Date: 07/13/09 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 21 - We're Gonna Leave Tomorrow
:O
Well, I suppose Bill won't ever rebel against Tom anymore (haha), since he's given in and everything x] which is fine with me. I'm also starting to really like Tom's POV. I sort of like seeing things from a crazy's eyes. Is that weird? >_>
Anyway, good job =] I liked this chapter. much love ^^
Date: 07/13/09 11:39 am Title: Chapter 21 - We're Gonna Leave Tomorrow
Ok, new reader, so I'm just gonna review all chapters at once if you don't mind. :) Absolutely amazing characterization for Tom and Bill. I can almost feel Tom's ... curiosity? I'm not sure what to call it... about the inner workings of the human body. It's disturbing, in a perfect way. Bill's obsession with Tom is uncanny and intriguing. I'm enjoying the way your writing practically pulls emotions from me. Please keep it up! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, I guess you could call it a curiosity. He does like the internal organs a bit. haharnAnd thank you, its good to hear that I can actually make an effect on my readers with my writing. Thanxs for reviewing sweets!! :)
Date: 07/13/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter 21 - We're Gonna Leave Tomorrow
I liked this chapter actually. Feels nice to see it from Tom's pov.:)
I see our little Bill is masochistic too. I like that.
Thanks for updating. :)
xx
Date: 07/12/09 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 21 - We're Gonna Leave Tomorrow
I loved it! I think you did a GREAT job writing in Tom's POV. Amazing as usual! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Date: 07/12/09 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 21 - We're Gonna Leave Tomorrow
You finally did Tom's POV!!!!!! Yayyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!! What's next?!? I NEED to know!!!!
Date: 07/12/09 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 21 - We're Gonna Leave Tomorrow
lol, this line is very precious... "We have nothing-” I placed my hand against the doorframe, looking down and to the side. “-And everything.”
Author's Response: I thought so too. haha
Date: 07/12/09 08:31 am Title: Chapter 21 - We're Gonna Leave Tomorrow
Wow! Now that was extremely hot. I don't know, what to say, but you did great job here and I like it to be graphic in anyways. Describtions of Tom's insane interests and Bill's surpricingly vocaled wants to be bruised and cut were sick, but (because of that?) fascinating. And rim job, one on my favorites :). You twisted it well to almost normal sex and gave some humanity in Tom's character. He seems to have many layers in him. But yeah, hot as hell and since I adore your Tom, I just envy Bill of having Tom like that. I want too..*sigh* :D.
Anyway, nice one again and I hope you can solve your writer's block out. Do the best way you like it :). And THANKS for Tom's POV! Always a pleasant surprice. You made my day once again :).
*waves her one-way ticket to the roadtrip in the air and waits patiently (ok, I lied; not so patiently) to get on board*
Date: 07/10/09 04:23 am Title: Chapter 20 - Now We're Out...But Still Punished.
Hm...
Tomi is just... wow... to think if he was REALLY like that. Damn.
Author's Response: Oh my god, if Tom really was like this...yeah. *Nods* Damn is the rite word.rnDamn for sure... ;)
Date: 07/08/09 03:00 am Title: Chapter 20 - Now We're Out...But Still Punished.
I think you should take a break if you have too many ideas. The story still seems interesting, though. But I don't want you going braindead from creating too many story ideas.
Author's Response: (since I'm responding a few days after your review) Haha, well no need for concern. I figured out a answer to my tiny little problem, that's so obvious I don't know why I've never done it.rnI'll now be accompanied by a little peice of paper and a tiny pen in my pocket. Good for the ideas. That way i won't go into overload with keeping them all in. haharnAnd honestly, I don't thikn I could take a break even if I wanted to. :)
Date: 07/07/09 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Now We're Out...But Still Punished.
Go girl go! You are so right down my alley of writing with this fic *bows down* sorry that I haven't commented before until now but just letting you know this is going in my favorites. I think Tomi should punish Bill lol make good aka evil and sick! Your awesome at updating looking forward to see where this goes! :)
Author's Response: Aww thanxs so much. Glad you really like the story. I do quite like writing this fic. haharnAnd don't worry, I forgive you for not commenting sooner. jkrnThanxs for choosing to do so now tho.rnAnd I'm glad you think I'm good at updating. I still think I suck :/
Date: 07/07/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Now We're Out...But Still Punished.
