Oh, I love this. It seems so real, so in tune with actual emotions. And I love how you keep reiterating "we tried, it didn't work" over and over again, because it just makes it that much more realistic.

I'm slowly making my way through everything you've written, and sometimes it makes it hard for me to write because I can't imagine a reason to write when I can't write as well as this.

Author's Response: i, um, well...i certainly never meant for this to discourage you to write, because i know i sure your fics! seriously, though, thanks for the review. :)

Oh, I love this! The back and forth was amazing, and the last two lines just did it for me. Definitely. I love it. =)

Author's Response: Those lines seem to be favorites of a few people. haha Thanks a lot! :D

I loved this so much. It's so beautiful, in a yearning sort of way. The way you narrated it, the character interactions and relationships. I felt for everyone, including Jorg. Just so gorgeous, and different than anything I've ever read. Favoriting now.

The idea of them living next to each other and knocking their wives up at the same time is just too cute.

Congrats on the feature! I've been meaning to read it, but now that it's featured and my mind is, for the most part, off of SWAK, I think I'll start on it this weekend. =) ♥ ♥ ♥

Author's Response: I\'m excited you\'re going to read it! *wrings hands* I hope you like it. :D

I love this story so much. Janni is amazing. So perceptive and adorable. And you've got the single parent thing down pat -- the relationship between the parent and the child. And Bill's interations with her...so adorable and just...love. Love, love, love. I wish I'd started reading this sooner, but better late than never. I'm so upset about Tom losing that job, but I'm pretty sure it's because of that trip to the grocery store, right? Grrrr @ people. I'm also curious to see what Bill's plan is. I have a couple ideas, but... ^.^

Author's Response: Ah yes, I used to be a single parent, so I really have a lot of experience in that area. I\'m glad that shows through, really. But I am glad you\'re reading it now! Thank you! <3

Oh, oh, ohhhhhh! Did someone mention a rousing game of Twister?

Author's Response: I am so far behind in responding to reviews, it\'s ridiculous. I\'m so happy you\'re reading this. (and nervous, of course! lol)

Okay, I finally got a chance to read this one a few nights ago (the night before you posted the NEXT update lol) and I wanted to comment on it before I read the next one saying that it felt a lot like goodbye sex. But...you wouldn't do that to them, right? I'd love to be wrong in this case. I know he's thinking of Tom and Janni rather than himself, but, really. I'd hate to see Tom have to kick his butt for even thinking that. Now, I guess I'll go read the next and hope, hope, hope that I'm so completely wrong. =D

So I just read the last three chapters. Though I didn't cry, I think I could. The end was so sweet, so perfect. Janni is adorable and willful in her own way. I'd like to see the day some kid picks on her for having two daddies lol. Tom's relationship with Bill was perfectly paced and tentative, even when they were in so deep they couldn't see much outside of thier little family bubble. I love this story so much and if you ever get it published I'll be first in line to buy it. And I demand a signed copy. =P Thank you so much for writing this. It's definitely a favorite of all favorites.

Author's Response: Late response is so late, and for that, I apologize. I hope you know that what you\'ve said here put the biggest smile on my face. And if I ever get it published, you will definitely get your signed copy. ;) Thank you, love. ♥