Date: 04/11/10 09:09 pm Title: The Woman In White
Somewhere around the 3rd part I felt the story was getting a bit cheezy, and the only thing that saved a plot like this was your good writing. Had it not been for that, I probably wouldnt have finished this story. In fact, I never would have started this story if I hadnt trusted in your writing skills.
It was good, not awesome, but good IMO.
There were a few parts where I wondered where on earth this story was headed.. but you managed to pull it together pretty ok in the end.
I think your strengths in this story were the very hot sex scenes and the fact that you describe things so vividly.
Well done. (I think I've had my fill of Paranormal for a while tho, lol.)
Date: 04/25/09 06:20 pm Title: Playing
This made me lol oh so much. But it was shockingly beautiful also, and I loved Bill and Tomi as vampires and all of the sex scenes.
Date: 02/13/09 11:08 am Title: The Woman In White
Ahhhh, there needs to be more of this universe. STAT!
God, this was soooo hot. *big cheesy grin of satisfaction*
Date: 12/17/08 06:14 pm Title: The Woman In White
*giggles* I love you vampire universe. Have I said that before? Humm? Not that I can remember *chuckles* These stories are just so delicious and so much fun. They are always light and easy to read. They are like delicious candy I can't stop and I can't get enough.
Date: 07/27/08 08:07 am Title: Partying
I have always somehow skipped this story because it seemed a bit too "out-there" for me in the summary, but I'm soo glad I finally have read it! It's wonderful!!!!
And so funny! And sexy! And original! And intense!
So thank you very much for teaching me to be less prejudiced about genres ;-)
and i wouldn't mind this to be continued either...
Date: 03/02/08 04:05 pm Title: The Woman In White
You write with a certain ease. So many words, but they just flew by. The ending was perfect, that they can still keep up the banter and have the same closeness as before, maybe even more.
Author's Response: Thank you for all the lovely comments, I'm so very pleased you enjoyed the whole fic.