Date: 10/29/13 09:55 am Title: Chapter 4
The kids drive my mom crazy cause of my laughter
Date: 05/22/13 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill's kids are little shits.
:/
And that's how you leave them! You've gotta come back and finish this, redeem everybody!! Come on!
Date: 05/22/13 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Dang! Lol that was brave of Tom, too bad he's just gotten himself into something way over his head!
Date: 05/20/13 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nude David, never thought I'd see the day. jk lol.
I'm surprised Bill's not on his kid's butts for the whole chucking things at Tom in the first chapter. But I feel a scolding wouldn't do much.
Poor Tom..
Date: 05/20/13 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Where has Tom been? Why are Bill's children trying to kill him?!
Questions questions!
Date: 06/27/12 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
hahahhahaha i just couldn't stop laughing can you post the other one plzzz????
Date: 12/12/11 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
i am in love with this already!
Date: 09/07/11 02:23 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow these kids are just something else. It's a really funny and good story :) man if me and my brothers did this to our uncle he shoot us. Poor Tom. Really good though keep it up I wanna see what happens next.
Date: 08/01/11 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
awesome story! update pleaseee
Date: 02/22/11 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1
This is great, But I want more, you must update.
Date: 02/21/11 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Make it a fantasy that tom is in and the kids tackle him out of the worst case senario
Date: 08/31/10 12:17 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!
Date: 08/31/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 2
oh wow I couldn't think to have this happen to me
Date: 08/30/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so cool good job I love it!
Date: 08/14/10 05:37 am Title: Chapter 4
Fucking funny. Loved It. So awesome. I'd hate to be in the car with Tom. Hahaha.
Date: 08/10/10 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is hilariouse!
the chapter where their talking 'Gangster' to tom is how most of the people round my area talk :)
aah good old chavs!