, and yours is just simply... amazing xDDDD
I'm so glad I found it :D
Much love =]
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you!! You have no clue how much it means to have you say it's amazing! XDrnWell I'm very glad you are liking it, and I hope you continue to read it! lolzrnThanxs so much, and much luv back!! lolz
Date: 05/16/09 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 7 - In The Dark.
hmm "knock- knock" DUDES CRAZY! haha update soon
Author's Response: Haha..yeah I guess he is a bit isn't he. But thats the point right? lolzrnWill update again soon!! Thanxs for reviewing. :)
Date: 05/11/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 6 - I Decided.
this story is so good. it's kind of creepy but i like creepy (that's not weird right???) *shifty eyes*.....oh well
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanxs!! Glad you like it. :)rnAnd no its not weird that you like it, I like creepy too. lolz
Date: 05/11/09 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 6 - I Decided.
this is a very interesting story. i think i like it so far. i really want to see where it is all going. keep up the great work--and dont forget about your other story either! :)
Author's Response: Well thanxs! It means so much to mean that you enjoy this! I'll try not to forget about my other story lolz. I just got soo excited with this one haha.rnAnd things can be time consuming.rnKeep reading!! :)
Date: 05/09/09 10:08 am Title: Chapter 5 - Choose Wisely
i just started reading this and its amazing!
please update soon!!!!
Date: 05/04/09 12:03 am Title: Chapter 5 - Choose Wisely
update soon please!! tom is fucking crazyyyyy
Date: 05/03/09 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Downstairs Office
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I can see Tom and Bill in a supply room like that. I could actually see that whole scene playing in my mind and I must say, -blushes- i'm a little bit horny now...
Author's Response: Hehehe..its all good lolzrnSo I'm guessing it was okay? lolzrnThanxs for reviewing!! Will update soon :)
Date: 05/03/09 06:05 am Title: Chapter 4 - Downstairs Office
haha well considering im drunk and just read that.. it was amazing'1 lol ut i honestly think it was tom.. maybe gustav now that his name was mentioned.. but it would onlynmake sense if it iwas tom.. or maybe georg.. hhopefully georg.. lol... ubt updatesoon!!!!!! please?
Author's Response: Hahaha...you made me giggle!!lolz wait...who says giggle?watever,I do lolzrnAnd thanxs,I really hope ya liked. As for the updating, believe me I'll try!rnThanxs for reading!! :)rnAnd I'm not saying who it was.....but you'll find out :)
Date: 04/29/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Who's Who?
you did a really good job at this.. i laughed at georg.. like seriously.. lo he would be a liar haha.. please update soon! itd be greatly appreciated
Author's Response: Hahaha,well thanxs.Honestly I just didn't have the heart to give Georg some crazy issue lolz.I'll try and update soon for ya lolz! :)
Date: 04/28/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 2 - AA Type Meeting.
I liked it, but at the end are we suppose to guess who is who, forgive my confusion I read it when I was about to go to bed and my mind started to shut down. Mind shut down + reading fast to get to the next part dose not mix well xD
I will read again on the chance it is just me who think we have to guess who is who. but I DO know I liked it and can't wait to read a new part with a more awake mind xD
Thank you for posting it! ^_^
Author's Response: Hahaha..well I'm glad you liked it,and don't worry,I forgive your confusion lolz.But no you don't have to guess who is who,I sorta mentioned who it was lolz,so reading again if you'd like might help lolz.Bu no worries.rnrnI thought about doing POV's but we'll see how it goes.I'm very happy to hear that you liked it though.Kepp on reading!!lolz :)