Date: 10/15/09 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 20- World
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pwees and extras pwees post more chapters =[
Date: 07/11/09 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 20- World
this fiction is... very depressing.. the slow-killing type.. I mean it's great.. very well written.. but it's just.... just... why does she care so much for sal! sal didn't care for her when she ran away out of horror and didn't look back.. I'm starting to hate her.. and hate bill and tom.. i mean.. i don't hate twincest.. but in this fic...... i hate them both..so much.. for being so emotionless... and care so little... i loathe them.. laura never deserved any of this.. well probably half of it... but not entirely.. oh please make Bill or Tom fall inlove with Laura.. i know it sounds stupid.. and that won't happen but.. i soooooooooo badly want to......... >_> mann..
Author's Response: no i'm glad to hear, it's what i was aiming for, don't worry though, it's about Laura having to get over Sal, x
Date: 07/11/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 18- Waiting
NO NO NOO!!! THE VAKMPIRES MUST DIE!!! IF GUSTAV HAD A CHOICE HE WOULDN'T HAVE ATTACKED THEM OR KILLED SAL!!!!! HE'S AN ANIMAL.. AN INSTINCT HE CAN'T CONTROL!! besides sal didn't even deserve her friend to do such a sacrifice.. sal didnt deserve for laura to get bitten by a vampire twice.. and everything... sal ran away for her life.. when the werewolf appeared.. she didn't even look back for her friend..!!! all she cared about was saving her own ass !!... and Gustav feels bad for her.. He didn't mean to.... and those bloody vampires.. are the ones who actually deserve to die..!!!
Date: 07/10/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 11- Captive
DONT KILL GUSTAV DONT KILL GUSTAV DONT KILL GUSTAV!.. too much twilight.. too much edward... i meaaaaaaan.. the reading minds thing.. >>__>> geeze.. I'm dying.. this twincest had to ruin everything.. !
Date: 07/10/09 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 6- Revenge
TWINCEST!?!?! oh nooo.. this thing was so PERFECT!!! and now there had to be twincest involved!?!????!!?!?? I think I'm gonna cry!!! *weeps like a little school girl in the corner* you can't do this to meeeee....!! ooouch.. i think my heart broke.. oh tom...
Date: 07/10/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 4- Vampires
This is actually one of my favourite fictions now,dear. And Laura is my favourite character.. her personality.. her taste in music.... whoa.. this is my second favourite fic after Iris' Confessions.! Man.. I actually moaned when Tom approached her.. MOANED.. geeze I never do that. I guess I just got my head waaaay into the story.
You have a way with writing and this fic is both exciting and interesting,so keep it up and update as often as possible!! *hands you a muffin* .. Muffins are love! Cheers!!
Date: 06/13/09 05:56 am Title: Chapter 19-thoughts
It's good, I really like how it's developing. Don't worry, it's quality, not quantity ;)
Author's Response: thankyou :) it's taken me Bit to update ,sorry
Date: 06/06/09 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 18- Waiting
the werewolf must die -nods-
Date: 06/06/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 18- Waiting
Great chap, but you made one mistake. When georg is sat on the bed you say 'Gustav hissed' instead of 'Georg hissed' I had to re-read it because it confused me, you might wanna change it :P
Author's Response: oh right, thankyou ^_^
Date: 06/05/09 03:29 am Title: Chapter 17- Friends
im not a twincest fan at all but I've read ur story and its amazing-I wish there was more bill and laura liking eachother but amazing work :)
Date: 06/03/09 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 17- Friends
I didn't get the last long, but everything else was great ;D
Date: 06/03/09 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 17- Friends
I was so shocked to find out Georg was Gustav best friend and that Gustav killed him, I did not see that coming.
I can't wait for more on this story.
Date: 05/31/09 07:48 am Title: Chapter 16- Manipulation
oh no, it's getting even more interesting!
Date: 05/25/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 16- Manipulation
wow! awesome! =D
a favorite for sure. ;)
Author's Response: thankyou :)
Date: 05/25/09 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 16- Manipulation
lol, oh please update soon... i get all exsited whenever i see that you've posted and once im done its left me in kind of a depression, lol
Date: 05/22/09 05:38 am Title: Chapter 15-Call
OMG I can't wait for the update on this. I just started reading it today and was texting my friend who loves vampire stories all about it. She is so going to start reading it now.
I can't wait for Angelica to visit, I wonder if she really is as nice as she seems and what will Tom and Bill say about her visit.
Author's Response: Yay ^_^ rnthanks for reading it :) i've just updated the next chapter, hope you likernx
Date: 05/19/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter 15-Call
It's really good, good stuff :) maybe try and introduce your own version of vampires. I read a lot in which the vampires are heavily influenced by Twilight. But I like your mind reading twist on the story
Author's Response: yeah i'm trying to keep away from the whole twilight idea of vampiresrnThankyou ^_^rnx
Date: 05/17/09 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 15-Call
aww, make the chapters longer =[
but its so great
Date: 05/15/09 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 14- answer
oOo that's a good chapter :) I liked that kind of cliffhanger. Nice work!
Date: 05/15/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 14- answer
*applauds* Wonderfulll XD And the banner is conming, but I have two ideas, so I'llmake them both and you can choose XD