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Sheer Dumb Luck by Reginleif       

Rated: PG-13 | Reviews - 8 | |
Summary:

Teenage Bill thinks it's a good idea to hide in the haunted castle to attract the attention of charming tour guide Tom. The plan naturally fails, but that doesn't mean Tom hasn't paid attention.


Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Halloween, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2232 Read Count: 56
[Report This] Published: 10/30/20 Updated: 10/30/20
Reviewer: Sturmfrei Signed
Date: 11/14/20 Title: Chapter 1: Haunted Tour

it is definitely cute & happy! you nailed it! I love how different yours & Erin's turned out with the same prompt, that's always one of my favorite things about prompt challenges.

I also love the character you've given Bill in this, the stubborn but sweet thing really suits him!

Unlocked by yetanotheroceann       

Rated: PG | Reviews - 6 | |
Summary:
Unlocked

Tour guide Georg is used to people locking themselves in dark creepy rooms.

Tonight's unwanted victim might not be so unwanted after all.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Fluff, Halloween, Humor, Romance
Main Pairing: Tom/Georg
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2806 Read Count: 26
[Report This] Published: 10/30/20 Updated: 10/30/20
Reviewer: Sturmfrei Signed
Date: 11/14/20 Title: Chapter 1: [1/1]: Unlocked

this is so lovely & sweet & funny. I loved it when Georg pretended to lock the door, I saw through him instantly but loved that Tom didn't xD they had really good chemistry as well! enjoyed it very much < 3

Author's Response: Aww, thank you lovely! I\'m so glad you liked it; It was fun to write :D Torg is fun to write chemistry-wise for me 😍

Rose Quartz and Rosemary by yetanotheroceann       

Rated: PG | Reviews - 7 | |
Summary:
Rose-Quartz-and-Rosemary

Georg doesn't belong to him, but he will by the end of the day, if Bill has his way.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Fantasy, Fluff, High School, Romance
Main Pairing: Georg/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2435 Read Count: 36
[Report This] Published: 11/18/20 Updated: 11/18/20
Reviewer: Sturmfrei Signed
Date: 11/20/20 Title: Chapter 1: [1/1]: Morning...

this is so adorable??? I LOVE witches & magic, & your version of them is so wonderful. the little details, the crystals / herbs sprinkled in, the warm feel of it all. the fact that Tom can be not-a-witch but still a part of their family. uuuugh. you hit ALL THE SPOTS here, Erin!

Author's Response: THANK YOUUUU! I\'m so glad you enjoyed it. Like, I had so freaking much fun writing this. It made me so happy and just... ugh. Thannk you <3

Angel of Music by yetanotheroceann       

Rated: PG | Reviews - 4 | |
Summary:
Angel-of-Music

Young opera tenor Bill Kaulitz had never ever faltered before but there he was, frozen, standing on the stage, hands at his throat, eyes wide. His normally beautiful, clear voice was cracking, and he didn't know what to do.

Enter Tom, Bill's very own angel of music.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Gustav Schafer, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Drama, Fluff, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3990 Read Count: 40
[Report This] Published: 11/25/20 Updated: 11/25/20
Reviewer: Sturmfrei Signed
Date: 12/03/20 Title: Chapter 1: [1/1]: The music died down...

this is so wonderful. so WONDERFUL. your love for opera & singing & performing is present in every single word. the whole thing just comes alive, the music, the characters, the tension. nnngh.

I also love how your style is a little more formal to suit the setting / time period, it's very clever & so well done. & their chemistry! I could really feel it, picture them orbiting around each other.

__His voice soared to the very back of the theatre and as the aria climbed and climbed, his voice handled it perfectly, and by the end, he was barely holding it together.__
by the end, I also was barely holding it together. this is so BEAUTIFUL, roo! < 3

Author's Response: Gosh darn, Mafalda, your reviews honestly make me so happy. You always seem to pick out the parts I was proudest of, and that is so so validating, haha! Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing and ugh. Thank you <3

Lost and Found by yetanotheroceann       

Rated: PG-13 | Reviews - 43 | |
Summary:
Lost

Bill can’t handle his family at the best of times, but knowing he’s going to be stuck in a cabin in the woods with them for a week feels like his own personal hell.

When he can’t take it anymore, embarks on a walk to clear his mind and manages to get himself lost, he’s rescued by a group of people who understand him better than even his own family and all of a sudden, his trip doesn’t seem so hellish after all.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, David Jost, Dunja, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Natalie Franz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Drama, First Time, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Discriminatory Language
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14978 Read Count: 349
[Report This] Published: 12/07/20 Updated: 03/15/21
Reviewer: Sturmfrei Signed
Date: 01/06/21 Title: Chapter 4: [4/15]: Sleep.

although I haven't read the intimate version, I think this one fits perfectly in the story! it makes sense for Bill to not immediately want everything at once, especially given his normal careful personality. & they are still super, super cute with each other.

so I hope for their sakes (& also mine!) that they're gonna be spending more time with each other, because I want that < 3

Reviewer: Sturmfrei Signed
Date: 12/17/20 Title: Chapter 3: [3/15]: Friends.

this chapter is so lovely -- the whole atmosphere, you've nailed it; the banter between the boys, the romantic moment in the tree (they're literally sitting in a tree kissing, you genius!) -- all of it. like, the kiss happens early in the story but it makes SENSE, it fits, like, I feel like even I might be convinced to go kissing Tom in that situation?

I also love that Tom asks permission first -- you don't see a lot of that in fic & some people feel like it ruins the moment (I've had that comment on a fic before), but I feel it's so lovely & it actually adds to the moment.

much much love! < 3

Reviewer: Sturmfrei Signed
Date: 12/17/20 Title: Chapter 2: [2/15]: Lost.

__“Four.”

“Four what?”

“Four times!” Tom whispers, grinning, “He’s passed by here four times.”___
the exact moment I fell in love with this Tom

just--the mental image of Tom & his friends up high in their tree, watching Bill go in circles--it's hilarious & kind of asshole-ish but in a good way? god. I love it SO MUCH.

__ the sun filters through the leaves of those taller trees, bathing them in a dappled light that helps to distort time.__
& this description is just so beautiful & atmospheric, I had to point it out.

loving every word! < 3

Reviewer: Sturmfrei Signed
Date: 12/09/20 Title: Chapter 1: [1/15]: Enough.

__an over-perfumed barnacle__
Erin, I love you so much

& I already love this, their family dynamics, how you write them, I can so picture it. oblivious but cool uncle, father too wrapped up in stepmother to understand what's going on with his kid, it's got all the good stuff. super excited to see where you're taking this! < 3

Author's Response: Ahhh, thank youuuu! I hope you\'ll enjoy where it\'s headed. I loved writing it <3