Oh wow, I read chapter 30 of this story and I was like....gah, I know it's probably the best thing for Tom to do, but goddammit...to hurt both of them so much and to make Tom carry that burden for the rest of his life...
Yeah, and then I read the alternate ending and I was like OMFG YAY XDD. I love how it didn't matter what they were in the end, it only mattered that they loved each other ^.^
I loved this story XD.

Author's Response: :\'DD I was torn as to which ending would be the alternative. Cause I would\'ve done what Tom did in the original ending, its the heroic thing. But then theres the aspect of love overrides everything. And thats a strong statement to me. Oh and thank you for the review xD<3

Ahh crap, I pressed the wrong button and I think I've either sent you a really short review or I've deleted it. Yay for being technologically-challenged XD.

Ok, well, I was going to say that I thought this entire story was adorable! I was a little worried that Tom was going to throw Bill back into the clinic and then Bill was going to end up in hospital, but then you twisted it and it turned out amazing :DD.
I actually laughed pretty loudly when they were at the wedding and Bill was so disbelieving that Gordon could sit down with his stick problem. I think I may have freaked out my sleeping parents a little, I'm supposed to be studying, Shhh.
Anyway, I love your writing style (honestly, it's actually similar to my own) and I really enjoyed how you never dropped the characters of Bill and Tom. Like when Bill was showing the car salesman all the damage that had happened, and then the bumper came off. I was like 'Wow...Bill sure knows how to sell a car...' Hahaha. But I get it, and I loved it.
I'm filled with immense gratitude that Bill and Tom were released after a year, I thought it was sad that Bill would never experience all those things he thought were beautiful, especially the pizza. No one deserves to go without pizza. Ever. Haha. Though I would have liked more details on what happened to them, like did Tom get a job? Just make it up in a reply if you can, I'm just really curious and hopeful that Tom finally managed to keep a job and that it wasn't Gordon's. ^.^
I think I've rambled, sorry, but your story deserved it. Definitely the best story I've read in a while, and I read alot. XDD
100 stars out of 10. :D You have other stories, right? I'm a little too tired to check but I'll probably check tomorrow. If they're anything like this one, expect another ramblation. Mhmm, Bill's not the only one who can make up words :D
Cya!

Awww poor Tom, I can't believe it was just a wrong number! I was expecting Bill to confront Tom about the messages and then the whole thing would be resolved, but then Bill just let it eat away at him...gah. Beautiful story! Even if it left me a little sad and thinking about the miracles of communication. Lol. XDD.

Wow, I can't believe the world ended. It's really sad that in the end, they only had like 2 weeks together.

When the artist said 'every minute you are wasting is one you will wish you had used in the end' is a really powerful statement actually. It definitely made me stop and think for a while, lol. It's so beautifully written and touching.

You did an excellent job on this story, the characters are very realistic and easy to love. :D You know, you have me thinking about the end of the world now, and who I'd run to and whether I'd regret anything. One of the best stories I've read in a while! XD

Author's Response: Aw :D Thank you so much! :) This is probably the best review I\'ve gotten from this story :] I\'m glad you liked it enough to read and review! I was hoping that someone would realize that I wasnt trying to just write about the end of the world but about how you should live your life to its fullest. :) (PS: I hope that the whole \"end of the world\" theme didnt bring down your mood too much- I hate doing that to people!) But thanks again for reading :D

Author's Response: Aw :D Thank you so much! :) This is probably the best review I\'ve gotten from this story :] I\'m glad you liked it enough to read and review! I was hoping that someone would realize that I wasnt trying to just write about the end of the world but about how you should live your life to its fullest. :) (PS: I hope that the whole \"end of the world\" theme didnt bring down your mood too much- I hate doing that to people!) But thanks again for reading :D

OH HOLY SHIT.
I think I just about died. Bill turned into a tongue?! That's def. one I haven't heard before. Gah, now I feel weirded out, he's a tongue...a really big tongue...ok, sorry. I got to get over that. Hahaha.
Anyway, I love this story, it's really well-written and your ideas are completely original. Perfect for Halloween. Lol.

I'm just about to move on to your sequel to A Beautiful Disaster, but I first wanted to let you know that I absolutely adored this story XDD. Especially the ending, I nearly died when you wrote the title as the last line, it fit sooo perfectly. It was sad that Tom and Bill both cheated on one another, Bill more than Tom -_-'', I'd like to think that their love for one another would prevent it, but I can understand why it might happen. I thought it was brilliant how you developed the lives of the supporting characters, and how everyone impacted on one another. I have to say, adding members of Cinema Bizarre and Simple Plan and probably some other band members I can't think of right now, was an awesome idea. Kiro getting pregnant to Yu? 0.0 Could be, could be. Hahaha.
Anyway, you're a really good writer and I hope that your sequel is as well-written as this work. XDD.