Date: 06/28/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 1)
DEAR GOD lol
what just happened??? :O!! and it's going to be more intense?
Oh dear..
Author's Response: yes, yes it is.rnrnand i know...*shakes head*...wat are they gonna do??
Date: 06/28/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 1)
Oooh i liked it. it get's the point across about how messed up they are. :)
thanks for updating.
xx
Author's Response: ur welcome! lolrnglad it did get the point across.rnrnxoxo
Date: 06/25/09 05:30 am Title: Chapter 18 - Am I Not Good Enough?
I want to go in the car with Tom !!!
I'm loving your story and can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: well go ahead! lolzrnThanxs so much! <3
Date: 06/24/09 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Am I Not Good Enough?
*raises hand* OH PICK ME PICK ME PICK ME!!! I DO I DO I DO!!
This will be fun!!
Author's Response: oh, anyone want to go? *looks around* oh! you! rnya you can go, if you want to. lolzrnrnhope it will be fun!!!
Date: 06/24/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter 18 - Am I Not Good Enough?
wow....this story is SO GOOD!
Author's Response: awe, thanxs sweets! rnrnxoxo
Date: 06/23/09 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Am I Not Good Enough?
what?????what road trip!!!????ooooo common' don't play with us it's annoying
Author's Response: whoops, srry!! *hides* hehe
Date: 06/23/09 11:49 am Title: Chapter 18 - Am I Not Good Enough?
Ooooooooooooooh I do lol
Thanks for updating :)
I kinda like crazy Tom and this story is great. :D
xx
Author's Response: Haha, seems everyone does. rnThanxs so much for it all. :)rnrnxoxo
Date: 06/23/09 06:03 am Title: Chapter 18 - Am I Not Good Enough?
Wohoo! Now that's something I didn't expect! A roadtrip? They are leaving? So goody, goody, goody....*trilled*. And please, take me with you, Tom, pleaaaaaseeee! God, he is so hot here that I could just fall in love with him :D. I was thinking when reading this, that his character IS the hottest character I've ever red here. What the heck is wrong with me? :D
But it was so nice to see that you updated again. I've been littlebit expecting something to happen and the end of this chapter gave me so much more to wait. Of course it would be nice to see their relationship becoming more stable and normal, but on the other hand I don't want Tom to change at all. I'm so stuck on his character. Also I loved the way you made Bill to be so depended on Tom in such a sick and twisted way. Bill's resistance attemps gives here nice balance, but I would hate it, if he'd depart himself totally from Tom. So escape (or how it will be) is very interesting choice.
Hmm, what else should I mention... Great dialogues again here. You are very talented to write them. There has been one or two chapters where everything was just circlening around a little, but now I can see much progress coming up on future. I noticed also, that Tom has been somehow unsure about his position for a couple of chapters and now he's starting to develop things to get everything back to under his command. So yeah, maybe there is some weaknesses in Tom after all.
So... One ticket to the roadtrip with Bill and Tom (God, I so love him.. Did I said that already? :D), please :)
Author's Response: hahaha, well you can take the ticket and go off! lolzrnI'm sure Tom and Bill won't mind the company. rnand yeah, Tom is human...sorta. he has to have some kind of weakness I think lolzrnrnthanxs so much for the review!! xoxo
Date: 06/23/09 01:56 am Title: Chapter 18 - Am I Not Good Enough?
uhhh oohhhhh o_o
*hugs pillow*
don't hurt Bill!.. *gives puppy eyes* please?
Ugh, I'm so into this story, hahaha. Like I'm literally on the edge of my seat. What have you done to me >:|!
Author's Response: Hehehe...srry. :)rnAnd can't make promises, obviously. lolz
Date: 06/15/09 03:45 am Title: Chapter 16 - Guess Who's Still Up
yay toms pov!!! love it!
Date: 06/14/09 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 17 - No Punishment In Hell
ooh gotta love abit of kink, i like where youre taking it. xx
Author's Response: hehehe. thanxs :)
Date: 06/14/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 17 - No Punishment In Hell
*finally exhales*
Jesus, girl. I was so tense throughout that chapter, lol, Idk why.
Oh, it was a good chapter. Messed with my head a bit, but I liked that. Haha.
Good job x3
Author's Response: Hahaha. Srry, didnt mean to make you tense. Glad you liked it though, even if it messed with ya a bit! XDrnThanxs so much for the review sweets!
Date: 06/14/09 02:05 am Title: Prologue
i hope you upload soon! i love this story lol please! upload as soooon as possible!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Did do!! lolz Glad you like and I hope you continue to! :)
Date: 06/13/09 08:57 am Title: Chapter 16 - Guess Who's Still Up
plsss it's awsome,put more ofter and bigger,thxxx
Author's Response: lolz, okay. will try!! lolz :)
Date: 06/10/09 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Guess Who's Still Up
sleepy you keeps us on the edge but hey thanks for the update. the chapter was great:p
Author's Response: haha, I guess sleepy me does keep you all on edge. but then again...sleepy me might not always be a good idea. XP
Date: 06/10/09 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Guess Who's Still Up
Oh, new one. Great :). No, it didn't suck. It was actually good chapter even though I was very tired, when red it first and because of that I had some difficulties to read in english. Needed to read it twice, actually. Especially Tom's POV -part was little confusing to me, but boy, was the second part (Bill's POV) HOT! Nice to see insane, dominating Tom again... Yeah, I know, I wished him back, I know :). I'm trying not to review every chapter seperately, but I just needed to say that this one didn't suck at all! Amazing job once again. Can't wait to see, what's there waiting for Bill.
Author's Response: Awwe thanxs again sweets!! Srry you had trouble with Tom's POV, didnt mean for that to happen. :( But none-the-less, I'm very glad you liked it.rnTotally okay if you don't review each chapter, I'm just so happy that you've chosen to review. lolzrnThanxs for liking the chapter and I hope you continue to enjoy.
Date: 06/10/09 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Guess Who's Still Up
It didn't suck, I thought it was good.
Oh god! You can't leave it on a cliffy like that though. Total mind fuck lol What is he looking forward to??
xx
Author's Response: Haha well srry. Definitely try and update soon. Srry for the cliff and I guess you'll just have to wait for wats next. lolzrnThanxs for reviewing and liking the chapter!! XD
Date: 06/10/09 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Guess Who's Still Up
Well, yes, my victory was short lived v.v
But that doesn't mean this chapter didn't rock xD
You twisted, twisted girl, how dare you play with my emotions like that!
lol, Much love ^_^
Author's Response: Hahaha, yes your victory was short lived. Must apologize. But who knows wat could happen right? :)rnrnThanxs for liking the chapter and reviewing! I was so like..*whoosh*, thought I was completely out of it.rnrnBut I guess it rocked!! Thanxs sweets XD
Date: 06/08/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 15 - You Stop, Than You Better Hope I'm Down
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! Bill is fighting back! This chapter was soooo good! I love it so much!!!!
Author's Response: Yes he is!!! Sorta.lolzrnAnd thanxs so much sweets.Glad you liked it! :)
Date: 06/08/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 15 - You Stop, Than You Better Hope I'm Down
YAY Bill stood up to him!!!! And in Chapters 12 & 13, that was the hottest thing i've ever read. I don't know why but a mentally deranged Tom is the sexiest Tom ever!!
Author's Response: hahaha. well thank you!! lol i think he's pretty hot as a crazy too. lolzrnand glad you liked the chaps, i'm still a little unsure about them and such, but i think i'm doing pretty good for a newb at slash(sorta) lolz. :)