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Summary: Past Featured StoryBill and Tom, the Schrei years. Takes place a year or so after Formative ends. Smut, angst, 'cest, you know the score.


Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Angst, Drama, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Under-Age Erotica
Series: Formative
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71908 Read Count: 85474
[Report This] Published: 05/26/07 Updated: 07/29/07
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 11/05/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm sorry, I just Hate hate hate Tom in this chapter. Seriously the fucker can go around sleeping with so many women and saying because he's young it's ok. Then having the affront to act like Bill's the one in the wrong and that Tom's the one who's been hurt? No wonder Bill slapped him, I would have too.

*seethe*

Drunken Nights by Steena Rated: NC17 [Reviews - 176] | |
Summary: Tom has a litte too much to drink and is a little too horny to make the chance of a halfnaked Bill pass him by... But what happens the next morning, when one remembers and the other doesn't?
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29073 Read Count: 15703
[Report This] Published: 05/29/07 Updated: 10/02/08
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Drunken Nights

if you're adding more to it that's fine but you said that the next chapter wouldn't be put up if we didn't review (on you heads be it style) *pouts like a three-year-old* but i'm good with waiting if it's going to be a longer chapter!

Author's Response: Lol that was just a joke, don\'t worry.. The next part it already ready, but I\'m just getting it betaread, so it should be out tomorrow =)

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 4: Nightly Guests

Arrg! You can't hold a chapter hostage that's just really rude and you don't get good reviews just reviews like this one asking you to please not hold a chapter hostage! please! especially now.

Author's Response: Lol, well I have a chapter but it\'s really short, so I thought I\'d just write some more on it tonight and then publish it in here tomorrow, but you\'d rather have it now? Review again and tell me if I should put it out now...

Bodily Dysfunctions by Zeph Rated: NC17 [Reviews - 22] | |
Summary: A night of drinking leaves the four boys of Tokio Hotel in a slightly sticky situation. You're me and I'm you; how is that possible?
Categories: Het, Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, David Jost, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Original Female Character, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Fluff, Humor, PWP/Lemon, Twincest
Main Pairing: Georg/Bill, Gustav/Bill, Gustav/Georg, Gustav/Tom, Tom/Bill, Tom/Georg, Tom/OFC
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Light Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8444 Read Count: 3192
[Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/10/08
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 11/21/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so basically to get everyone back into their own bodys you need georg to fuck gustav and then tom to fuck gustav which basically means that gustav is the big whore in the whole of this highly confusing story...still funny though

Wo Sind Eure Hande? by paradox Rated: NC17 [Reviews - 7] | |
Summary: Bonfire night fun
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Gordon Trumper, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: PWP/Lemon, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2307 Read Count: 572
[Report This] Published: 11/05/07 Updated: 11/05/07
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I didn't think bonfire night was celebrated anywhere but in the uk...
well either way i don't think it matters much, yay random stufffzzzz.

Author's Response: It probably isnt but i live in england and got the idea from a display i watched

Author's Response: It probably isnt but i live in england and got the idea from a display i watched

Summary: It only took three months, a whole summer to fix the broken relationship between two twins who were seperated because of divorce.
One brother is abused and alone in his own world, hiding everything away from everyone, the other happy with his life and thinks he's better than his brother and is oblivious to his pain. How will they repair the relationship that had been shattered so long ago?
Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Jörg, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Blood, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111223 Read Count: 155710
[Report This] Published: 11/21/07 Updated: 01/13/08
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: A stir of new emotions

just popped in to say how much i am adoring this story. it's truly fantastic.
I'm really getting into the story (i do that sometimes)

Author's Response: aaaaawwwwwww thanks... lol don\'t worry i do it too :D

Invitation by cynical_terror Rated: NC17 [Reviews - 114] | |
Summary: It all started as a joke. But no one's laughing anymore.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Bushido, David Jost, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Male Celebrity, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Angst, Drama, Twincest
Main Pairing: Bill/Bushido
Side Pairing: Tom/Bill
Warnings: Adult Content, Light Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17521 Read Count: 11628
[Report This] Published: 11/25/07 Updated: 11/29/07
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really good actually I was hesitant about reading it but i'm glad a did, how soon is soon? Just so I know when to check back!

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 11/26/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i would say this fic was crazy brilliant but that would not do it justice
*rates highly*

I was 5 and he was 6 by Anchy Rated: R [Reviews - 16] | |
Summary: He said we're not twins. I believed him in life, but our death cleared away my doubts.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Angst, Drama, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Major Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1372 Read Count: 427
[Report This] Published: 12/03/07 Updated: 12/03/07
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

is the cutting of the hair something you randomly decided or was it in reference to something the twins said because either way it's a powerful image

Author's Response: if my memory serves me right, Bill said in an interview that \'if you cut our hair and take off our clothes then we\'re identical.\' that\'s where i got the idea from

The End by Anchy Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 12] | |
Summary: There's no way of going back. This is the end isn't it?
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Drama, Twincest
Main Pairing: Gustav/Bill, Gustav/Georg, Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4648 Read Count: 643
[Report This] Published: 12/06/07 Updated: 12/15/07
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: The end

definatly worth second chapter because it looks so good at yet i haven't the foggiest what's going on, care to explain to this poor lost confused soul...

