Date: 06/16/09 12:26 am Title: Change or Not?
awww! it was loverly. and i like that tom's starting to calm down a bit... please keep updating!! this story is fun :P
Author's Response: YEAH i'm glad. Yeah he is. I'll try.
Date: 06/16/09 12:12 am Title: Change or Not?
So happy to get an update on this story.
When Tom admitted to being the identical twin of Bill I got so happy
“Hello class today we’re going to…” The teacher suddenly paused when she noticed Bill and Tom sitting next to each other. “Oh I see there was a seat change. I’m glad to see that you made a new friend Tom.” The woman smiled but suddenly stopped in her thoughts and stared at the two boys. “Huh… is it me or do you two look alike?”
Everyone turned to look at whom she was talking to. Bill looked over at Tom. He didn’t know if his brother wanted everyone to know that they were twins.
“It’s not you,” Tom said clearly. “We’re identical twins.”
Bill eyes widened as everyone in the room started to talk. Tom slowly turned and did a small smile that could barely be noticed but that was there. Bill’s heart raced and his smiled back lightly. Tom scoffed and shook his head before looking back at the front of the class while Bill continued to smile at him. He felt like he was getting his Tom back.- That is so awesome.
I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I didn't know id it was the time to put that in but i guess it was. The next chapi should be coming soon. Won't take me long to write it
Date: 06/15/09 09:14 pm Title: Change or Not?
this was good.. it wasnt as exciting as before.. but i do wanna know what happened in the kitchen!
Author's Response: HAHHA!!! Yeah I know but it's something. Yeah yeah... that'll take a while but it'll come up again
Date: 06/15/09 06:34 pm Title: Change or Not?
YAY! You updated!! WOOOO! I'm so glad that Bill and Tom are getting along dude!
Author's Response: Lol.... yup I updated. Yeah it's a good thing.
Date: 06/15/09 06:19 pm Title: Change or Not?
omg!!! you cant say that...you cant leave the story hanging like that...btw why did TOm leave so suddenly? And i really like this story its not like the other ones in which the twins are seperated and are like f*ing each other by the fifth chapter hehe...any way write the first sentence and ill shower you with compliment on my next review...
Author's Response: Yes I can... and I did. Oh that... it'll come at some point. I'm glad you like it. HAHHA!!! Yeah that happens a lot. Lol... oki deal
Date: 06/15/09 05:02 pm Title: Change or Not?
plzplzplzl start the next chapter like now=]]=] plz update like 2day=] i rly luvz thiz story=] thx=]
Author's Response: Oki... I'll work on it
Date: 06/15/09 12:37 pm Title: Eight-Year-Old Wall Breaking
wooo!
sorry, it's the first time i comment but i couldnt stop :S sowwiee!!
okay, first of all... THIS IS AMAZING!
the fact of how the drama started, i mean, i didn't get at all what was going on, thinking about the names n all, gosh i was hooked! it was amazing how everything started to fix! there are more things tomi is hiding! i wanna know them all!
oh god, this is amazing, how now tom cant let go of bill yet he hates him n gah! im not making sence, but hey! im leaving a comment :P
awesome storie, really! plz keep it up!^^
Author's Response: It's all good. YEAH!!! I'm glad you find it amazing. HAHHAHAH!!! yeah you're making sense. I got it. I'm almost done the next chapi so it should be up tonight or tomorro.
Date: 06/11/09 08:19 am Title: Eight-Year-Old Wall Breaking
Tom is just as much of an ass that my computer is.
I really really hate them both.
Author's Response: LOL... yeah they're both being stupid
Date: 06/03/09 10:33 pm Title: Eight-Year-Old Wall Breaking
AHH!!! That was so mean and so sad! and so AHH!!
Author's Response: HAHAH!!! I'm glad that it was at least sad or else then it wouldn't have worked out.
Date: 06/03/09 07:27 pm Title: Eight-Year-Old Wall Breaking
aww..plz update sooon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapi right now so it should be up soon.
Date: 06/03/09 12:28 am Title: Eight-Year-Old Wall Breaking
woah lol.
Well.. wow, lotsa emotions in that one
x3
Author's Response: Yup... This whole stories has lots of emotion XD
Date: 06/02/09 10:44 pm Title: Eight Years In The Dark
i totally lost it at the end bill said "i'm home" omg I started balling my eyes out =)
Author's Response: AW!!!! I'm sorry it made you cry. Well not really cause that means it was good and emotional XD
Date: 06/02/09 10:28 pm Title: Eight Years In The Dark
I am so happy with this chapter. I love how Tom slowly is opening up a bit towards Bill.
He obviously cares for Bill and the whole time he was being kinda mean to him, he was only trying to protect him from having to go through the pain that he went through.
I love how at the end Bill is next to Tom in front of Simone's tombstone and says "I'm home"
Also, I like how Bill decides that he'll wear Tom's clothes, I kept picturing that the whole time and thought it must have looked cute.
Well anyways, really enjoyed the chapter. I really like how you make them long enough. I'm excited to know you started the next chapter and I can't wait to read it.
Author's Response: YEAH!!! I'm glad you liked all thoses things. HAHHAHAH!!! Yeah I pictured it and it was cute. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Well it would be too bad if they weren't long. Yeah... well right now I half way through it so... it should be up soon.
Date: 06/02/09 10:24 pm Title: Eight Years In The Dark
Ohhh! That last line, ^^!
Author's Response: Lol!!!
Date: 06/02/09 09:57 pm Title: Eight Years In The Dark
Omg! I'm soooooo into this story! Omg! I'm happy you updated!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're into it. I'll update the next one soon.
Date: 06/02/09 09:27 pm Title: Eight Years In The Dark
Ohmygod.
I.love.this.story!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: YEAH!!! I'm really glad you do. It'll come soon... I'm writing it right now.
Date: 06/02/09 09:26 pm Title: Eight Years In The Dark
*reaches for kleenex as she expected chapter to be tear jerker already*
Author's Response: HAHAHHA!!! It might be... I don't know.
Date: 06/02/09 07:32 pm Title: Eight Years In The Dark
AHHHH! im like bawling over here!!! SO SAD!!
Author's Response: Lol... I didn't mean to make you cry. Yeah it is sad.
Date: 05/31/09 11:18 pm Title: Halloween Is Always Fun
Oh wow, I knew it was going to be something huge Tom wanted to keep from Bill.
Author's Response: Yup... it is pretty huge.
Date: 05/31/09 07:24 pm Title: Halloween Is Always Fun
ooohhh i rly liked this chapter...plzplz update soooon thx soso much=]=]
Author's Response: I will as soon as possible.