Date: 05/23/09 03:03 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
i am so glad bill came to comfort tom!! keep up the great work!!
Date: 05/22/09 10:34 pm Title: All These Things That I've Done
Story of my life.
Date: 05/22/09 10:01 pm Title: All These Things That I've Done
aww=] plz update soon..thiz si so sad=[..i think tom should move with bill=] hehe..update sooon plz thx=]=]
Date: 05/22/09 09:34 pm Title: All These Things That I've Done
Actually, your grammer wasn't THAT bad. I could still understand the words and the feelings and the point you were trying to convey.
I loved how Tom called him through the door. Something about that just seemed right, you know? Almost like that's the only way Tom feels comfortable communicating with Bill. Beautiful.
Date: 05/22/09 08:44 pm Title: All These Things That I've Done
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD;
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Amazing.
Date: 05/22/09 01:41 pm Title: All These Things That I've Done
OMG love this chapter!
Poor Tomi I hope he can trust in Bill, he need him..
Beautiful story I love it!.. continue soon please I want to know more!!
Date: 05/22/09 12:41 pm Title: All These Things That I've Done
omg this is wonderful
Date: 05/22/09 12:35 pm Title: All These Things That I've Done
i love both of them... wow i trully do and bill just said the perfect words didn't he?
Date: 05/22/09 10:52 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
Wow, that was REALLY good, I had a feeling that Tom and Aksel weren't really related, keep it up.
Date: 05/22/09 09:34 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
Wow. This chapter made me so sad :(
Date: 05/22/09 08:58 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
omg ok this chapter was awsome even with the mistake (sry i know you said not to meantion it) but i just had to let you know that it was still an awsome chapter and i loved it !!
Date: 05/22/09 08:49 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
OH my! That was so sweet! God, i can't believe Tom did that! Talked liked that! Amazing!
Date: 05/22/09 08:07 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
*cries in relief* omg, progress. Tomi, listen to Bill, please! He's trying to fight for you, to convince you that after all that shit, there's still good reasons to live for, that you will never truly be alone and someone will always be there by your side, whene you need him the most. God, they so need to have this talk.
Date: 05/22/09 06:08 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
awww
Date: 05/22/09 06:08 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
YEY:D Bill saved the day:P I'm soo glad Tom didn't do it:)
Date: 05/22/09 05:49 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
awww this chapter was even more heartbreaking than the previous one.
I really needed tissues here.
poor, poor, poor tomi, luckily now he has Bill.
loved the chapter btw!!
Date: 05/22/09 05:46 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
This is just...so...darn sad *sniffles* But Bill will heal the broken thing that is Tom...*happy sniffle* I'll just have to wait to see it...or well, read it ^^
Date: 05/22/09 04:58 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
I have read A LOT of stories on here, and this is the first review i have ever done. This was an amazing chapter, and the story is so sincere. You two are great writers, and yes there were a few grammer issues, but that deffinately doesn't take away from the writing. Keep it up, I really love your work :]
Date: 05/22/09 03:09 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
Poor Tom!!!! I'm happy to finally understand Tom's history better....will you be elaborating why his aunt and uncle favor Aksel...they are twins riight...and it would be Tom's family would have grown from a family of four to five if that is the case.
Date: 05/22/09 02:59 am Title: All These Things That I've Done
ohhh. pretty. *sniff*
that, my friend, was an epic win. I give it purple. *nods*
*sigh* i love this so much. I shoudl be doing my art assignment, not doing this, but then again who gives a shit about Matisse when you've updated?
I certainly don't.
yay, no tomi dying, at least, not physically...
i wish i could write like this. *sigh* imma go pout in the corner from jealousy at your epicness now...
can't wait for more. luv luv luv.