oh my god...I just finished reading all four I got too excited to review for the other ones but I'm going to make it up.. The story was really great..you know you are really brilliant and I would really like to have an imagination like yours.. and yeah if this were true I would imagine bill would be the diva that he is and would be the one to have stronger powers but I really love this story and I would hope you come up with more of the series because I really enjoyed reading it..

Author's Response: thank you for the very lovely review. I'm glad you liked my stories so much :)

OK, things are beginning to become clearer now. That summary at the end was for me wasn't it? *sigh* I'm so slow. Too bad about the whole negative energy thing. It would be entertaining it Tom was positive energy instead, but that would destroy your explanation, sort of...

So, is Bill playing into that raven godess' hands or taking his own path? And was Tom supposed to have lost his feathers?

Author's Response: Yes, tom was supposed to lose his feathers, and bill wouldhave started to not long after his brother, but they didn't have the rationality to wait and see if that would happen. No, Bill's pretty much doing what the goddess said he would, sadly.rnrnAnd you're not slow, it's just that, as an author, i tend to leave some my stories not fully explained so that you can imagine what you will and so, even if the premises are the same the conclusions different people can come to are different. I know it bugs some people that i do that and i'll try to keep my stories neater from now on, but a little amount of uncertinty is welcomed in stories, wouldn't you think?

so, just a question... i understand the whole bill thing from this chapter, but why was tom losing his red feathers? i mean Kyara wasn't losing hers, was she? i really love your story, i just was kind of confused by that.

Author's Response: well Tom and Bill were the actuall messengers as oposed to Kyara and Shirai. The girls had different collored feathers by accident, let's say a mutation. Tom was loosing his feathers as a part of a natural process, so to speak that would end up in him loosing his wings altogether (as the prophecy from the last chapter stated, that wings would no longer be needed). He just started the whole deal earlier that Bill, because if they would have waited a bit Bill would have started loosing feathers as well.