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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/21 01:16 am Title: Awakened from Dormancy

please update

Reviewer: s3s3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/13 04:42 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

OMy gosh, i just discovered your story. well tell story. please dont give up on it. it's great.
thank you :D

Reviewer: AussieGirl411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/12 08:51 am Title: The Park and The Walk In

You've probably abandoned this but really wish you didn't. It's so interesting! And has a fair amount of potential development. Consider take it back up????? Even if you just have something left over that you didn't post, that'd be good :)

Reviewer: yoruakiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/11 08:13 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

please, please, please update. you've got me hooked but suddenly stopped.

Reviewer: TeresaGoodmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/11 09:03 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy

Hey!
So I haven't read your story yet - I bet it's good but I just wanted to let you now that the name of your story is kind of wrong - I mean if you want it to be the right translation of "eyes of gold" Anyway this would be the right "Augen aus Gold" or "Augen wie Gold" ("eyes like gold")

Author's Response: Actually, Augen von Goldes is correct. Having 'wie' instead of 'von' WOULD make it 'like', which isn't what I was after. Aus would have also been appropriate, but I liked the way 'von' looked and sounded in the title. I check all my translations very thoroughly before I use them.

Reviewer: viina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/10 01:42 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

OH NO!!!! PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS REAAALLLY GOOD! LOOK AT YOU! DEGRADING ME INTO ALL CAPS AGAIN! I HAVEN'T DONE THIS SINCE I WAS AN IMMATURE 12 YEAR OLD!!!!

Author's Response: I'm really sorry to you and all the other readers that I haven't updated this story, or my others. I just haven't been able to write anything since my good friend died. I really don't want to force out a chapter and I hope you and everyone else understands that. I will update as soon as I feel up to it I promise, but until then please be patient with me. Thank you very much for your support with this story. :) Allie.

Reviewer: viina Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/10 01:31 pm Title: Not For The Faint of Heart

poor Bill...but Tomi is there to make it all better now!

Reviewer: Kaulitz190 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 01:50 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

*_* Pretty.......!
I love is story so much you grab me into your story i love everything about
its little fast but i dont mind I feel sorry for Tom for getting pick on in school for his eyes
i would love to have Gold eyes xD! it would amazing but thank god Bill came into town ^_^
but i did feel sorry for Tom going throught all that pain with his Magic but good Billia is helping him out ^_^ but poor Bill :( that flashback is of his was sad and oooo last part of is story was sexy ^^ that what i wait for xDD LOL kissing and sexy part of the story until Andi came in lol silly Andi ! and that hope his doesn't open his mouth so no one find out =/.. i cant wait for the rest please carry on ^^

Reviewer: rIKU rOCKS Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 08:19 am Title: The Park and The Walk In

i really had fun reading this

Reviewer: KookiCookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/09 01:04 am Title: The Park and The Walk In

i <3 this story!! yay! keep writing please!!

-KC

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/09 12:36 am Title: The Park and The Walk In

YAY!! now there is some action! it kinda hurts to know tom feels that way everytime bill takes his magic, but its good to know they got a way to distract themselves LOL n OMK! haha poor andi! really! what a shock! i tried so hard not to laugh when i read that XD

Reviewer: nigerianxpride Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 07:34 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

whoa this story is really good!

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 07:20 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

Eeek! Tom and Bill together. It's so cute :) It's interesting how their powers are drawn together, they are ment to be together. THeir power knows it's right now the have to.

Reviewer: xVeroGore Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 04:03 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

omg, sooo hot! keep on writhing...! :D

Reviewer: KayEmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 01:12 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

Oh, PLEASE keep up with this story!

Reviewer: scarletswidow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 01:06 pm Title: The Park and The Walk In

Glad to see this updated!

And like the development with Tom and Bill's relationship ^_^

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 10:55 am Title: The Park and The Walk In

Oh you're back and so are the golden eyed boys! Love this story and it's always great to see you updating! :D

Reviewer: mon1652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/09 02:18 pm Title: Suspicion

cool Banner and I didn't expect the fight with the jocks to be what Bill was scared of happening to Tom that day. And I'm curious too about why their magic want to mix. I think it's like finding your mate or something.

Reviewer: mon1652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/09 01:59 pm Title: Not For The Faint of Heart

Wow I didn't expect such a grusome past for Bill. But I love that you told Bill story about how his powers were awoken. I can just imagine and it ripes my heart out. and I bet maybe David had something to do with it. It wasn't randon but a way to awaken Bill's powers.

Reviewer: kobrahedo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/09 06:39 pm Title: Not For The Faint of Heart

im totally making a banner! I will have one for you by...um....this weekend at latest...oh! and my email is kobrahedo@gmail.com so email me so i can send it!

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