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Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/09 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Three

awww, feel so bad for him! I guess those thing you'd like to forget and never remember:(

Reviewer: emochmcl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Three

no evil writters block.. oh i loved this update you keep getting more original ideas its beautiful

Reviewer: LoveGaneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/09 05:14 am Title: Chapter Three

Did Victory dissapear?

Author's Response: Yes Victoria, Vicky and Victory disappeared. Each chapter one of his personalties are going to disappear after they have told him what he is suppose to know in order to get out of his mind. Thanks.

Reviewer: XbreeanaX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Three

OH MY GOD! I'm addicted. I just started reading this; you are doing a wonderful job! Can’t wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: thlovr Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter Three

Oh my gosh! at 1st i didnt think this story would have cought my attention like it did, but after i read the 1st story i couldnt stop! then i read this story and i thought "wow this is sooo cool". this story is very well put together and im hoping to read more chapters very soon! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you like it.

Reviewer: highperson2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/09 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Three

omg~ i just found this and i am in love with it!~ it is just interesting~~ and maybe it add that i want to be a psych major that makes me love this~ but none the less~ i really can't wait for the chapter~~ *gives you tons of cookies*

Author's Response: Thanks *munches on a cookie*, I have been thinking about being a psych major, but there are so many other things I want to do too, like be an author. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 11:32 am Title: Chapter Two

awww... this was really cute, i just can imagine everything u r saying! gosh can't u make this a movie? D: poor real Bill, he is scared for Tomi...

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 07:04 am Title: Chapter Two

I feel so sorry for Tom. How is he taking this all in? 0.o
Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Two

woww LOVE IT lol i loved fade to black 2 update pllz

Reviewer: xxshatteredxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Two

yay new chapter. i'm glad we figured out why rosie was created, but i'm still wondering whose dominant at the moment.

Reviewer: emochmcl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Two

omg i got goose bumps this is so fantastic. ive never even thought you would go in this direction. you are deffinatly not predictable. hugs

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter Two

Aw, I always say this, but tom must be soooo confused. Rosie disappeared. D;
And i can't even imagine how bill and the g's are holding up. Amazing update! So soon tom is gonna face everyone, right?
More soon please? :D

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 11:49 am Title: Chapter Two

Whee, more updates^^

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 09:13 am Title: Chapter Two

Oh yay, an update. So Rosie was created to create fake memories, I am now curious to see why the other personalities were created.

I thought it was cool how he could put his hand on the glass and hear what it the real Bill is saying to him.

Reviewer: XRealityUnknownX Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 05:10 am Title: Chapter Two

HOW WHY GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh... *sigh* no more *sob*

i did a hapy dance when i saw there was an update *nods*
now im sad, yup yup but i shall sit here and avidly wait for more yay!

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/09 11:25 pm Title: Chapter one

YAY! well it took me awhile but im back reading ur storiees yay!!

im glad now im uderstanding this storie more XD still i keep wondering how is tom gonna make it to the "other side" XD n yay now his personalities are appearing in front of him, it will b easier but i will miss tom acting lyk a woman or lyk a kiddo D':

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 02:51 pm Title: Chapter one

Aw, This must be soooo confusing for tom.
I am at a loss for words. haha.
But I'm sure this story will be amazing, just like it's senior. :D
Great start and please more soon! :D

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 02:21 am Title: Chapter one

Great start of the sequel to a great story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: KikiRIOT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/09 09:29 pm Title: Chapter one

update sooooon!!!

Reviewer: xxshatteredxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter one

yeah, i'll finally understand what's going on. i'm so excited for this sequel.

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