omj that was AMAZING!!!! hmmm i wonder where they are though?? someone who knows tom....hmm xD

Author's Response: Thank You!! So where they are is.....idk! XD

plzplzplz update sooon thx soso much=]=]

Ohhh i'm excited. :D
Thanks for updating.
xx

oaaaaaaaaaa awsomeeeeeeeeee hottttttt moreeeeeeeeee

i think they should go to one of toms friends house....if he has any. and i also think you should finish that scene in the car. PLEASE it sounds so good!! xD

:O!!

ohhhh they're finally out x]

I'm really excited right now but I don't know how to put it all into a comment, lol >_>. But! Just know that I'm really excited ^_^! haha.

Ohhh well first thing to say is that I was the first to review for this chapter lol

I think that obvi Tom and Bill should have sex in the trunk of the car. But for the overall plot I think that they should escape maybe have one obstacle like the police come after then but in the end escape and live happily(ish) everafter in Tom's own sick twisted way

Author's Response: Well congrats to being first! haharnrnAs for living happily ever after. I can't promise something like that. Guess you'll just have to wait. And as for obstacles...well its not a free ride. :)

awwww....there so cute=] update sooooon plz thx=]

Bossy Tom is hot. Godspeed Bill...lol

Hah! It's me again! Sorry :D

Well, well. Things are packed and I'm ready to go! Just let me get my shoes on and... :)

I try to look this whole fic now instead of specific chapter.

CHARACTERS:
I think you really managed to build a couple of great characters, both Bill and Tom. I think you started Tom's character really well from the beginning. His first appearance in that AA-type of group was very memorable. Reader kind of noticed immidiately his strenght in this fic. He has not only insanity made by weird actions, but his way of speak, move, look and act are really believable. His character is truly the best (AU-)Tom I've read so far. He is kind of those people that he needs to do nothing and everyone around him sense that there is something weird, scary and still fascinating in this guy. I wasn't so sure about Bill at first, but I guess I just couldn't really understand him. Now he has grown also to be a unique character. First I thought that he had actually nothing wrong with him, but as the story kept going on, there revealed his confusing nature. He's full of contrasts. Other people are actually quite meaningless here. Funny is, that it doesn't matter.

PLOTLINE:
Interesting, I have to say. There are a few institution fics and the problem is to get them original, because the environment is usually the same. I think that it had been really important decision (intentional or not) to concentrate more and more to the relationship between Bill and Tom. Tension between them is unbelievable! Reader almost forgets that there is actually other people and happenings around. Everything is seen through their eyes. I works here. BUT it won't probably work everywhere. Tension makes it work. I'm very interested to see, how Tom behaves in outside world as he's been in institions for so long. I still have no clue if this is going to end happily or not.

WRITING:
Your writing style fits for me. I find it easy to read and yet not simple or that it has lost any of richness of descriptions. In general it's nice. Maybe sometimes even longer chapters, maybe? Maybe there was couple of chapters that didn't make any progress to the story, but generally good job.

I said most of this earlier already, so sorry, but I tried to make a summary here :)

It's sad to see this coming to an end soon, but there is time for everything I guess. Maybe there would come difficulties to develop further the characters or their relationship if this keeps going too long? On the other hand, I'd love to read new fics with same themes or maybe a sequel.

So, thanks for fast updating and waiting for the next one :)

Author's Response: Haha, well thats okay.rnWell thank you about the character analysis. lolz I did want to make Tom a very strong character, and tho I don't show Bill's true illness a lot, you have to remember he does take medication. You can't 100% give meds to Tom for his issue. lolzrnrnAs for my plotline, I think its hard for anyone to have a completely original story, with movies, and tv, and everything else. We all try to make things original in our own way, and thats very crucial for a fic. And yes I did (do) try to focus more on the relationship with Bill and Tom. That is sorta why I'm writing this. haharnAs for if it ends happy, I can't tell lolzrnrnAnd I'm glad you enjoy my writing style. I will try and give longer chapters, but it really depends on how I want something to go. Like if I want to put a lot of parts into one chapter, or split it and carry it into two chapters. You know wat I mean? As for chapters that were more of fillers, I've said it before in other reviews, you can't have action in it all. lolz Than the story would be every where! haharnrnI am sad to see it come to an ends as well. But thats wat things do. Just keep enjoying and keep an eye out! ;)rnThanxs so much for the long reveiw! haharnYou get a long response back! :)