Date: 05/26/09 06:37 pm Title: Sweet Dreams
I can't wait for the next chapter. I really loved this. I need Tom to be happier, though. It's making me sad.
Date: 05/26/09 06:24 pm Title: Sweet Dreams
Your story (both of you) is just A.W.E.S.O.M.E.
OMG...i read all 11 chapters in one go...my god...its beautiful...
i'm soooo waiting for the next chapter...god!
Thank you!!!
Date: 05/26/09 04:36 pm Title: Sweet Dreams
awwww *runs to you in the corner and huggles you* don't cry. This is really really good! I wonder what Tom needs to talk to Bill about
Date: 05/26/09 04:32 pm Title: Sweet Dreams
awwwwwwww shnap damn tom got fiesty but i feel bad for him truly i love this story
Date: 05/26/09 01:33 pm Title: Sweet Dreams
Even if you didn't write in half of what you wanted its still a good update.. But I get the feeling something is wrong.
You okay guys?
Date: 05/26/09 01:16 pm Title: Sweet Dreams
I loved it :D xD Tom's getting demanding xD He needs Billa-boy xP I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 05/26/09 01:04 pm Title: Sweet Dreams
aww don't apologize =[ It was still a really good chapter xD
now I'm just dying to see what's going to happen with Tom O_O
Much love ^^
Date: 05/26/09 11:09 am Title: Sweet Dreams
Aw don't be sorry, it happens to all the good writers, heck it's happened to me a few times, its still a good chapter and looking forward to see what happens next.
Date: 05/26/09 09:40 am Title: Sweet Dreams
AWWW synnie! dont cry!! im so sorry 4 not been there >o< i feel bad too now...
BUT i lyked this chappie, even if it was small it had the whole tomi been mad and meanie at bill lyk i told u! *giggles* dont worry next poste u'll write a super big chappie oks?! :D
Date: 05/26/09 08:44 am Title: Sweet Dreams
God! That was so sweet and amazing and scary at the same time! WOW!
Date: 05/26/09 07:27 am Title: Sweet Dreams
tom is in the doorway. Ok, i need another chap
Date: 05/26/09 06:42 am Title: Sweet Dreams
Sorry? sorry for what? man, sometimes you people apologize for the weirdest things in this world. This was just great, and it even had a nice cliffie :D
Date: 05/26/09 06:21 am Title: Sweet Dreams
O_O Whoa, shit. I just had an image of a pissed off Tom standing on my doorway and...ugh, as much as seeing Tomi inside my apartment would be fun...him with a "I'm gonna kill you" face would not be my favourite choice of...something. What the heck am I saying? XD You made meh go all woopsie X'D Ah-ha, can't wait to see wha happenz!
*joins in the corner and pets* Don' worry. This was good! *hands out a tissue*
Date: 05/26/09 05:12 am Title: Sweet Dreams
oh no dont' be sorry, it's not that bad, at all.
and I'm sure next chapters will be better, so no need to worry about it ok? ^^
I can't wait to find out what's tom doing there, is tom saying "leave" to andreas? if so, gosh he sounds scary xD
Date: 05/26/09 04:19 am Title: Sweet Dreams
D;
Poor tom must really hate bill right now. :O
And poor bill must be confused.
And poor andi. :Od how could you end it like this???
This is torture!!!
And today is my birthday! D:
Oh the side note,
Thanks for an update!
More soon?
Please?????
Date: 05/26/09 02:15 am Title: Sweet Dreams
Awww I love you anyways... I was wondering how tom would react at school and you've left it WIDE open for an AMAZINGLY vivid next chapter
Date: 05/26/09 01:43 am Title: Sweet Dreams
So mean to end it there. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!
Date: 05/26/09 01:20 am Title: Sweet Dreams
It was short but I was willing for an update so bad so I'm happy with this...
Oh God Tomi went to Bill's house.. geezz I want to know what he is going to do or say to him...
Date: 05/26/09 01:01 am Title: Sweet Dreams
Don't be sorry, just update ASAP! Tom went to Bill's house willingly!!!!!
Date: 05/26/09 01:00 am Title: Sweet Dreams
Short, but powerful. Really, especially the last line. I kinda got a chill a little bit. Geez, my heart really hurts for Tom. Good stuff.