Date: 05/01/18 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 08/08/14 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww!! So sweet! :)
Date: 04/15/11 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute story :)I really enjoyed reading it!
There were a couple of mistakes in there, mainly verb tenses, but nothing too much (sorry, just thought I'd let you know)
Btw, I hate Valentine's day too XD
Date: 04/12/10 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhw! It would've been perfect if Simone walked in on them (aaa) Sorry, I've got a little thing about them getting caught. Hahah x)
Date: 02/24/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww! I really loved how you opened it! And I feel like Bill on Valentines Day.
Date: 02/14/09 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWWW! This was great.
And I wish your day was better, not that mine is five star either. But oh well, twin smut makes EVERYthing better
Date: 02/14/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was cute. hope your vday turns out ok.
Date: 02/14/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, I'm sorry you're having a bad day. I hate Valentine's Day...
Great story, really. I love how sweet it is! It makes up for my lack of chocolate on this day.
Date: 02/14/09 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww that was cute..and yes mine sucks 2=[ im sry..i wish urs could go better..u need a star...one that shines so bright u have 2 squint just 2 see it...one that so beautiful even though it hurtz 2 look u force it upon urself 2 look anyways...and i hope ur gf or some1 else can be that star 4 u=]
Date: 02/14/09 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww this was sooo cute and innocent! i love reading about Tom comforting Bil :) its just really sweet you did a great job! aww...i'm sorry about your problems...i hope they get sorted out soon or eventually so you wont suffer