Date: 08/21/09 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 32 - And On Our Way
“Oh, well good. But you mind giving me your hand so I could shove it down my pants?”
i laughed alot when i read that!!!!
Author's Response: Ahahaha, well good I'm glad. Try and lighten it up every now and then. lolz
Date: 08/20/09 03:47 am Title: Chapter 32 - And On Our Way
Awwww... I like Tomi being nice. Very unusual though...
Author's Response: Mhmmm...very unusual isn't it? :)
Date: 08/19/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 32 - And On Our Way
plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: will do!! :)
Date: 08/19/09 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 32 - And On Our Way
Omg. You are the absolute best! Today just happens to be my birthday! Not only did I get the awesome sneak peak of TH's new single BUT I also get a chappie from this story! Best thing ever lol. But I just wanted you to know that I'm still in love with this and none of your chapters suck sweetie. :)
Author's Response: Awe. Thank you! And happy B-day!! I was so excited to hear the sneak peak of their new song too. lolz. I'm glad to hear you still like the story, and thanxs so much sweets!rnEnjoy the rest! :D
Date: 08/19/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 32 - And On Our Way
hahah glad tom was a bit normal towards the end XD
Author's Response: hahaha yeah. i really like the end. lolz
Date: 08/19/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter 32 - And On Our Way
Filler or not, I enjoyed it =].
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanxs!!rnrnShould be up soon. :D
Date: 08/18/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 32 - And On Our Way
i ALWAYS love your adds!! :D
i love this story :D and that add was great.....but short! :( im always wanting more xD
Author's Response: Thanxs!! Glad to hear. rnAnd yeah, I know ti was short. Srry about that. :(rnrnBut I do promise to give more!! :D
Date: 08/14/09 07:33 am Title: Chapter 31 - You...And Than Me
i like this chapter, i dunnoo theres something about it!
You get the feeling that maybe theres something truly human about Tom!
idk lol :/
but i like it :P
Author's Response: Well thanxs!! :)rnrnMuch thanxs for the review too. rnxoxo
Date: 08/13/09 02:53 am Title: Chapter 31 - You...And Than Me
I thought it was AMAZING! Good job! Very well written :D
Author's Response: Thank You!!rnrnxoxo
Date: 08/12/09 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 31 - You...And Than Me
I like it. im glad Tom's opened up abit :)
Thnks for updating.
xx
Author's Response: No problem!!
Date: 08/12/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 31 - You...And Than Me
the beginning confused me DX but when tom starts talking it makes more sense :D but well...tom isnt completely weak yah? i mean he managed to fend off his "mother" for a while..right? ahh idk what im saying lol
Author's Response: The beginning had a purpose, but srry. :(rnAnd yeah..I suppose your rite. lolz
Date: 08/12/09 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 31 - You...And Than Me
oh it was great!! really briliant!! xD
very insiteful. and i think its sweat tom came back for him. and i think i know his weakness!!! i think its bill :D
Author's Response: I had hoped! And yeah, I must agree with you. I think Bill is his weakness. :)
Date: 08/12/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 31 - You...And Than Me
plz updae soon thx=]
Date: 08/12/09 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 31 - You...And Than Me
Sucks? What? No way in hell! I loved this chapter... No, I adored this chapter! Just.. wow! I don't know why, but you gave us one heck of a chapter again. I'm so deep in this story that you don't even know it. I'm so trapped with Bill and Tom.. especially Tom.. in Alcatraz too and I have no desire to ever get out of there.
Dialogue worked too, so don't worry about that. This one just really melt my heart. Thank you, it was great. It really was, no flattering here :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm totally glad you liked the chap and it wasn't all that bad. Had me worried because of the dialogue, only in the snese that there was a lot of it. And a lot of it came from Tom. But than again, thats a good thing! :)
Date: 08/12/09 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 31 - You...And Than Me
Woah, lol. That was intense. Then again, everything with an angry and upset Tom is x]. You know, I think I'm like.. bipolar with this story, lol. One moment, basically the whole story, I was like "UGH Tom's an ass!" Then reading this chapter, I want to like.. give him a hug... if I wasn't so afraid of him lol.
But the rollercoaster of a plot is a good thing, it keeps me guessing and it keeps this amazing story amazing =].
Good job, and much, much love
Author's Response: Thanxs so much!! As much as I know where I'm going with this story...I still have no rnclue! XD And ugh, yeah, I think I would be terrified if I met Tom and he was this way. :)rnrnThanxs for the review! And much love rite back
Date: 08/09/09 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 30 - And?
ah i loved it just as much as every other chapter in this xD
its absolutely briliant. cant wait for more really
Author's Response: thanxs a bundle! more up quick! :)
Date: 08/08/09 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 30 - And?
ehh its david huh? XD oops if i'm wrong
Author's Response: I don't even know why I ask people to guess or anything.. XD hahaharnJust read the chappie! lolz
Date: 08/08/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 30 - And?
uhhh ohhhh D:
ohhhh I can't wait til the next chapter x]
Author's Response: hehehe...I'm hoping its a gooder!! XD
Date: 08/08/09 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 30 - And?
plz update sooon thx=]
Author's Response: Will do!! Did! Sorta...:D
Date: 08/08/09 11:16 am Title: Chapter 3 - Who's Who?
okay, i'm a new reader and normally i'd wait til i'd finish reading the whole thing before I review, but I just have to have a little random outburst here:
when i saw the words 'narrasistic pyschopath' i was like : TOM IT'S FUCKING TOM... and yay, i was right...
oh and bu having multiple personality.. *loves it*
i'm friggen enthralled by this... an you know, it's hard to be enthralled at quarter past one in the morning... i love this, and now i shall shut up and go read the rest.
Author's Response: Awe...thanxs so much lolz. Enthralled at the like wat, third chapter? haha well thanxs.rnand yeah, couldn't have picked a better one for Bu. Honestly I just wanted to play around with different personality's and descriptions lolz.rnThanxs so much for reading and I hope you enjoy(ed) the rest! :D