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Summary: Photobucket
Bill's life revolves around the observation of those around him and discovering their true form, but Bill soon discovers that some shoes are better left buried.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Humor, Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: On Hiatus
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36242 Read Count: 10382
[Report This] Published: 07/21/08 Updated: 08/21/08
Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 07/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Mason Jar

haha wow! Different much? Bill has got the perfect little insquisitive personnality to go with his Everyone's-an-Alien belief. I can't wait to find out what Tom is! :D

Author's Response: It will be a while before we reveal what's going on with Tom. He has a few of his own quirks.

Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 07/30/08 Title: Chapter 7: The Lawn Gnomes

I think Tom must be some kind of superhuman eating monster. Do guys actually think that much about food??? Or maybe I've just been living under a rock my whole life XD

I love the wit in this story. The humor is really what keeps me reading more than anything...well, aside from Bill's one of a kind personality of course :)

Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 08/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: The Deadly Cookies

I don't know why but for some strange, probably paranormal reason...I wanted to cry. Not boohoo, omg-I'msosad tears just...I was very touched is all :')

I THINK BILL IS A KEEBLER ELF AND TOM IS TEH NORMAL ONE. Nah, maybe Tom's half n half? :S

Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 08/05/08 Title: Chapter 9: The Rain Coat

Wow, I almost did cry there. I'm such a wuss

Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 08/19/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Dirty Bed

OMG ITS....Tom? Great great GREAT chapter. And I'm... glad the sex isn't there yet...really I am. REALLY. (when is it again? :D)

Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 09/16/08 Title: Chapter 12: The Ghosty Pajamas

Well...I'm gonna be completely honest: after all the build-up, I was kinda expecting something more...fantastical than a werewolf. But hey, still a great chapter and besides, sex with a werewolf? HOT. I'll stay tuned :DD

That Jazz by cynical_terror Rated: NC17 [Reviews - 181] | |
Summary: 1925. Brooklyn, New York. What happens under the cover of darkness in the city that never sleeps?



Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Bushido, Female Celebrity, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Saki, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance, Suspense, Twincest
Main Pairing: Bill/Bushido, Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Blood, Major Character Death, On Hiatus, Violence, WIP
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29365 Read Count: 5051
[Report This] Published: 08/10/08 Updated: 11/25/08
Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 11/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Exposition

Only a single chapter read and already my emotions are peeling open like a banana. I'm so attached right now, it feels quite dangerous :P I know I'm going to feel for these characters when the going gets rough, but I'll keep my fingers crossed for their happy end :)

Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 11/14/08 Title: Chapter 4: Prelude

Wow, again I got swept away only to get a reality smack by the end of the chapter rearing up.
Humans are, at heart, selfish creatures yet you've constructed two beautiful people who can't think of themselves in light of their twin's suffering. This above all, is what keeps me pressing that 'Next' button.

Great story so far dude :)

Chicken by rainbowDementia Rated: R [Reviews - 32] | |
Summary:
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Little Red Riding Hood... with a twist.


Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, David Jost, Saki, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Drama, Suspense
Main Pairing: Bill/Jost, Jost/Tom
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Blood, Bondage, Light Kink, Pedophilia, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3049 Read Count: 1062
[Report This] Published: 08/26/08 Updated: 09/04/08
Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 11/18/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: 11:30 AM

I saw the little red riding hood banner and felt instantly bad cause I had JUST finished writing one myself and had this horrified moment where I thought I had plagiarized unconsciously lol. But then I read it and they're nothing alike... but yours is really interesting! I like the inserted chat and David scares me :P (In a good way)

Anyway, so far so good :D

# 9 dream by tickeey Rated: PG [Reviews - 322] | |
Summary: Past Featured StorySimone has lovely boys.


Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Jorg Kaulitz, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Abandoned Story
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37065 Read Count: 37533
[Report This] Published: 09/10/08 Updated: 02/20/09
Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 11/30/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

D'AWAWWWWW.. I can't believe I'm this emotional over only two chapters! I like the way you write, with little simple sentences that say a whole lot. It's like you don't need all these fancy detours, you just say it like it is, which makes it so beautiful. It's very stylized and makes an intriguing change. Nice, dude, very nice.

Author's Response: oh god, thank you so much :) i\'m not sure i can let you know how happy you words have made me, but be sure, they have a lot. a real lot. thank you for reading and enjoying :)

Remnants by emseviltwin Rated: NC17 [Reviews - 1100] | |
Summary: Past Featured Story


At the edge of the world, in a disease ridden desert, can two strangers find a way to survive?
Categories: Slash
Characters: None
Genre: Alternate Universe
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Abuse, Minor Character Death, Non-Con/Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56994 Read Count: 71372
[Report This] Published: 10/29/09 Updated: 12/30/09
Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed
Date: 03/05/13 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It's funny, I can tell when I'm really enjoying a story because I rush through it to find out what will happen next and finally, when I see the finish line, I slow way down because I don't want it to end!

I enjoyed the species you created with the danachi. I thought it was interesting to have a creature use sex as a defense mechanism and I enjoyed that you weren't afraid to write about it, even in the case of non-con. It's hard to read/write, but it add a layer or harsh realism that brings it together.

Personally, I have seen a lot of shows/stories that utilise the power of love and okay, it's a little corny IN MY OPINION haha, but I thought in your case, it worked better because of the danachi's evolution and fit with their whole persona. It didn't seem so much like a deus ex machina like in some cases.

All in all, great story, original premise and good character development! Thanks for writing it!