Date: 10/25/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
yay! Thanks for the update, i look forward to the next one! =)
Date: 10/25/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
ROAD TRIIIIIPPP!!!!!1
I mean, ugh girl! You string me along with every little word. How? It'd be like trying to describe how Bill's magic works (This Bill or "real" Bill's!)
Thanks for another awesome chappie, can't waaaait for more
Date: 10/25/09 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
I love Bill with his sweet crush and I love Tom and his wide eyed wonder. This story is so wonderful. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I confess, I love both of them myself, silly as they sometimes are. So glad you're still reading this one! :D
Date: 10/25/09 08:58 am Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
...Though to be perfectly honest, Bill enjoyed the work and the company of the clockworker in equal measure... - i'm leaning just a wee bit more to the "company" of clockworker Tomas =P
...On one condition: Saki will escort you... - heee, party-pooper *pouts*
...but Nicole had grown to adulthood among servants treated as family and with commoners as friends, and she had learned to listen to those less privileged... - ah, a humble one, she is
...With all the time he'd spent on clockworking, he'd mostly avoided the courting and flirting done by others his age, and he was sure he'd misread some of Bill's intentions... - *gasps* THE master clockworker NOT courting??? aint that a waste of skin =P
..."You are going to love them as well," Bill promised him, and darted back in to press his lips fleetingly against Tom's cheek... - blup blup blup *melting*
* more Bill und Tom? - yes please! ^____^
Author's Response: Hee. Yes, I do believe that the company of a certain handsome clockworker is the primary reason Bill's so interested in the work. :P And I think Bill is going to introduce Tom to the joys of courting in the near future. Hopefully that'll be just as melt-worthy as this first little kiss! ^_~ Thank you so much for sticking with this fic.
Date: 10/25/09 08:35 am Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
Aaaawww... AAAAAAAAWWW!!! Bill kissed Tom!!!XDXD *giggles* And Tom was completely dazed.. So CUTE!!!XD I can imagine his cute face right now lololz...XD
I'm a bit confused with Nat and Nicole though..O__O Maybe it's just me not paying attention much to them ugh...>__
Author's Response: Haha, Tom really is the cute and clueless one in this fic. No worries if you don't get what Nat and Nicole are up to! It's meant to be confusing for now, but with any luck it'll fall into place the way I intend it to, later on. ^_~
Date: 10/25/09 06:11 am Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
Bill and Tom moments do make me aww, even if I wish there was greater opportunity to wallow in them for long periods of time. Everything seems to be ticking along!
Author's Response: You're going to like the next chapter then. Honestly I'm just stunned you read this within a day of me posting it! :O
Date: 10/25/09 04:36 am Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
Lol. When you said "that's the last we'll see of the girls for awhile," I thought you meant Bill and Tom. Oh dear me. Yes! More Bill and Tom! They need it.
Author's Response: Poor girly boys, lol. I can't blame you for thinking that way! And we will definitely see more of them in the next few chapters, so keep an eye out!
Date: 10/25/09 02:25 am Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
I'm so excited to see this! Bill is so obvious when talking to his parents, and it's very telling that he's now started to bite his lip like Tom. They are darling together. I kinda laughed at Nicole getting busted for trying to pretend she was something she's not. Silly girl. I'm interested to see what's going to happen there, but I'm not sad at all that we'll be seeing a lot more Bill and Tom, too. :)
Author's Response: I'm always excited to post it, too, because I'm a dork like that. :P I do enjoy writing the random little plotty bits like Nicole's, but I have to admit that Bill and Tom are my favorites. So glad you're sticking with this one!
Date: 10/25/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
Forget decorum or what is right and wrong. THESE BOYS ARE FALLING FOR EACH OTHER HARD AND THEY CAN'T EVEN PREPARE FOR IT IN ADVANCE! It almost makes me sad, but I know that they'll be fine, somehow.
Author's Response: Silly boys. But they will work it out eventually, I promise! Maybe even soon. ;)
Date: 10/25/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 9: Gaining Momentum
The boys are so cute! I'm curious about the Nicole&Nat stuff as well, but the boys! *_* I will stick with you as long as you need since you keep gifting us with such moments. ;)
Author's Response: Hee! I know it. I'm looking forward to writing more shameless boyfluff and cluelessness, and maybe even some possessive Tom in the near future. ;) Thank you for sticking with me!
Date: 10/15/09 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
I love this :D And I also checked the FanArt ;) Love that as well xD I hope you continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 10/14/09 09:47 am Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
-hearts-
Date: 10/10/09 11:26 am Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
I've just caught up with this story, and I wanted to let you know how phenomenal I think it is. You've created such a beautiful, complete world, compelling and rich in detail. This story doesn't read like fanfiction, it reads like a novel.
Date: 10/04/09 07:38 am Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
Bill is insanely talented.
Date: 10/04/09 12:56 am Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
ooh how cozy :P
Date: 10/03/09 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
Ok, just want to say, this is my favorite story EVER!!! I love it so much, it's so real. I can SEE what's happening in my head like a movie, and a really well-photographed movie at that. :) Thank you so much for writing this! I can't wait for the next chapters!!!!!
Date: 10/03/09 11:11 am Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
they are so cute together, i love them!! you write their interactions so charmingly. =)
Date: 10/03/09 05:13 am Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
Simone and Jorg's conversation made me a little nervous, has to be said, but Tom and Bill are incredibly adorable. Glad for the more regular updates that are to be coming from you now! :D
Date: 10/02/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
That was incredibly, unbearably sweet. And I love frogs, of course. They are the most gentle creatures I have ever come into contact with. One would think maybe it would be a fawn, but they can get antsy, and they freighten easily. Their hooves are quite sharp, and hurt if they kick you. I think I spelled some words wrong, but I'm sure you understand me.
I can't wait for another update.
Date: 10/02/09 10:45 am Title: Chapter 8: Evening Falls
awww my goodness they are so sweet together and I am so intrigued as to what Bills mother and Jorg were speaking about.
how exciting - I can not wait for more