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Rough by mohanrocks       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 1123 | |
Summary: Past Featured Story
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Sometimes people meet once and for no reason at all.

Other times, the purpose has just yet to be found out.

It can be an easy passing, or it can get rough.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, David Jost, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Drug Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153375 Read Count: 53566
[Report This] Published: 10/10/11 Updated: 03/25/13
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/04/14 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Six

Ohh nvm! I had one more chapter to go before the epilogue *-* amazing!! *happy*

Author's Response: Ahhhh you are so cute! <3

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/04/14 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Six

I feel so horrible for how much I actually enjoyed reading about Bushido losing everything. He was suck a dick that I can't even bother feeling slightly sorry for him.

Poor Gustav haha! That was a perfect thing to add to the chapter I think :D some humour in all the sweetness is never bad and I seriously love that guy! Such an awesome friend *-*

I'm once again on my phone and I hate writing reviews on it, but I promise I will log on my laptop and give you a proper one when I've read the epilogue *-* can't believe it's almost over (again) I will miss reading this, it's so darn good :')

Author's Response: I honestly enjoyed writing that part, so don\'t feel horrible lol. he definitely deserved what came to him!

I just love having Gustav around to lighten the mood and make people laugh. I have fun with the G\'s in stories. I\'m so happy you love him!

Aww sweetie! You are too good to me. *-* Thank you so so much. I will miss reading your thoughts!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 02/25/14 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Reading this again, and omg I had completely forgotten about Georg and Larry, haha awe, I'm already looking forward to read this story again, I remember loving every single chapter when I read it the first time ^-^

Random babbling, just leaving some love! Now imma keep reading :3

Author's Response: Getting around to reading your reviews and I already have that giant smile on my face again! Georg and Larry sure made a great team, eh? Hehe. I\'m so happy you love this story enough to reread it! <3

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/06/14 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

I'm smiling, and crying, and laughing, and sobbing! All at once. Oh my god! I knew I loved the ending last time I read it but I didn't remember it being this awesome! OH MY GOD THAT PROPOSAL!

Okay, I'm going to go through every part, so just deal with me, kai?

I LOVED how we got to meet Georg and Larry, and I'm really glad to see how Georg is doing so good, but still being the same person. The way he showed Bill to his office and then proudly showed Larry's little office as well, together with bragging about the little thing, it was so good. You managed to give Georg a great future, decent job and still keep him as he was before, which is brilliant!

Tom got his own repair shop! I'm so happy for him, he can do what he likes and awe, it's just so great. The part when he shows Bill the house... how romantic is that? Like dude.. can I have one of those guys? I want a Tom!

Then we got to meet Gustav again! And I can say that he's easily one of my favourite characters in this story, he's such a great friend, even though he shows up uninvited at a very bad time haha! Oh god I love him so much!

HOT SEX IN THE SHOP! YES PLEASE! I loved it, simply loved it. I always blush a lot when I read sex scenes, I'm a bit prude and mostly I just skip them, but this was so great, I loved it *-*

Bill's parents... I'm really glad to hear that they had changed, and that Bill didn't stay angry with Tom, I mean, I would probably have been pissed off, but in the end, having a relationship with your parents is important, if possible, so yeah, he did the right thing and I hope Bill can work it out with them.

HE PROPOSED! (we're back to that) AND IT WAS SO CUTE AND PERFECT! Look at me screaming at you, girl! I'm back to being a sobbing mess, but this time it's in a good way because omg it's so sweet.

Okay my mum is here with food now... so I can't write more than this, and I think that's for the best or this would quickly turn out to an even worse essay than it already is... BUT, I LOVED this, so, so much, and I can't believe it's once again over.. *sigh* I will miss it so much.

Thank you so much for writing this, it's brilliant, it's amazing, I love it so much! THANK YOU and LOTS OF LOVE for you! :') *hugs*

Author's Response: Ahhh I love that it made you feel SO MANY THIIIIINGS! I\'m smiling already and I\'m only just starting to read your review *-* Seriously, I just love you.

Thank you for what you said about Georg and Larry! I know it was kind of a goofy little storyline but I\'m glad I could keep him the same person even as he got successful.

Ummm pretty sure I want a Tom too. I wish we could just write men into existence for ourselves, lol. That would be amazing! I had to give Tom something of his own to work on and be proud of that was entirely his.

