Date: 04/19/17 05:52 pm Title: What They Do
I CAN'T BELIEVE I NEVER READ THIS I was scared by Manzini in the banner I guess (don't even ask why, I have no idea now that I think about it) but well, at least it was new and exciting for me now.
I LOVED IT even though it was very painful at some point - combined with me being on my period omg - and my heart ached for the poor twins and I just felt like shouting at you for being mean. Lucky for you, you weren't online hahah xxx But I knew this was going to end happily anyway.
.. And some painful fics are worth going through the worse parts, and this definitely was one of them. I literally cried when they finally made up.
They were hot and sweet and amazing as always.
I have too many feelings now about this THANK YOU I LOVED THIS. Putting it in my favorites right now.
Author's Response: Haha glad you finally read it! It was painful to write D:
Date: 12/14/10 07:43 pm Title: What They Do
Honestly, I think it could have been better. It dragged on for way too long. Yeah, how long it went on between them was important, but I think it may have been better if it was cut down. It was repetitive and that was without reading every single paragraph.
Also, it was so long for a oneshot. There is absolutely nothing wrong with taking a oneshot and making it a two shot if the word count is that high.
The writing itself was good. I didn't notice any mistakes.
Date: 04/28/09 11:35 pm Title: What They Do
I love all of the G's new names for Manzini! They were so funny! There were parts of it that were so funny, and then there were others that really weren't. At all.
Speaking of those parts, the part where Tom realizes that it's all his fault, that Bill was trying so hard and Tom was pushing him away, made me cry. Then again, it's late...so maybe that was it. But this is definately one of my favorite fics of all time.