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Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/15 02:17 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

This is so poetic and heartbreaking because it feels like goodbye --when it shouldn't, because they belong together. Beautiful. Really well done. Jeez... I felt this one and it's got me in one of those weird melancholy moods where u feel like crying. Ugh. Yeah, you're a good writer. :)

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 11:51 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

That was such a poignant story. I feel so bad for Tom and for Bill. Danke.

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: hott temper99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/10 11:04 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

this is so... pretty. all flowery and so very you. i don't know, i'm worse at reviews than you think you are, i'm sure, but anyhow, soley the fact that i got through this with my heart somewhat intact is amazing.

its just so very sad and desperate and hopeless and i totally felt everything that tom did because you discribe everything with such reality, you know? i was reading this and thinking, i can't believe that its twinscest in a hotelroon and she turned it into poetry.

can i just say i love you? i love you!

Author's Response: you are so not bad at reviewing. far from it. i am so glad you liked it, and that it didn't break your heart too much, heh. of course you can say that, but only if i get so say it back. :) thanks for the review, girly, i really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 06:08 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

I have only one thing to say about this; It was heartbreakingly, painfully beautiful.. (Can one even say that?)

So amazing, poetic and bitter-sweet, leaving me wanting more. Now what? Oh, I guess we'll never know..

Beautiful, truly beautiful!

Author's Response: thank you! :)

Reviewer: Saiisuke Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 09:56 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

It's so beautiful and full of metaphors, I really enjoyed it:)

Author's Response: thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/20/10 12:25 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

another amazing piece of work....you really inspire me.

Author's Response: that's so nice to hear, thank you!

Reviewer: Riven Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 05:35 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

I love your smut, its nice to read a little smut with your heartbreak and nostalgia.

I like so many of your words, but these ones I loved even more than usual "a voice reserved only for prayers and birthday wishes."

I am a little sad you don’t write happy stories per say, but I guess they would taste funny when combined with your beautiful and measured and always a little wounding way of writing.

Thank you very much for sharing your art.

~Riv

Author's Response: honestly? i don't think i could write happy stories even if i tried (and i have tried). XD sorry. still, though, thank you so much for your kind words, i truly appreciate them. :)

Reviewer: erikdesoir Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 08:27 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

My heart is in my throat and I feel like throwing it up, I am in that much pain from this. I love you, adore you, for this, yet there is an element of loathing, a little seedling. God! It was so thick and rich and creamy and jagged! *bookmarks*

Author's Response: then my mission is complete. :) it hurt to write this, so i know where you're coming from. thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/19/09 12:34 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

My bedtimestory for tonight (wait, it's morning already here?). You just can't disappoint me. Thank you.. again... There's nothing else I can say which I haven't said already in other reviews. I adore your skills, I really do (not even flattering here :)).

Author's Response: It's really all I need to hear. :) So thank you!

Reviewer: Di_As Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 07:13 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

I totally adored this. It's so beautiful, The way you express feelings and situations is just beautiful. I don't think I am able to leave a decent review, all I can say is that it's just so beautiful. ._.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think the review is more than decent. :)

Reviewer: Anchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 12:00 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

You have the gift of small sentences that just pack a punch. The way you cut from the fluency of a description to the rough edges of a few well thought words gives the story just a perfect counter point in just the right places.
And again, the ease with which it flows and the blurry lines that seem to come from the story, (as if we're watching it all unfold behind a silk sheet, only catching glimpses of shadows) make it all the more beautiful

Author's Response: I can't thank you enough for your nice words... They really made my day! Thank you so much for the review. (:

Reviewer: spilled milk Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/09 11:43 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

despite my distaste for top bill, this was still very good. and angsty, always angsty. it's like a nice heaping bowl of angst for breakfast :D that made no sense, but anyway, great job as always, like you could ever do anything but. you are the BEST.

Author's Response: Haha, I hope I didn't traumatize you with the top!Bill too much, bb *pets* I'm so very glad you liked it!! :D Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Made-Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 11:15 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

How can every word you write simply fit together? I find myself wanting to take words upon words from you and show them to everyone I know in hope that they'll find the same amount of enjoyment and wonder that I do.

It feels a lot like reading poetry, but it's much less abstract, and there's much more room to think.

I always find myself parched, needing just one more sip. Just one more sentence.

Author's Response: I do have a thing for poetry, and poetic prose in particular, so perhaps this is just my subcounscious taking form. :) Thank you so much for the review!!

Reviewer: x_starcrossed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 09:21 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

I love that poem!

Author's Response: Me too. (:

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 08:41 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

SOOOOOOO HAWT!!

Author's Response: Haha, you really think so? XD Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 04:20 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

You told me you were writing sex, but ... I should have known anyway that it would be poetic, and beautiful, and painful. You did it wonderfully; I'm so very impressed.

Not that it should be a surprise, I suppose, and it's really not. You know your words leave me in awe, and breathless, and often teary. I'm so happy every time I see something new from you, but also very nervous, because I know that it's gonna hurt. But I run to it anyway. You have that much power.

Author's Response: You have perfect timing, you know that? It's that time of the year (yes, year) again and I was feeling down and then you reviewed and made me feel better. (: I was so nervous about the sex scene, you have no idea. It was a pain writing it as well, it felt like I just couldn't get it right. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the wonderful review, as usual. =)

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 01:33 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

so angsty. (:
very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you!! (:

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 12:26 pm Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

You sure can work your words girl.

Author's Response: Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: Sophies Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 11:48 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

beautiful, just... beautiful, what else could I say? it's like every word is there for a reason and they all link together so perfectly.
i must say your writing reminds alot of the author of white oleander, i think her name's janet fitch or something like that. I love her books, btw =P And I really love your writing.

Author's Response: White Oleander... Has that book been made into a movie? Because I recognize the title but I have definitely not read the book. I am so checking out that author, though!! Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Burntsienna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 11:31 am Title: —an echo, a memory, a fragment to be encased

I love TS Eliot, passionately. Your writing is very beautiful! It is one of those really finessed things, walking the line between writing that is flat and without vibrancy, and writing that is choked with adjectives and visuals to the exclusion of story flow. You achieve the balance perfectly and the result is not a collection of words but a sculpture. I love the aesthetics so much that I will forgive you for the ending, which isn't easy for me to read because I believe above all in the indestructible strength of their bond. Awesome job on this.

Author's Response: TS Eliot is definitely my favorite poet. I can't thank you enough for your kind words; that balance is hard to achieve and I'm so glad you you think I managed to grasp it. I think it's easier to write those kind of endings, at least for me, than to actually read them. I, like you, believe their bond is indestructible but the fic just called for an ending like this one. Thank you so much for your review, it's rocking my socks. :)

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