Haha, Gustav the cockblock. I\'m so happy you like him though! He was seriously a blast to just write here and there.

Okay, I didn\'t think you could get any cuter but OH MY GOSH you have succeeded! I know what you mean about sex scenes..I blush whenever I write them! Thank you for the compliments, they mean a lot because writing that stuff is definitely out of my comfort zone.

I think Tom knew that Bill would forgive him eventually, so it was okay to go ahead and sort of step over the boundaries and bring Bill\'s parents into the picture. Because, I mean, who couldn\'t forgive Tom? Just look at his face!

Haha seriously you are too damn cute. Happy tears are a good thing! I\'m so pleased that the proposal did it for you.

Food is always a valid reason to go off, haha. Just thank you so so so much for all of your lovely words. You don\'t know how much they mean to me! You\'re awesome and you\'ve brightened my night and my week with your reviews! TONS OF LOVE TO YOU! <3

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/01/14 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

Can I kill Bushido? I seriously feel like beating the crap out of him. Give the guys a break, gah!

Okay, serious now.

Romantic Tom! I want one! Oh so sweet and I was squealing like I don't know what while reading it, I just want to hug them both for giving it another chance, they deserve some happiness and fluff and stuff.

But of course, Bushido has to call and ruin it -.- if I could I would strangle him. I was cursing so badly while reading about the phonecall, be happy you couldn't hear me, I got so frustrated. It's funny how a story can affect me this much...

BOYFRIENDS! Fuck yeah! Finally! And Tom being cute saying he'll buy Bill chocolate, awe!!!! Tooooom let me hug you!

Can you tell how much I love this? I never leave reviews like these on my phone, because autocorrect is a bitch and it takes me years to write something that wouldn't even take a minute on my computer, but I can't resist so feel special! *-*

A few more chapters to go, awe.. I will miss this so much, but I will most likely reread it again some day ^-^

Author's Response: I wanted to kill him in pretty much every chapter I wrote him in!

Dude, I feel SO special that you took the time to leave me these reviews on your phone! Like seriously, I\'ve got a perpetual smile going on while reading these because of you. Thank you <3

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/07/14 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Ohh I forgot something!

First, I laughed when I read about Bushido, not because it's something wrong with working at mcDonalds but because it's him! Hehe

And Gustav got married!!! Yes!! :D you go Gustav!!!

Okay I'm on my phone again and it's dying, so sadly I'm done now, for this time ;)

Author's Response: Hehe, I love that you really did comment on everything! That is so awesome. I get what you mean about Bu. It was a big step down money-wise for him so you know he wasn\'t happy about it, lol.

Gustav got married! Bless the poor girl that has to put up with him and his eating habits ;)

Thank you again, sweet girl!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/05/14 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

You made me cry on the bus. THE BUS! Filled of people wondering what the hell is wrong with the weird girl crying over her cellphone. Damn you and your amazing writing :'D

Serious now!

I loved this, I love how they went to Simone's grave, the little detail with Tom making sure she got a stone and the sign with a bird, it was beautiful!

The letter was great really, it wasn't all over nice and filled of love that's never been there before, it showed that Gordon had changed, but it wasn't overly happy and perfect. Which in fact made it perfect, but I hope you know what I mean because I'm sometimes shit with words...

I need to get off this goddamn bus soon, and I just noticed an old classmate staring at me.. Great, if he asks I will not tell him I was crying over a fanfic, I'm already remembered as the crazy girl who's obsessed with Tokio Hotel, we don't have to make it even worse haha!

Anyways, I've told you before, but I'll tell you again, I love this so much! You're such an amazing writer and this story is on my top 3 list of favourite stories, it's so darn good and I wish I never had to stop reading it. Love it!

Author's Response: Ohhh honey! I would totally have given you the biggest hug ever if I saw you crying on a bus. You are too cute and lovely! *-*x04;/p>Ah thank you for the compliments about those scenes. Looking back, the bird thing was maybe a little sappy, but I\'m happy that it worked for the story. I TOTALLY know what you mean about the letter. I didn\'t want it to be some magical happy ending where Gordon was suddenly a good guy, because he wasn\'t and that was a fact, but I did want some closure for Tom.

Haha that\'s amazing that everyone knew that you loved Tokio Hotel. I didn\'t discover them until I was 20 or so, so I never got to be that girl in high school but I would have loved to be.

