Date: 07/29/09 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Off and On
what!?!?!?!?!
oh no you did it again....so so good....but man i just need MORE!!!
ugh!!! great add...more soon PLEASE?!
Author's Response: Ugh!! I'm srry!!! *hides*rnMore very soon!!! :D
Date: 07/29/09 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Off and On
I bet it's Andi!!!!! It'd be so cool if it was!!!! But it'd be wayyyy better if it weren't. -snickers- Either way it's gonna be AWESOME!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hahahah. Well I so can't tell you. You know that! lolz But its very interesting that you would say it might not be.
Date: 07/29/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Off and On
plzplzplzplz update soooon thx soso much=]=] omg..its andreas huh? lolz maybe im wrong but ya=]
Author's Response: i will, i will. lolz and i can't tell you who it is. ;D
Date: 07/29/09 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Off and On
Ooooh. I'm excited for the next chapter. :)
Thanks for updating.
xx
Author's Response: No problem!! :)
Date: 07/28/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 26 - I Really Hate You.
Great place to put the ending...the end. I didn't expect that ending at all... Fuck Nathalie!!!! I hope they leave soon before Bill has to kill her but that would be nice though.
Date: 07/28/09 10:46 am Title: Chapter 26 - I Really Hate You.
Aaaaalriiiight.. what a nice way to end the chapter =))
that was way unexpected. lol
Author's Response: It was wasn't it. :)
Date: 07/27/09 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 26 - I Really Hate You.
my God! I could feel my adrenaline rising through the whole chapter until the Tom "making it up to Bill" part and my heart dropped.
I will always love the rebel!Bill, but I should know by now he'll always go back to Tom.
I know, I know: he's bipolar. blahblahblah shame on me for always looking past that, lol.
But it's still a good damn story. Much, much love.
Author's Response: Oh! well that didnt seem to start off good. lolrnrnAnd yeah...most likely he will. :D But thats a good thing rite?rnrnAs for the Bipolar thing, I actually forget and I write the flipping thing! haha rnBut it all serves a purpose lolzrnrnAnd thanxs so much for the review sweets!! :)
Date: 07/27/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 26 - I Really Hate You.
WOW! The ending.. HOT! Oh f*cking yes! Yes, you really made it work... He is so hot when he's pissed off or acting psycho or just being so dominant and violent and manipulative. Ok, so much for that... Not a word anymore about how a adore Tom :D. Everyone's tired already to read about it :D
I think this chapter actually worked. What happened here, showed us the more unstable side of Bill (even if he had a good reason to be mad at Tom) and reminded us about Tom's disorder's nature. He has feelings towards Bill, I'm sure of it, but there is still his disorder haunting and making him acting like he is. Like fucking Nathalie and then treating her like crap was something to be expected just as much as the fact that Nathalie was just as blindly tied on Tom's web of insane personality as Bill is.
I really like the way you are developing and deepening the characters here. They feel so REAL.
About the beginning... I didn't quite get the purpose of it, but I assume it will make sense more in a future?
So thanks for the update. It was a good chapter again :)
Author's Response: Thanxs for the review!rnrnAnd all that is done, serves a purpose. :)rnrnxoxo
Date: 07/27/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 26 - I Really Hate You.
ooh plzplz update sooon=] tom deserved it though he cant cheat on billa=[=[
update soooon plz thx=]=]
Date: 07/27/09 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 26 - I Really Hate You.
kinky kinky lol i like =)
Date: 07/27/09 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 26 - I Really Hate You.
oh that was BRILIANT!!!
i hate those kind of ends though...you know the ones that have you ripping your hair out for MORE MORE MORE!!! xD
hehe. so please....more?
Author's Response: Awe...I'm srry. And yeah, I really do hate those kind of endings to. Evidently, I wrote one! haha I'm srry.rnrnBut I'll see wat I can do for ya! ;D
Date: 07/22/09 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 25 - So Who Is She?
Ohh we know more about Tom.
to do italics you put [i] at the front of the text then you put [/ i] at the end of it. but get rid of the space first.
hope that helps.
Thanks for updating.
xx
Author's Response: Mhm. Even if its just a bit. And you'll get to know more in time too.rnAnd thanxs. It totally does help.rnxoxo
Date: 07/22/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 25 - So Who Is She?
Okay, a little more information about Tom's past. He is quite charming in his own weird way and if we readers are totally falling for him, then probably I can't blame Nathalie for being so.. possessive, I guess. Althought I don't like her at all :).
Like you said yourself too, it was kind of a short and maybe littlebit confusing, but hey, it was still ok :). And I'm already waiting for the next chapter and the answer for the question, who is dying to see Bill. A real cliffhanger you gave us here :).
About those italics.. At least I make it by using code < i > TEXT HERE < / i >. Of couse you just have to write a code without spaces between marks and letters, but that should do it. I hope you understand, what I mean?
Author's Response: Yes, just a bit more about him. I suppose he is in an odd sense of a way, charming. rnAnd as for Nathalie, I write the character and I don't like her. But thats because I'm writing her not to like her. lolzrnrnAnd yes it was short. Ugh I hate the short thing. Its quite an issue. And srry for the cliffhanger. I really need to stop that. lolzrnrnAnd thanxs for the italics bit. It's goona be put to use. lolz
Date: 07/22/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 25 - So Who Is She?
I'm starting to go back into my "I hate Tom" mode. Not sure why O_O, lol.
Author's Response: Awe...poor Tom. haharnrnAnd I can think of a million reasons as to why you should go back into that mode. But unfortunetly I can't tell you any of 'em. :D
Date: 07/22/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 25 - So Who Is She?
update osoon plz thx=]
Date: 07/22/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 25 - So Who Is She?
oh i thought it was good! but i really want to read the next chapter!!! xD
and i hope tom wasn't serious about that girl wanting to fuck him....
Author's Response: good!! lolz :)rnrnand as for Tom...do you think he lies?
Date: 07/22/09 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 25 - So Who Is She?
o0o, such a lovely last sentence. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: It is, isn't it? :)
Date: 07/20/09 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Where Are We?
DAMN!!!
grah! hurryhurryhurry!!!!
i love this story!!
review really soon!!
PLEASE!!!!
Date: 07/18/09 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Where Are We?
Thanks for the update ans answering our pretty pleases about that sex scene! Sex in an Escalade can NEVER be bad... Grr :). And always enjoyable and hot to read about fingering, both Bill fingering himself and Tom fingering him.
I guess Bill is really going to meet the ghosts of Tom's past now. Maybe I remember wrong, but was it like Bill actually didn't know so much about Tom's past and chapter(s) about it was only a flashback for revealing the background? This should be interresting.
Author's Response: No problem! lolz And I sure hope not. I myself don't mind to indulge in one of those scenes occassionally. haharnrnAnd yeah, he just might. And no, Bill doesn't know a lot about Tom's past. But no one really does, including the reader. hahaha XDrnrnAnd I hope it is.
Date: 07/18/09 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Where Are We?
Whoa! That was good!!!!!! Please update soon!!