Date: 04/28/09 08:23 am Title: Smoke Signals
This is a really spiff idea. I like it. And I deffinately don't like Aksel.
Please update soon.
Date: 04/28/09 05:23 am Title: Smoke Signals
Because first you're getting reeeally sleepy, then this irresistable urge to write wash over you *dangles the watch*
Anyway, I'm SO intruiged by this! I can just feel the evil vibes from "Broccoli" *scowls* I can't wait to find out more! I'm on the edge of my seat here :D
Date: 04/28/09 02:09 am Title: Smoke Signals
Great story girls xD I love it so much...D_: poor soupie I want to know whAT did Askel say to Tom!! D: I don't like him D:, but He's pretty handsome...xD but Tomi is so much better xDDD he's handsome, cute xD lovely jojojo
;) I need more!!
Date: 04/28/09 01:38 am Title: Smoke Signals
Broccoli.. BleeehhhXP
I have to say Aksel IS handsome, but I love Tomi more (of course). I already got used to brown eyes.. HeeeeXD
Anyways, something's fishy with Aksel. Hope he's not doing something bad to Tom or anything..O_____O
Yay yay yay!! Thanks for the update!!^^
Date: 04/28/09 12:13 am Title: Smoke Signals
xD The nicknames are amazing, I love this story! Cream of Broccoli was a great finish of the chapter :D
Date: 04/27/09 11:52 pm Title: Smoke Signals
If he bugs Bill, he bugs me too, except I don't know why yet...
Date: 04/27/09 11:43 pm Title: Smoke Signals
-comes out of an Ally and looks to the left then right- I dont get the whole naming thing I really dont get.. But I love it. its funny and Aksel Being cream of 'broccoli' why? Well I hope for an update soon so I will slink back into my Ally now.
Date: 04/27/09 11:19 pm Title: Smoke Signals
LMAO, I love these nicknames!!!!
So can't wait for more, it's getting more and more interesting with each chapter!
Date: 04/27/09 11:16 pm Title: Smoke Signals
this is getting interesting
Date: 04/27/09 10:54 pm Title: Smoke Signals
i love this fic!! its very unique :) keep 'em coming!!
Date: 04/25/09 02:18 am Title: Nobody's fool
Can not wait to see more.
Thank you for updating the story.
Date: 04/22/09 07:51 pm Title: Nobody's fool
sounds like Tom and Aksel are up to things that are consider "un-brotherly" to some. I can't wait until you update,I love your story.
Date: 04/22/09 03:57 pm Title: Wake Up!
I really like this. I'm intrigued to see where it's going!
Date: 04/22/09 03:38 pm Title: Nobody's fool
I like this story, is quite interesting. I like the idea of Tom having a twin that's not Bill. It is a little bit weird, like real weird, but I like it. Does this guy hurt Tom? 'Cause if he does I'll...! I'll do nothing, alright, but I'm gonna be so mad at him! I dunno know if he does, yet. Whatever! I guess what I'm trying to say is that you're doing great and that this is like such an original idea I just can't wait for the next update!
Date: 04/22/09 02:33 pm Title: Nobody's fool
Heh, that was a good double opening there, I like how you let us into both their heads a little bfore it started.... Aksel creeps me the hell out actually :P But if you say so :P Keep up the great work and I seriously can't wait for the next chapter! XD
Date: 04/22/09 12:54 pm Title: Nobody's fool
xD I canīt avoid to laugh every time they say their nick xDDDD Tomato, Scary, ZOO, Ravioli xD all of them are pretty faunny and in a way match them jijiji I love it! but I'm worried for tom D:...OMG next!!
Date: 04/22/09 11:18 am Title: Nobody's fool
Oooh, Tom's older brother sounds hot xD Love this story, more please!
Date: 04/22/09 09:47 am Title: Nobody's fool
LOVE IT, LOVE IY. MOAR PLZ???
Date: 04/22/09 09:31 am Title: Nobody's fool
What the fuck is wrong with Tom? It's really weird with Aksel... We're all used to Bill being his twin... STILL LOVE IT THOUGH!!!