Seriously thank you so much for all of your compliments. I\'m so happy that you enjoy this story so much and I so appreciate all of your thoughts throughout the whole thing! <3

Letters From Home by elvisfan       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 611 | |
Summary:
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A class project leads to something two people never expected
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Jörg, Natalie Franz, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, High School, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Bill/OMC
Warnings: Adult Content, Minor Character Death
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26003 Read Count: 34682
[Report This] Published: 10/12/11 Updated: 12/03/11
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/27/14 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh my God!!!! He's there! Oh oh oh!

Okay, I'm the kind of reader that gets sucked into the good stories and I cry, laugh, giggle, yell etc at them while reading, and when I read this, I squealed "omg he's there!!" out loud, making my sister stare at me like I'm an idiot.. Yeah, she better get used to it since we're getting an apartment together soon.

Anyways, back to the story, this was brilliant! So, so brilliant, and I love Tom even more now, he seems so sweet, surprising Bill like that. Awe, I love this, it's so cute!

Author's Response: i\'m the same way! crying, laughing, staring at my monitor in complete shock, or glaring at it going \"oh no he di\'int!\" whatever. a good story makes me react. glad i could make you react the same way!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/28/14 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

THEY KISSED! OMG! I'm sitting here with the biggest smile on my lips! You have no idea!

And there's not many chapters left, I'm torn between keep reading to get to know what will happen, and to drag it out for a bit longer so it won't end already. Good thing I have lots to do today so I can't actually read as much as I normally would. I haven't read something that I've loved this much in ages, so I kind of want it to never end haha!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/26/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Started reading this today, and I have no idea if you're the kind of writer that likes getting reviews on already finished stories, but I like showing writers that I like what I'm reading, so yeah, here we go..

I've wanted to read something by you for so long, and this story has been on my "to read list" for ages, so I decided to give it a shot now when I finished reading another one.

I really like it so far, these letters are cute, I'm lying in my bed, smiling over how sweet Tom are who are answering a letter from a random student, it's very cute :)

I'll most likely leave you a few reviews while reading, maybe not on every chapter because I'm on my cellphone and I hate reviewing on it (auto-correct is a bitch really) but I really wanted to tell you that I'm already completely hooked :)

Author's Response: reviews are always wanted, loved and appreciated. so yay! welcome to my stories! good to see you, and i hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/26/14 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my, it wouldn't have been very pretty if Bill had killed him haha! Yay for Gustav ;)

That care package was so cute though!

I love this, it sucks that I have to sleep now, but oh well, at least it makes the story last longer ^-^

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/27/14 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

HE CALLED HIM!!! Omg how cute is that?! I was literally squealing, so cute!

I don't like Michael...not that I know much about him, but I somehow don't like him anyway. *sigh*

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/27/14 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Gustav :((( I kind of guessed he would be one of the dead people, I don't know why but I had a feeling he would be, but god it's so sad :(

Tom is smart, I hope Bill gets a chance to talk to Michael, even if it's not a good talk. And the part with his parents suck, I can fully relate though, it was pretty much the same thing with my parents.

I can't wait for Tom to come home, because they will meet, right? Of course they will, and I can't wait to read about it *-*

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 03/28/14 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Ohhhhhhh! This was the cutest ever, oh my god! That letter, it was the cutest thing ever, I was squealing so loud, you have no idea. My feelings!

This whole story was exactly what I needed, I've had some really crappy days and I've been angry at the whole world, but this story has been making me smile so much, and I'm so sad it's over because now I need to find something new that's happy and fluffy and cute to read. But god, this ending was P.E.R.F.E.C.T. I LOVED IT! The whole story! Omg!

Wonderful job! I can't believe it took me this long to read it but I'm so glad I finally did! I loved every single chapter!

Author's Response: just what i needed after a shit day. thank you.

Work Out #3 by mohanrocks       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 55 | |
Summary: Tom lets Bill come up with their costumes for Georg's Halloween party. Maybe he should have thought this through a little more.

-If you haven't read Work Out, this may be too random for your comprehension. But hey, give it a go anyway, yeah? I mean...orgasms are cool...-
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Original Female Character, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Established Relationship, Halloween, High School, Humor, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6363 Read Count: 977
[Report This] Published: 10/30/11 Updated: 10/30/11
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 01/07/14 Title: Chapter 1: Oh Tom, when will you learn?

