ugh my god that was GOOD!!! amazing really.

Author's Response: Thanxs so much!!!

O_O that was hot hahah

Author's Response: =)rnrnThanxs!!! hehern

No way?! Tear you apart??? One of my favourite songs and in a weird way it has been reminding me about this story already earlier when I've been listening to it. You read minds, did you know that? :)

And btw, if I have to get my laptop fixed, I blame on you for it, because I'm pretty sure it just overheated and melted :D. Nice, nice smut... A little bit too gentle for my taste, but maybe they need to be like that sometimes and hey, they are totally in love with each other and lovers need to be gentle sometimes so Tom can be brutal and rough again later *grinning and hoping*.

I'm wondering if we are getting a character death soon, because I kind of hope we are. Some serious fucked up shit...:D

(And yeah, I know, I'm in minority on that Bill-problem, but I can deal with him :D)

Author's Response: No I wasn't aware. :) I thought the song was a really good pick. I've had it in my head since I wrote the prologue haha. It's a fav of mine too!!rnrnI wanted to make it fairly gentle because it was Bill's first time and all, so I didn't want Tom to totally ruin him rite now. rnrnAs for the character death. I'm actually going to explain that when I update next time.rnSo be sure to check that.rnThanxs for the review sweets!!! :D

hahahh yeah i like the ending too :D

Wohoo! Two chapters while I was out of my computer? Great! I really love the fact that you update fast. It makes a fic easier to read and a waiting less torturing.

First I was surprised a little about Andi, but then again.. It was quite expected that he would appear like this. I was wondering about David's motives to call, because I'm still confused why he let Bill and Tom leave. Guess it's all about control and charm. After all.

I have to say that somehow I find Bill a little bit annoying here at the both chapters. Mostly he is okay, but sometimes I just don't like him as him being so bitchy. He seems to be on the edge of being submissive and fighting back. This control issue came up here quite clearly and I believe it's going to be a main theme in the relationship between Bill and Tom. To me it seems like their both roles are shaking a littlebit, but I honestly don't believe they're going to change that much after all. Bill is rapidly learning how to handle Tom.

I have to say also that I like that interesting tension between fear of being hurt and desire to be so. As Bill being able to control that, actually wanting to be hurt by Tom, is the key to keep control on himself. But is that desire eventually causing him a pain that can't be controlled? How far Tom is ready to go and how long Bill is going to test the limits? Interesting...

Author's Response: I try to update as fast as I can. Internet issues can get in the way at times tho lolz. Or I suppose just plain laziness. :PrnI have to say, lol, that I think you're like the only person that finds Bill annoying at times. A lot of people like the more bitchy Bill. As for Bill learning to handle Tom..Idk. That could all change. haharnrnThnxs for the review and Stay tuned!!! =)

It's really interesting. I'm definitely looking forward to it. :)
thanks for updating.
xx

Author's Response: :) No problem.

Ha! I knew it was Andreas x]

As I started reading the chapter, I started to realize (and I don't know if you wrote it somewhere before and I missed it or what), this sort of reminds me of Girl, Interrupted. Kinda/sorta/almost/not really/idk, lol.

But yea, good chapter x].

Author's Response: Haha. You figured it out! You probably couldn't have gone wrong tho lolrnAnd yeah, I actually can't remember if I have brought it up or not (I'll have to check), but that sorta inspired me to write this. I was watching it and got the idea. Then I hadn't seen many Institute fics.rnrnAnd thanxs. :)

I really like this story, and I'm suprised by the number of readings (it's so few!), since I thought it would be many more.

I didn't plan on reading the story myself though, since, I don't know.. I just wasn't very excited of the idea of reading it. I dunno why.

When is next chappie coming up?

Author's Response: Ahh...yes I have thought that myself, that it did seems so few. But I'm just amazed that its actually gotten as much attention as it has.rnrnAnd I completely understand what you mean. I feel much the smae sometimes about stories, and I don't find it very offensive. You just end up reading something you never really cared to before. *shrugs*rnrnrnBut thank you for choosing to finally read, and to review. Means a lot.rnNext chap coming up real quick!!

that was...intense :D

Course we don't mind and we won't if u'll put more often,thx for caring how Bill says,It's really nice this one

Author's Response: Hahaha, I'll keep trying.rnThanxs for your review!! :)