Date: 09/24/09 06:41 am Title: Chapter 7: Wisdom Bestowed
Aww Bill's got a crush! I love this story so very much. *squeezes it*
Author's Response: He does indeed! And I'm so glad you like it. :D
Date: 09/24/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 7: Wisdom Bestowed
heheh - cute ending i cant wait to hear more =)
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! Glad you liked it.
Date: 09/24/09 04:35 am Title: Chapter 7: Wisdom Bestowed
<3!! This was a very pleasant surprise! :D You're too sweet. Also, the boys are too cute, all wanting to impress each other and being so proper about it. Mostly. I hope the notion of visiting Bill suits Tom very well too.
Author's Response: I meant to have this chapter posted for you in a more timely fashion, but. Better late than never? >_> I believe the notion of visiting Bill will suit Tom quite well, though you'll find out for sure in the next chapter!
Date: 09/20/09 07:24 am Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
So I've finally read this ♥ I loved it and wish I hadn't waited so long. Bill's little jealousies are adorable and you really do paint this story out in such rich colour. Gorgeous ♥
Date: 09/12/09 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
Of course, Andreas, of course.
Date: 09/02/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
Ooo, I love how you have this XD it started off a little slow, but then it picked up, and I'm sad that the chapter ended :( but oh wow, I'm imagining that whole thing of magic with Bill and it's just amazing. :D Dunja too, I like her reaction, because well it seems like there could be some sort of secret there. :) Georg and Gustav bit was just too great, idk, it was just a really nice part to put in there, I like both their personalities here. And then the way you had Bill feeling about Tom XD that was done really well I think :) you do such an amazing job with this whole universe, I just want to go in it, and expierence everything that they are expeirencing n_n
Date: 09/01/09 12:27 am Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
...and it was Gordon who should've had the Master Clockworker's post and quarters... - aaawwww... *sniff sniff*
...The second timepiece was twin to the first in every way, but it had been made of light wood and gold instead... - you know, my mind snapped to Bill when u mentioned the dark&silver piece..then back at Tom, light&gold...am i correct? *certainly loves the first one more* ^___^
...You're beautiful...Never before had Tom been so mesmerized by anything that wasn't crafted of metal... - *LOVESssssssssss*
...Georg lived for those rare smiles, more or less, and the sight of this one made him grin... - ah yes, the prized smiles from Gustav
...Why don't you ease his nerves a bit instead of staring him half to death?... - georg! ur no fun *huffs*
...I've never been to a lady's luncheon, and I have no idea what Cogs are. Is. Are?... - aaawwww, cute tom! so innocent
...Just as I'd imagined it... - me too! amazing show of teamwork =P
...Bill thought he detected a hint of reproach in her tone... - yeah, well, bill's not just ANY modern mage, aint he?? *winks*
...My name's Andreas... - sit back and say to myself, yeah i thought so =P
* missed your fic so0o0o0o0o0o much! just so u know, it's also kinda of an inspiration to my own fic.. thought u write far, far better than i could ever ^__^
Date: 08/31/09 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
I know I suck at commenting, but every chapter you post makes my day, so I did a bit of fanart. I hope I didn't get things entirely wrong and that you like it.
Date: 08/30/09 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
Oh, so good! Is that card game something you came up with? Did you create complete rules and everything?
Author's Response: Yes, Cogs is a game of my own invention. ^_~ I have complete rules to it and I'd like to sketch out a real, playable deck of cards for it someday, but er. I'm terrible at art. *laughs* Thank you so much; glad you liked it!
Date: 08/30/09 07:14 pm Title: Prologue: Children of Fortune
This story is really awesome! :D Since I love clockwork and magic/magework, this is a perfect story for me! I really didn't expect Bill and Tom to have that kind of hair color, can't really imagine it, but it sounds nice! I'm anticipating the next chapter!
Date: 08/30/09 01:48 am Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
oooooh was not expecting that at the end :D
Author's Response: Surprise twist! Hee. I was hoping no one would see that coming. :D
Date: 08/29/09 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
So much detail and I have quite a picture in my head right now. Tom is so cute and Bill is adorable as usual. I would love to see Bill's mage work come to life on a screen because it just seems so real. It would be a really cool effect. It was so alive with color and detail that I could actually see it too. Maybe I just have a really active imagination, but that kind of thing is amazing to me. I'm wondering though. Something is happening and I can't place what it will be. Dunja and Joseph said they had never seem a modern mage conjure what Bill did. I'm curious what that will do. I think it has been said that Bill is more powerful then most are at his age but I'm curious. I felt bad for him that the table was all wet when he was done. I think that would be really scary for me to not realize I had done such a thing. Beautiful once again,
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad that you can picture the magework. Bill's workings are some of the most vivid details in my head, so I always hope to capture them properly in writing! And it's true, something is happening here besides the overall plot. ^_~ Bill is extremely powerful, but he hasn't seen reason to use his abilities to their fullest extent... until now, little showoff that he is. No, I really do love him, and it would be unsettling to cause something like that without realizing, wouldn't it? Anyway, thank you so much!
Date: 08/29/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
Bill's little hints of jealous feelings are the best of this chapter,jow he tries to call Tom attention and cut any interest Nicole could have in him - I think he will find soon he doesn't have to worry, Tom seems amazed by him on his own xD
Author's Response: I loved writing Bill's jealousy here, so believe me, there will be more in future. ^_~ But you're right, Tom is definitely amazed by his prince, so he'll reassure Bill on that count eventually!
Date: 08/29/09 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: Definitely will, as soon as possible. Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 08/29/09 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fateful Acquaintance
YOU UPDATED!! YAY!! You're ALIVE!!XD LOLOL..XD
Aaaawww.. I see Tom x Bill here and it makes me..*giggles*
I'm still confused of what Nath's doing..@__@ Geeezz.. I think I need to reread this all over again..:O
Thanks for the update!!^^
Author's Response: I am indeed alive! XD And no worries about Nat and what she's up to - you're supposed to be confused at this point. ^_~ Everything will come clear eventually, I promise, and thank you for reading!
Date: 07/30/09 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: Bonds Reforged
oh good, i love their friendship already!! its developing so nicely, nice job. i look forward to more. :)
Date: 07/25/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 5: Bonds Reforged
:D
Date: 07/22/09 05:25 am Title: Chapter 5: Bonds Reforged
Eeee! *flails* I'm coming at this a little later than I would have liked due to real life and distractions. But oh my goodness, I'm so glad this is still going because it is absolutely lovely in every aspect of the word,especially Bill and Tom's interactions. I can barely stand to wait for more. :) *bounces eagerly in her seat*
Date: 07/20/09 03:14 am Title: Chapter 5: Bonds Reforged
Ahhhhhhh, Bill's crush in this is absolutely delicious! It's so refreshing to read; so many fics go right for the lusty kind of crushes (which are great in their own right, of course XD), this is very sweet and fluttery, and I just love it!
I can't remember if I reviewed this before, but I really think that you should go for getting it published as original fiction when it's finished, if you're considering it. It's not even terribly far into the story just yet, but it's so rich and the visuals are lush, I really love this world, and I look forward to getting to know it even more :)
Date: 07/16/09 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 5: Bonds Reforged
haha aww that was so cute >.
Author's Response: Hee, thank you. :)