Date: 06/08/09 11:14 am Title: Chapter 15 - You Stop, Than You Better Hope I'm Down
awsome...pls put tomorow another oneeee...I'm reading just you!!!
Author's Response: awe...thanxs sweets. glad you liked!! :)
Date: 06/08/09 02:54 am Title: Chapter 15 - You Stop, Than You Better Hope I'm Down
i want to know more!!!!! and i would also like anoher tom pov... those are always good!!!
Author's Response: ANOTHER!! Tom pov?!? lolz I'm just kdding. Mayyybbbeee... :)rnas for more, what do you want to know more about? haha
Date: 06/08/09 02:03 am Title: Chapter 15 - You Stop, Than You Better Hope I'm Down
OMG!!!!
OMGOMGOSAMFJSDFJA
Yes!!! *fistpump*
Bill you sexy, crazy fool, it's about damn time xD
I'm so tired lol. I was about to go to bed but then I saw this and forced my eyes open wide and read it.
But still! *yawn* Go Bill!!!
K, night night ^^
Author's Response: Hahaha I thought you would like this cahpter. And yes, sleep is good lolz. But thanxs for reading!! haha :)
Date: 06/07/09 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Your Out? But Than Who's In?
yahoooooo awsomeeeeee
Author's Response: lolz. It is isn't it? hahaha
Date: 06/07/09 09:40 am Title: Chapter 14 - Your Out? But Than Who's In?
oooo....me likes(:
-Emmii
xxxxx
Author's Response: Thanxs! :)
Date: 06/07/09 08:39 am Title: Chapter 14 - Your Out? But Than Who's In?
Ok, my first review EVER, so here we go...
I found this fic very interesting. It's placed to the totally new environment for me comparing to the other fics I've been reading. The idea is great. It's funny to see, how you fitted all our well-known people to the roles in this fic. Storyline is interesting and you just can't stop reading (extra credits for excellent points to change to chapter so reader is forced to wait the next one). First I found this creepy and almost disturbing, but somehow it was very easy at the end to get in to the mood for this one. Very somehow.. movie-like fic.
It's interesting how Tom is in so central role here even if POV is mainly focused on Bill. I found just a tiny cliches from the characters, but in general they are very good, so keep on working with them. I wish to see more mental unstablelism (is that even a word? :D) in BIll because of his diagnosis in a future, but that's just my little fantasy, so don't take any pressures from that :). Actually this fic is making me feel a little uncomfortable with myself because...
Tom, oh Tom, so sick and twisted, so in need of help... and it turns me on! WTF? That's weird and disturbing to find out... But in a while, please, give us more twisted-minded Tom!
I'm waiting for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Well shit, lolz, you left quite the review. haha. Well I really appreciate that you like the story. I have been told that the story is quite good, and that it really pulls people in. That's what I'm looking for, so I'm glad you like it. It means a lot.rnrnAs for Bill and his condition, trust me, you will see a lot more from him in the future. I'll give you a snippet, but it'll be real soon that you'll start to see a change. Don't tell :) rnAnd as for more Tom....well you'll definitely be getting more Tom. But I can't tell if thats good or bad! :)rnrnThanxs so much for the review sweets!!rn
Date: 06/06/09 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Have Breakfast With Me.
As always. Completely amazing.
Insane Tom drives me crazy! ;)
Author's Response: Thanxs! I think Tom is so much more of a catch when he's crazy. XP lolz
Date: 06/06/09 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Have Breakfast With Me.
*shudders*
Tom's so creepy lol
Date: 06/06/09 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Have Breakfast With Me.
this story is really well written, but really creepy as well. i do look forward to more though.
Author's Response: haha,well thanxs,right?lolz :)
Date: 06/06/09 09:02 am Title: Chapter 13 - Have Breakfast With Me.
AHHHHHHH!!! i love it! can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: hehehe,thanxs!!
Date: 06/06/09 07:24 am Title: Chapter 13 - Have Breakfast With Me.
uuuuu and update....nice chappy can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 05/29/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 12 - I'd Fuck You To You Know.
Well, shit lol.
That kind of left me speechless, lol not sure what to say xD
But I liked it. Can't wait for the next chapter =]
Author's Response: haha.well I hope it is a good speechless for sure.lolzrnnext chapter up soon,as promised.rnthanxs so much for your review!!! :)
Date: 05/29/09 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 12 - I'd Fuck You To You Know.
Oh. My. Goodness.
Wow.
........ nothing more to say.......
Author's Response: hehehe....so thats good right? :)rnThanxs for your review sweets!!
Date: 05/28/09 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Old Toys, And New.
ooh, this was really creepy from tom's point of view. he is a sick boy who needs lots of help. keep up the great work!!
Date: 05/28/09 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Old Toys, And New.
omg this is tooooo short!meanie:p
Author's Response: Awwweee. I'm srry. :)rnNext post REAL soon!!! lolz
Date: 05/28/09 01:00 am Title: Chapter 11 - Old Toys, And New.
i like toms point of veiw..its always good to get some time to look into his sick and twisted mind! please update ASAP
Author's Response: Thanxs so much! I thought it might suck.. rnBut thanxs again. And I promise to update REAL soon. :)
Date: 05/27/09 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Old Toys, And New.
I don't know why, but I like that Tom is friken horny messed up guy. hahahahaha
Author's Response: Hahahaha...thats Tom I suppose. lolzrnrnThanxs for the review!! :)
Date: 05/27/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Old Toys, And New.
I do love this story, I really do ^^. I just hope Bill stands up to Tom, ya know? It angers me that Tom has so much power >:|
haha, but whatever. It's your story ^_^ and I love it nonetheless.
Author's Response: Haha..well I can see your point. Poor Bill, always getting manipulated and shoved in some creepy event. Oh well! lolzrnTom'll get whats coming to him some day I'm sure. lolzrnrnThanxs so much for the review!!
Date: 05/26/09 02:25 am Title: Chapter 10 - Not What I Wanted To Find
0.0
Tom!!
THAT HORNY BASTARD!!!!!!
Like I said before. This story should have MORE readers.
MORE! .... 0:-)
Author's Response: Hahahaha!!Well spread the word!! lolz jkjkrnBut I'm glad you really like the story.And yeah...he is a bit isnt he?rnBut just you wait!! lolzrnThanxs for the review and I hope you keep reading. :)
Date: 05/25/09 04:15 pm Title: Prologue
this chapter was so twisted and messed up.....and I loved it!!!!! Tom is seriously crazy......like put-him-in-a-straight-jacket-and-lock-him-in-a-padded-room crazy........lolz.....but this story is still one of my Top 3 favorites...EVER!
Author's Response: Ooooohhh.. thanxs so much sweets!!! I'm so glad you liked it lolzrnHe is a pretty crazy dude eh? But who doesnt love a crazy guy?rn.....Okay well I dont but watever. XPrnThanxs so much!