Date: 05/14/13 08:13 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
You wrote just enough to make me curious as to what's going to happen next then you leave me hanging! Thanks! lol
Date: 05/14/13 08:05 pm Title: Prologue
Two mysterious girls and two sexy twins...
What could go wrong? lol
Date: 08/10/12 12:22 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
your story is mazing! i love it and i cant wait for more!!!!
Date: 07/09/12 06:11 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
You can't just keep me hanging! Are they vampires? Murderers? Psychos? What! lol
Date: 07/09/12 05:27 pm Title: Prologue
Dum dum dum. I like these girls already.
Date: 05/30/11 03:47 am Title: Sometimes I feel...
wowww this stories exciting
Date: 11/13/10 06:29 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
This is soo awesome... :DDis there a next chapter...??
Date: 11/10/10 08:26 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
OMG IF ONLY THAT HAPPENED IN REALITY. GOOD STORY.
Date: 11/10/10 08:21 pm Title: Prologue
cool prologue. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 07/30/10 02:52 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
Loved it!
Date: 06/20/10 04:25 am Title: Sometimes I feel...
Oooh, I love it ! (: More soon please. :D
Date: 05/05/10 06:03 am Title: Sometimes I feel...
Couldn't imagine this happening xD haha, but very well written ^^ I like it.
Date: 02/13/10 12:56 am Title: Sometimes I feel...
oooh, innocent Bill not so inocent anymore huh? I wanna see how thiat turns out! lol
Date: 01/03/10 11:34 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
very nice. More please?
Date: 11/14/09 10:50 am Title: Prologue
Whoa.
Whoa.
Whoa.
That was awesooome. :D
Date: 10/31/09 04:03 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
I am sorry but it is sort of a little unrealistic even for a fan fiction, and a couple spelling mistakes, but I like it anyways!
Author's Response: I wrote this when I was half asleep, so I'll go back and edit once I add on a little more. Yeah, the plot was a little hastily done, but are any fan fictions realistic? If they were, they wouldn't be fun to read. Don't worry though, this is supposed to be a thriller, If I ever end up finishing it.
Date: 10/17/09 12:03 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...
Wow, intriguing ans exciting, can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
Date: 09/22/09 09:54 am Title: Sometimes I feel...
This was so good! It's realistic and I'm sure the rest is going to be great! Definately worth keeping track with!