Date: 01/12/11 08:58 pm Title: Home is Where the Heart Is
God, this story made me cry. I don't know why though. It was good though.
Date: 01/12/11 08:53 pm Title: Home
Be careful what you wish for, it may actually come true. I really like this story. I'm going to keep reading.
Date: 12/01/09 01:01 pm Title: Home is Where the Heart Is
This was well good
Date: 10/31/09 08:40 pm Title: Home
I absolutely ADORE this story. This and "Dreaming Of You" had me bawling for hours. I think that's because you write it so well. I'm sure that's how Tom and Bill feel in real life; they couldn't possibly live without each other. Their other half.
Date: 10/16/09 09:18 am Title: Bill's POV
It was hard for me to read this story, just cause I'm a twin and I can't even bring myself to imagine life without him, but I just wanted to let you know that I think you've really captured Tom's emotions well, especially the pain he feels upon losing his brother. Good job overall :) painful for me to read, but a good story.
Date: 09/24/09 04:59 pm Title: Bill's POV
Wanna know what I found out abou fevers? They are usually caused by the body fighting an infection. The fever will go away when the body has fought the infection and won. Even if you take any type of medication, it wil not cure the fever, it will only relieve it. The best thing you can do is rest, drink plenty of water and let the fever run its course. If the fever gets too high, usually above 38.9 in an adult, you may have to go and see the doctor, that means the infection is winning and your body is having a tough time fighting it. I never knew the fever was a good thing :D
Date: 08/19/09 08:17 pm Title: Bill's POV
:) corny but lovely!
Date: 08/19/09 08:13 pm Title: Home is Where the Heart Is
AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. :) I couldn't help but feel hot when Tom did, sweaty when he did. o_o geez. THAT much I was into the story.
Date: 08/19/09 08:05 pm Title: So Sick
Awww. D: That's very sad... described perfectly! My compliments. :)
Date: 08/19/09 07:52 pm Title: Home
:o whoa! It's a massive idea for a fic and I love it! :) The way you changed things is just lovely, omg if I lived through it I'd loose it badly...
Date: 08/10/09 10:16 am Title: Bill's POV
I enjoyed reading all the story! That was really good, a little cliché but so cheesy, i loved it!
Date: 08/09/09 08:42 pm Title: Bill's POV
aww that was so sweet... i jope never says something he will regret later
Date: 08/09/09 05:24 pm Title: Bill's POV
Aww no it was sweet and nice to hear Bill's point of view during Toms little ordeal.
Date: 08/09/09 05:05 pm Title: Bill's POV
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! YOU SCARED ME THERE FOR A MOMENT! DON'T TAKE BILLA AWAY FROM HIS TOMI! It's detrimental to their health!!!
Date: 08/09/09 04:54 pm Title: Bill's POV
aw this is cute!
Date: 08/09/09 09:58 am Title: Bill's POV
Awww, Alice! I'm glad I inspired you!
And that was cute. And short. Kinda weird that Tom didn't wake up when the doctor did check ups.I would do everything to wake up from a nightmare like that!
Date: 08/09/09 04:54 am Title: Bill's POV
aww what a cute story!
Date: 08/09/09 04:06 am Title: Bill's POV
I liked it, it's nice to know what Bill was going through while Tom was suffering himself. I think it makes a good addition to the story.
Date: 08/09/09 03:57 am Title: Bill's POV
I just read this story from the beginning today. I must say that I love love looooved it. :) Amazing story, and thanks for the new song addiction. XD