Date: 06/01/11 10:38 pm Title: 7; stay with me
I really love it! Please continue writing~! It's very suspenseful and you have such a way with words that is simple, yet eligant and flat out awesome. Great job!
Date: 12/25/10 07:17 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
Loved it!
Date: 12/25/10 07:06 pm Title: 5; Butterfly Kisses at Bedtime
Loved it!
Date: 12/12/09 11:25 pm Title: 7; stay with me
Totally like it! More plz! (=
Date: 12/12/09 01:08 pm Title: 7; stay with me
i love it! write moreeeee :333
Date: 12/12/09 12:55 am Title: 7; stay with me
Love it!
Cant wait for more!! :D
Date: 09/28/09 10:12 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
please write more i love it alreay lol i love your decriptions i can make a movie in my head lmao
Date: 08/02/09 06:48 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
Are you not planning to continue this great story?
Author's Response: i will im just hella blocked and bus right now, im trying to think of how to continue it
Date: 06/12/09 01:21 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
You should deffinetley continue!
Please Don't EVER delete this!
Date: 06/09/09 05:45 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
Still Love it!
Date: 06/09/09 05:34 pm Title: 5; Butterfly Kisses at Bedtime
Loved it! Keep writting deffinetly!
I'll be waiting for the chapters ahead!
;) Good luck!,
Lacy Gray
Date: 05/01/09 10:25 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
I actually Really like it! Oh I have an Idea Tom did want his daughter! But Bill is an Ass and threatened her life if he had anything to do with her. So like what if he does secretly like an 'anyonoms' benificiary Sends Her a letter and pays for Ari's private school and all of her medical stuff? Her and Tom run into each other they go back to his place. He leaves the room and she comes across all the forms pretaining to Ari?
Author's Response: hmm i like it...guess youll have to keep reading to see if i use it ;D haha evil tori muahahaha lol
Date: 04/29/09 02:05 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
whoa the end sounded like slash..... lol i like the story plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha that was NOT what i was going for...lmao!!rnits the story version of what really happened...not what she told her daughter..but the more detailed version....i hope that clears it up for some people...im sorry im a wierd writer...lol
Date: 04/28/09 11:54 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
I like it(: you should go on with this story!
Date: 04/28/09 11:15 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
yes i like it
Date: 04/28/09 11:00 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
I didn't really understand the last part, but the rest was great.
Date: 04/28/09 09:54 pm Title: 6; Keep the Door Open a Little
I like it a lot!
Date: 04/27/09 04:58 pm Title: 5; Butterfly Kisses at Bedtime
ahww poor little girl..:( more please!!
Date: 04/25/09 11:28 pm Title: 5; Butterfly Kisses at Bedtime
plz continue this is a very gud intro!!!!!!!!!! =]