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Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/08 06:06 pm Title: December 16th

Story is my fav., cookies are my fav.
and I'm hungry,
now...
FEED IT TO ME BABIEEE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/08 05:56 pm Title: December 16th

Awww cute...

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/08 02:11 am Title: December 14th

What I want for Christmas, I wont get. I want to meet TH more then anything.

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/08 07:33 pm Title: December 14th

Awwe. That's cute. Lovey Dovey cutie patooties.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/08 07:12 pm Title: December 14th

this was cute

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/08 06:14 pm Title: December 14th

*tear* that was cute!
and what I want for christmas is...
*thinks*
Your FACE!!!

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/08 03:14 pm Title: December 14th

I loved it. You put 'bases' instead of 'basis' somewhere though and you still need to work on your apostrophes, but other than that it was amazing. Update soon, honey. This fic is really good. :)

Reviewer: katee Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/08 02:14 am Title: December 12th

i want to know the hot, sexy dream!!!!!!! nothing like a good Christmas romance.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/08 03:43 pm Title: December 12th

awe... this is still as sweet as ever >.<

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/08 01:59 pm Title: December 12th

AMAZING!
that's like a regular thing for you though...
you little amazing thing you!!
*giggles*

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/08 05:27 am Title: December 12th

I enjoyed this, a bit on the short side, but it was good. I think Tom over-reacted a bit too much, which I feel didn't seem to make a lot of sense, but when they made up I think that made up for it. You missed possessive apostrophes again, Bill's, Tom's though.

And this sentence: 'They lay down in bed face to face, they were both beyond happy right now, they could not stop smiling even though it has only been a few hours, though, and it had felt like a lifetime to both twins.' was a bit off in my opinion.

I believe: 'They lay down in bed, face to face. They were both beyond happy right now, they could not stop smiling, even though it had only been a few hours, it had felt like a lifetime to both twins.' would sound better.

Other than that though it was truly lovely, this fic really is a good read. Update soon, honey, you have me hooked. *hugs* Oh..and I thought the last sentence was great. :)

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/08 01:54 am Title: December 12th

Awe. What sweetie-pies. :3

Reviewer: BabyPlease Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/08 12:59 am Title: December 12th

awww this is one of my favorite stories, its so cute!
i cant wait for more presents lol!
:D

Reviewer: queenmadness Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 09:48 pm Title: December 10th

ahahah, supper adorable, cant wait for the 25th of december.. Lol :)

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 05:17 pm Title: December 1st

Loved it. Just going to point out the one recurring mistake I kept noticing and that is your tendency to put 'set' instead of 'sat'. Except for that it was adorable as always. Can't wait for the twins to finally confess their love, but I must admit the build-up is so sweet. Good work on the banner, by the way. Update soon, honey. :)

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 03:43 am Title: December 10th

Cute as ever ... I am soo looking forward to the end of this story.  ^__^ But I know its still a long ways away :D Great work.

 

Reviewer: BabyPlease Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/08 10:56 pm Title: December 10th

love the banner! its so cute!
:)
love the story too!
:D
more please.

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/08 09:22 pm Title: December 10th

This story is the warm and cozy story of my LIFE!

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/08 08:53 pm Title: December 10th

Awwwwwee

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/08 05:03 pm Title: December 1st

Ooo.. just to let you know, that was about the fifth chapter, just to avoid any confusion. :) Oh and here's the long awaited awwwwwwwww this fic seriously deserves from everyone. :P

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