Date: 09/06/11 11:59 pm Title: chapter one.
Awww, absolutely adorable!!!
Date: 06/05/10 09:50 am Title: chapter one.
ohhhh i can imagine this iīm sure Tom can be overprotective for his little brother not at this rate but i like the story
p.s. haha donīt mess with Bill!!!
Date: 06/29/09 11:41 am Title: chapter one.
This was so amazing!
I really, really loved this story; Tom was just SO sweet to Bill, protecting him and all.
And I loved Bill in this one too; the way he continued to let Tom take care of him and the way he depended on him was just so, so sweet.
Date: 07/11/08 08:43 pm Title: chapter one.
I love this story. I have read it so many times. At the beginning you called those burns Chinese burns, I remember when my dad used to give them to me, they were painful. But we called them Indian burns. Anyways, this story was so sweet.
Date: 06/21/08 04:59 pm Title: chapter one.
So sweet, love it.
Date: 05/14/08 08:54 pm Title: chapter one.
*I think it's so adorable and sweet and nice and...how Tom always protects Bill.
I love the way you showed it in this fic!
*“So what do you want to do?”
“Go back to the hotel and fuck?”
-> I like him being so right to the point
*Yeah Saki ftw!
*Aww poor Tom, wants to get laid and Bill falls asleep xD
* Bill's birthday gift to Tom is SO sweet :)
I loved this fic!!
Date: 12/27/07 10:08 am Title: chapter one.
WTF, where did the other chapter go?? It was perfect how come you deleted it?
Author's Response: i didn't have anything to really continue with actually :srni was going to leave it one shot anyway..
Date: 12/27/07 09:36 am Title: chapter one.
I love it as it is! I don't think you should write any more of it, it's perfect!
Date: 12/26/07 12:55 pm Title: chapter one.
please, please continue it is so sweet!!!
Date: 12/25/07 06:41 pm Title: chapter one.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I love it!! Yeah yeah yeah add mooooooooooooooore!!
Date: 12/25/07 06:32 pm Title: chapter one.
SAOOOO GOOOODDDD :D i really loved this. the detailing was so good! please write moreee!
cant wait for next chapter ;)
Date: 12/25/07 12:05 pm Title: chapter one.
woa! long chapter XD this is awesome! please continue :D
Date: 12/25/07 09:43 am Title: chapter one.
This was my present-fic this christmas lol
I loved the passage of time and the last scene was really hot
Date: 12/25/07 09:25 am Title: chapter one.
wow, loose cannon tom :O
the whole thing was... weirdly sweet.
Date: 12/25/07 09:08 am Title: chapter one.
Great job hun!! Like always :D
Date: 12/25/07 08:59 am Title: chapter one.
Aww, so sweet! Damn, I hate people who judge you because of your looks. I'm called Emo and Gothic too and I'm not, I'm just myself!!! Like them...