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Reviewer: firsthowl9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/23 03:45 am Title: Prologue

nice

Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/13 08:13 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

You wrote just enough to make me curious as to what's going to happen next then you leave me hanging! Thanks! lol

Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/13 08:05 pm Title: Prologue

Two mysterious girls and two sexy twins...

What could go wrong? lol

Reviewer: jess21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/12 12:22 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

your story is mazing! i love it and i cant wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: AsheNik Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 06:11 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

You can't just keep me hanging! Are they vampires? Murderers? Psychos? What! lol

Reviewer: AsheNik Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 05:27 pm Title: Prologue

Dum dum dum. I like these girls already.

Reviewer: voodoochildbabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/11 03:47 am Title: Sometimes I feel...

wowww this stories exciting

Reviewer: Tamara483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 06:29 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

This is soo awesome... :DDis there a next chapter...??

Reviewer: RockyRachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 08:26 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

OMG IF ONLY THAT HAPPENED IN REALITY. GOOD STORY.

Reviewer: RockyRachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 08:21 pm Title: Prologue

cool prologue. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 02:52 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

Loved it!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 11:14 am Title: Prologue

Loved it!

Reviewer: xxskittlesxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 04:25 am Title: Sometimes I feel...

Oooh, I love it ! (: More soon please. :D

Reviewer: dubistheilig Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/10 06:03 am Title: Sometimes I feel...

Couldn't imagine this happening xD haha, but very well written ^^ I like it.

Reviewer: Mistress Fang Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/10 12:56 am Title: Sometimes I feel...

oooh, innocent Bill not so inocent anymore huh? I wanna see how thiat turns out! lol

Reviewer: schrei2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/10 11:34 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

very nice. More please?

Reviewer: jamikaulitz483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/09 10:50 am Title: Prologue

Whoa.

Whoa.

Whoa.

That was awesooome. :D

Reviewer: SpringNichtBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/09 04:03 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

I am sorry but it is sort of a little unrealistic even for a fan fiction, and a couple spelling mistakes, but I like it anyways!

Author's Response: I wrote this when I was half asleep, so I'll go back and edit once I add on a little more. Yeah, the plot was a little hastily done, but are any fan fictions realistic? If they were, they wouldn't be fun to read. Don't worry though, this is supposed to be a thriller, If I ever end up finishing it.

Reviewer: celi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/09 12:03 pm Title: Sometimes I feel...

Wow, intriguing ans exciting, can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: nadiawearsprada Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/09 09:54 am Title: Sometimes I feel...

This was so good! It's realistic and I'm sure the rest is going to be great! Definately worth keeping track with!

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