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Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/14 09:53 pm Title: Chapter five

OMG!!!! This story is awesome! Please please please update!!!!!! Pwetty pwetty pwease??? 😢

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/12 05:41 pm Title: Chapter five

Oh my god! I HATE you! I decided to read Everything Fades to Black realizing there was a sequel that hadn't been updated in, like, four years, but I read it anyway thinking most authors make a sequel to a COMPLETED story that doesn't end on a cliffie. But Nooooooo not you, you decide to split what would be a perfectly acceptable single story into two and end the first as a MAJOR cliffie so I would HAVE to read the sequel. Thanks, now I love this thing, and it'll probably never be finished.

Seriously, this is a great fic and I really hope you finish it. I would love to find out why Tom really created these personalities to begin with , if Jorg really abused them, and if that's why Simone left him , or if something else happened, what.

Reviewer: myfixation Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/12 11:37 pm Title: Chapter one

This is so intriguing! Please update?

Reviewer: Aurora WolfeTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/11 07:02 pm Title: Chapter five

wow, this is so weird and confusing but amazing at the same time. It was written really well and i can't wait to find out what happens next, its a shame there are many fics out there like this, please update soon!!! xxxx

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 03:30 pm Title: Chapter five

Are you going to complete this? I read the 1st part and the sequel is just as good.

Reviewer: lantiiii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 03:42 am Title: Chapter five

I really hope you finish this story. I would say it was one of my two favourite stories ever. I love it so much and really can't wait to see how it ends
great writing
xx

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 12:02 am Title: Chapter five

uh!!! thats it?!?!?! this was so good!!! I hope you update again. this series is so damn full of intrigue. I can't seem to get enough.

Reviewer: saliorellie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter five

i love it please update

Reviewer: lantiiii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 07:11 am Title: Chapter five

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND IT KILLS ME TO NOT SEE IT BEING FINISH ... I really need the next chapter! great writing

Reviewer: lantiiii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter five

I love this story so much and have been kind of attached to it lately .... it's and amazing piece and I would love to see what happens next

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE

Reviewer: lantiiii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter five

I love your story so much ... you are an amazing writer and I have read every single chapter of both stories and can't wait for the next ... deffinately one of my favourites out of anything I've ever read

xx

Reviewer: _humanoid Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/10 12:40 am Title: Chapter five

*sigh* are you ever going to update this story?

its ok if you never do... so many ppl on this site keep abandoning such great stories.

Author's Response: I am going to try, I've had a lot going on. I just started a new fanfiction archive site. It a multi-fandom site for twincest. Thank you for liking my story. If I ever do finish the next episode will be about cocoon and Judith. rnrn----rnrnwww.tabootwins.com

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/10 05:02 am Title: Chapter five

Finally found this story, i was looking forever it seems... and im totally in love with it! i love how Bill is sorta making Tom want him~ more twin love please? i hope you update this, sugar~ i love you and this story makes my world complete... ~hugs~

Reviewer: phoenixZrhage Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/10 04:26 pm Title: Chapter five

Oh I just read though the first five chapters and desided I have to track it. I read the first part and started bouncing up and down when I read the last chapter. Hehe. It's amazing! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: barely-human Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 10:07 pm Title: Chapter five

Real great sequel to everything fades into black, really, this is more like some kind of insight writing or something but I quite dig it as it is. Will you update soon?

Reviewer: BillsFreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 09:06 am Title: Chapter five

Yeah! I found it!

I really loved Everything Fades to Black, but I never found the sequel (don't ask me why) untill now, so I'm super happy. I think this story is nothing short of amazing, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. The personlati or personalities, however you put it, are captivating and even though you are "killing them of" in this part of the story they just become a part og Tom instead and it's beautiful in some way - don't know if you understand what I'm saying, but the most impartant thing is that I want you to uptade as soon as possible cause Im loving this story too.. 

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/09 01:06 am Title: Chapter five

OMG... really, i love this storie, from the very begining its just so hella interesting! the personalities, toms life, n all! gosh... its osm

Reviewer: Billy_xx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 02:08 pm Title: Chapter five

I loved it!
It's a beautiful story.. it really is :)

Reviewer: billxbesitztxmeinxherz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 11:27 am Title: Chapter five

I think the real Tom should come back to the real world when his alter ego is fucking Bill *evil grin* excellant story

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 09:29 am Title: Chapter five

Horrible that his mom knew, but turned away :o

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