Author's Response: I\'ll post the next one today, tomorrow in the latest. so you\'ll be able to understand :D

Hell and High Water by Majestrix Rated: NC17 [Reviews - 328] | |
Summary: Past Featured Story




From a young age Tom and Bill knew they had to watch out for each other, eliminating anyone who tried to come between them. When a situation forces them onto the street making a living the only way they know how, they meet a man who quite possibly has the key to their future.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, David Jost, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Blood, Major Character Death, Heavy Kink, Pedophilia, Under-Age Erotica, Violence
Series: Hell
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43104 Read Count: 36687
[Report This] Published: 12/08/07 Updated: 12/21/07
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

I know I've already reviewed this but I was taking a break from revision. *cough*
and I was just flicking through stories I like and being the slightly odd and very curious person i am with the word count you have and and with the average word count for a page in a novel being around 240/250 you've written a 170 page Novel.
Are you a writer? because if you're not you should be.
How did you get the inspiration to do so much of this?
tell me when to shut up because i have a really hard time doing so.

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Preempted

Fantastic, just fantastic.
This is such an amazing story.

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you, and thank you for your review! You have no idea what that means to me.

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Scraping By

you're amazing, truly.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you, and thank you for your review. I\'m glad you like it.

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: The More Things Change

This would make such a fantastic screenplay i'm so tempted to just change the names and make a film (siteing you as authour of course) I spend far too much time telling you how fantastic this is don't i?

Author's Response: Dude, if you can do cool. *shrugs* I would love to be able to write a screenplay but my brain doesn\'t work like that. It comes out in fanfiction. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Like Oil Before The Fire

ahh no doing this chapter to get all the things i liked would require a narator of sorts, mabye david talking to georg about something mabye,
I don't know why i'd bother to make a screen play as i'm sure it wouldn't be shot, or if it was it would be under pulp fiction type scrutiny...
"mastery of all things sharp and shiny " is brilliant i would have to find a way to get it in and i'm not sure how. you continue to astound me my dear.

Author's Response: lol I always love your reviews. Thank you!

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: If You Have To Wonder, You Never Had It

aw yay is it odd of me to be happy that gustav doesn't really care about the twins psycotic behaviour. it's one of those things where i really enjoy the interaction between them.
I really worry for georg i hope he doesn't get himself killed, i care less about the twins lifes because they are of the firm opinion as long as there both dead it doesn't matter the idea sticks with them. sheer excelence again...

Author's Response: lol I don\'t think it\'s odd of you to be happy that Gustav isn\'t put off by the twins, he gets them. And the comment about how you don\'t care about the twin\'s lives was very funny. I had to reread the sentence to make sure I read it correctly. Thank you, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 8: Fool Me Twice...

Oh my dear god, that was mayhem. i don't kow whether i love this or hate this anymore it's a compulsive read, i'm actually really glad how nice bill was to gustav (in a weird sort of way)
I was not expecting this it's almost as if you don't realise how fucked up the twins are in the head until you read about them killing as if christmas had come early and then after you get to the next bit you start to be lulled into the false security that mabye they might be ok then bam something like this happends...there are no words
athough i seem to have succeeded in using a few...

Author's Response: lol. In thier heads the malfunction lies with everyone else, not them. I\'m glad you think it\'s a compulsive read... and I hope you like the end.

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 9: Requiem

you what?

so they all exploded and died?

that was a truly unexpected end... it almost sounds unfinished well kind of. still fantastic though.
i really enjoyed this

Author's Response: ROTFLMAO. :D I guess that\'s for a reason. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

I love you. Marry me.
that was one heck of an epilogue so corrine (who i'm now guessing was a very small child at the time) lived afterall and bill and tom look after her?
gustav is a spy! gustav the spy...I could get used to that, and bill and tom are alive! I'm kindof happy about that in an odd sort of way, bill still keeps pets i see. Well now i'm going to write a script turn this into it's inevitable hollywood blockbuster and then give you the profit, just for making me happy...
i'm sad this is ending, I don't cry often...ok so i'm not crying now either but it's the thought that counts. I will be looking out for more of your stories!

Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!

Summary: All it takes is a knock, and he's as good as laid.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: PWP/Lemon, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Light Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23810 Read Count: 18009
[Report This] Published: 12/11/07 Updated: 02/29/08
Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed
Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Am I the only one who finds it kind of sad. Like Tom wants to acknowlege the relationship, and Bill is just having fun.
I don't know mabye I read to much into things