Date: 05/14/09 03:06 am Title: Smoke Signals
Lol... dude... the names are amusing man.
Date: 05/14/09 03:02 am Title: Nobody's fool
Man... Wow... I'm speechless... This story is good... I'm just wow.
Date: 05/14/09 02:08 am Title: You Were My Everything
So sad..poor Tomi D: .. I hate Jorg and Viktoria.. Yuck!...
So Jorg is not his father that means that Aksel is not his brother...?! OMG I need another update as soon as possible!!!
Date: 05/14/09 12:57 am Title: You Were My Everything
OMG...that made me want to cry! Poor Tomi...so Aksel's not really his twin? Hmm, please update as soon as possible...I'm dying to know what happens!!
Date: 05/13/09 11:48 pm Title: You Were My Everything
i seriousli love this story sooo freaking much :) its awsome and i love the way its written
Date: 05/13/09 08:10 pm Title: Wake Up!
this story is so filled with angst but thats what makes me love it tom just needs someone to rescue him, im so confused about tom and aksel so there not really twins, is tom adopted? ,no i get how his family is so horrible to him
this is an awesome story!
Date: 05/13/09 07:09 pm Title: You Were My Everything
OMG *Cries a little* that is so sad! It's terrible where you cut it off by the way :P love you anyhow but seriously... that was a cliffie from hell. I'm glad we finally know what's up with tom... more soon pwease
Date: 05/13/09 05:29 pm Title: You Were My Everything
....POOR TOM!!!! I just..you...I...UGHH!! So much angst! I love it!! XD I love how you describe Bill's eyes. It makes all fuzzy inside. ^.^
Date: 05/13/09 04:51 pm Title: You Were My Everything
oh, poor tom!! he needs to spend more time with bill. bill will make him better. poor tomi...i'm so sad for him. thanks for the speedy updates, keep up the great work!!
Date: 05/13/09 04:38 pm Title: One Way Or Another
oh my god, too cute with the waffles in the pocket!! i love it!! im so glad to see them getting closer, i really like it. thanks for the speedy updates, i'm so glad i have another chapter to read too!! :)
Date: 05/13/09 04:36 pm Title: You Were My Everything
its great, i think i have the song for tom
forget it -Breaking Benjamin
Date: 05/13/09 03:59 pm Title: You Were My Everything
Yeah, the waffle is really powerful. I want Tom to get out of that house right now.
Date: 05/13/09 03:00 pm Title: You Were My Everything
O_O OMG!!! i READ it so fast That I'm not shure IF I lost somethin important xD But the reading was pretty exciting xD...SO... Tom and Askel are not twins??? Ohhh x,x I'm confuse!!! xD
Great fic girls!!!!
Date: 05/13/09 02:15 pm Title: You Were My Everything
Superpowerfull :) And OMG Ö Poor Tomi!! I loved this!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 05/13/09 02:08 pm Title: You Were My Everything
Oh girls you two are amazing!!!
yeah please keep the updates coming this fast ;D
Tom is such a troubled soul, poor him. and this step-parents make sure to make him feel even worse..
Now I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: 05/13/09 01:06 pm Title: You Were My Everything
Wow. So now we know part of what is hurting Tom. Poor boy, to gothrough all that he has.
The story is coming along well.
However, not to sound rude or anything, you may want to consider working on your proper grammer. Sometimes you use the wrong tense and whatnot. I can still understand what point you are trying to convey, and that's the important part.
Date: 05/13/09 01:03 pm Title: You Were My Everything
Yay!! An Update!!XDXD
They're not really twins at all. LOL.. No wonder Jorg and that pesky Viktoria don't treat Tomi right! Hmph!!
Go Bill!! Talk some Sense to Tomi..T^T Save him..T^T
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!! *squeals*
Date: 05/13/09 11:36 am Title: You Were My Everything
Waffle Power is mean... >.> after this I am making myself some waffles because i can. hehehehehe, O.O So Tom is not a twin WHAT THE HELL I am so confused confused I would like explination!
Date: 05/13/09 11:32 am Title: You Were My Everything
Poor Tomi! I'm wondering how long it will be before Bill is able to connect the dots. Can't wait for Simone to come back, she was awesomeoness!