“You're so shellfish,” HAHAHA can I just hug your Bill a bit? He's fucking amazing!

I've had some real shitty days, and tonight I was seriously in such a bad mood I didn't know what to do with myself, then I managed to remember that I had one more Work Out story to read, and goddammit it worked! I'm actually giggling a bit, oh god, your Bill, I love him! And Tom, such a lovely patient boyfriend, Bill is so lucky to have him!

And Georg, haha that guy! God I feel so sorry for everyone in that room haha! xD

I loved this, and I will miss having some new stories from this universe to read, they have all been amazing and I'm sure I'll reread them all more than once, I seriously fell in love with them ^^ Thank you for writing these, and for putting a smile on my face :)

Author's Response: You can hug him as much as you want!!! He loves hugs even though he can be an awkward hugger. I\'m so glad that this was able to make you laugh and cheer you up a bit! I\'ve had a rough few days too so I do understand. I wish we could all find our Toms in life that handle our weirdness perfectly. Sigh. Maybe someday!

Thank you, thank YOU. I\'m so happy that you read these stories and that you enjoyed them. Thank you for leaving me your lovely thoughts. I hope that you have a great day and that you continue to smile and smile. <3

Tom's New Toy by elvisfan       

Rated: R | Reviews - 14 | |
Summary:
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Bill doesn't like Tom's new toy. At first.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: PWP/Lemon, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 720 Read Count: 725
[Report This] Published: 11/01/11 Updated: 11/01/11
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 02/23/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story came up on "Random story" and I had to read it. Don't regret it at all, I loved this short one-shot, it was a perfect break from studying.

Author's Response: yay for study breaks!

Lessons Learned by elvisfan       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 219 | |
Summary:
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Bill wants to learn how to play guitar. Tom needs extra cash for school.

They'll both get more than they bargained for.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, David Jost, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Natalie Franz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, High School, Humor, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13309 Read Count: 11799
[Report This] Published: 12/03/11 Updated: 12/31/11
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 08/12/15 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm sitting here in the caravan together with Jon, crying even though you had already told me what would happen. I'm just gonna sit here and sob for a while, but I totally loved it! Even if the ending broke my heart.

Author's Response: *squeezes you and hands you tissues*

Little Bird by Synnie       

Rated: G | Reviews - 28 | |
Summary:


When Bill, a homeless teen that volunteers at a soup kitchen, is invited to Christmas dinner at his boss' house, he finds more than he expected.

A Christmas Fic

Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Fluff, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2957 Read Count: 829
[Report This] Published: 12/20/11 Updated: 12/20/11
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 11/30/14 Title: Chapter 1: And All Because of a Little Bird...

Aww, this was truly beautiful :) such a sweet story :)

First Time For Everything by elvisfan       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 249 | |
Summary:
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In the hospital after a car accident, Tom meets someone who confirms what he's always suspected.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, David Jost, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Natalie Franz, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, BottomTom, Drama, First Time, Fluff, High School, Romance
Main Pairing: Tom/Georg
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37046 Read Count: 12376
[Report This] Published: 01/22/12 Updated: 03/28/12
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 05/04/16 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Okay so I've been spamming you already but I also have to leave a review to tell you that this was one of the best stories I've ever read and I'm so fucking angry right now. Dammit woman, why do you do this to me?

Author's Response: because i love you. duh.

The Ties That Bind by elvisfan       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 366 | |
Summary:
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Tom and Natalie's marriage is not a happy one. The arrival of Natalie's cousin, Bill, doesn't help in the slightest.

Categories: Het, Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Natalie Franz, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, First Time, High School, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Tom/Natalie
Warnings: Adult Content
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29496 Read Count: 23118
[Report This] Published: 05/12/12 Updated: 08/18/12
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 12/28/14 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awwwwwww! As every other time when I read a story by you I can't believe I didn't read it sooner. This had me squealing and smiling and laughing like a moron so many times. I was just going to read a few chapters before sleep, and look what happened, I read it all! So, so good though, man I loved Tom so much. I don't know how Tom always ends up being my fav char but man he was so perfect.

Loved this! As always, your stories are all pure perfection < 3

Author's Response: cuz he\'s tom. that\'s why. lol now go to bed!