Cliffhangerrrrrr >_O
bah
*bites nails*
Author's Response: I'm srry!! I promise I won't do it again!rnOkay well I can't really make that promise. But I promise not for awhile. rnrnHonest. *raises hand*
Date: 07/01/09 03:09 am Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 2)
Aaaw.... :). I blame on you that I'm so totally addicted to this fic. This is one of my first fics I started to read here and it'll be probably always also one of my favourites. I just wanted to say that... And it's sad to know, that you already know the end even if it's not yet coming. I don't want this to end at all :(.
I think that this was good chapter with calmer atmosphere at this point. No too much intensity, but a little breathing break with still very strong emotional touch. I do think that every story needs to take a break and move slowly every now and then, so the intensity can have apportunity to grow. Yet again Bill's emotions towards Tom were well described here and needed to be shown. So my opinion is, that after last chapter, this was better solution than keep on going at full speed.
Maybe I was in too emotional mental state, but I almost cried at the beginning of this chapter. I don't know why, it was somehow so sad. Things that happened and knowing about inevitable consequences. I love your psycho-Tom at his best and his worst, but I still feel so much need to help him. At was sad to see him on that state... Which is crazy, because at the same time I LOVE it, when he's dominant, violent and fucked up.
There was well written Bill's obsession about Tom and other people's reactions to that also. The end was so beautiful too and I made me smile to read them caressing each other like that. Very sweet...
Date: 07/01/09 01:52 am Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 2)
It's so... From like everyone elses. Bada ba ba ba, I'm loving it.
Author's Response: Haha. Thanxs. Love that ending of yours. lolz Quite catchy.
Date: 07/01/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 2)
This is the kind of story that keeps you entertained. Psycho Tomi is oh so sexy...
Author's Response: Well thank you!!! *big smile*
Date: 06/30/09 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 2)
No, it wasn't intense, but I liked it nonetheless =]. I always do, haha.
And although Tom is nuts, the ending was cute x3
Author's Response: Yeah I guess it wasn't. And I thought so too. I thought I'd put some fluff in there, seeing as how I have it listed and all. lolz
Date: 06/29/09 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 1)
I liked it! I still love Tomiiiiiiiii!
No matter how dangerous he is ;)
Author's Response: Yeah...me too. lol
Date: 06/29/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 1)
ooohhh my godd that's the best one,i've never thought it's gona turn this way
Author's Response: hehehe, so you really liked it huh?
Date: 06/29/09 07:24 am Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 1)
OH my! What just happened here? Was this intense or what? GREAT chapter, brilliant! I had to read it couple of times to get everything right (maybe overall a little confusing to read?), but it was stunning. I really like the way you write short chapters and sentences and dialogue worked again. I found few little mistakes, but nothing major.
End was so confusing. What happened after Tom got violent towards Bill. Who screamed, where was everyone and - most of all - what happened when Bill closed his eyes and next time he opened them,he saw just empty room and Tom crying. I was shocked, I have admit. So, so great job! I have a feeling, that something really interesting just happened and it's going to effect on EVERYTHING.
They are both so messed up and anything can happen now. Bill is getting stronger and stronger, while Tom is loosing his control for good. I felt actually sorry for Tom. Crying-part just broke at least my ice into tiny pieces there. There must be a terrible struggle inside his head. Could you give us Tom's POV again? I want to see inside that head.
I have a weird feeling, that this fic is not going to have a happy ending. I kind of wish that. We'll see that in a future, but hopefully not for a long time :)
Date: 06/28/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 1)
This wasn't good, it was sooooo much better than good! Wow, just wow.
-standing ovation-
Author's Response: ahhhhh. thank you.rnrn*bows* thank you!!!rnrnglad you liked it. :Drnrnxoxo
Date: 06/28/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Anything, Just Save Me (Part 1)
tom crying?oh-oh this is getting interesting
Author's Response: It 'tis isn't it. :D