Date: 08/14/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
So when are you updating again?
Date: 05/15/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bill. Definitely not physical abuse, but mental/emotional abuse from all those girls! lol! At least he wants to talk to her now. More soon pleeeaaasse!
Date: 05/12/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hmm. I don't really know what to say about this, lol.
I found it really hard to feel any connection with any of the characters, even Bill and Tom. Which is unusual, as that's usually automatic.
I'm not sure if that's critical or complimentary - depending on what you were aiming for!
Date: 05/12/09 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for the next =)
Date: 05/02/09 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg more more more i love itttt
Date: 04/30/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
LMAO
This chapter had me cracking up the whole time! It was hilarious. It's sort of nice reading it since situations like this in real life are never this funny--if not at all =/
Anyway, I really like it and will be checking for more soon!
Author's Response: This is true, it is never this funny.rnrnBut I am glad you liked it. :]
Date: 04/29/09 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hahaha, yes Bil you are awsome and so is the story.
Author's Response: Bill: Oh my, thank you so much!rnrnHaha, Bill tends to be a bit vain. He can't help it though, it's all that hairspray he use to use, kill all his brain cells. Why do you think he changed his style?rnrnI am glad you like the story.rnrn
Date: 04/27/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww =( I feel bad that she and Bill fought. Poor things. I hope everything will turn out ok! And the "Oh fuck, what I wouldn't give to be on my period right now!" line totally cracked me up!! Great humor. That's something that I would say if I were her. Well not really cuz not many would be upset about having Bill's baby, right? Lol, jk.
Post more soon!
Author's Response: Yes, there are few who would be upset over that fact but hey, Madyson is special. Lol.
Date: 04/26/09 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to read the next one.
Date: 04/25/09 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooo suspense! What happened??!! Pleeeaaase write more!
Date: 04/24/09 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story, I hope you upload the rest of the chapters soon.
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. Really when I started writing this I didn't know anyone would like it.
Date: 04/24/09 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
i want more! i want to find out what happened with bill!
Date: 04/23/09 02:40 am Title: Chapter 1
You're off to a good start! There's a bit of mystery to the background of the plot (not by what happened, obviously, but how it happened) and sort of a cliffhanger about Bill finding out. Keep writting! I wanna know what happens =)