Date: 12/16/08 06:06 pm Title: December 16th
Story is my fav., cookies are my fav.
and I'm hungry,
now...
FEED IT TO ME BABIEEE!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12/15/08 02:11 am Title: December 14th
What I want for Christmas, I wont get. I want to meet TH more then anything.
Date: 12/14/08 07:33 pm Title: December 14th
Awwe. That's cute. Lovey Dovey cutie patooties.
Date: 12/14/08 07:12 pm Title: December 14th
this was cute
Date: 12/14/08 06:14 pm Title: December 14th
*tear* that was cute!
and what I want for christmas is...
*thinks*
Your FACE!!!
Date: 12/14/08 03:14 pm Title: December 14th
I loved it. You put 'bases' instead of 'basis' somewhere though and you still need to work on your apostrophes, but other than that it was amazing. Update soon, honey. This fic is really good. :)
Date: 12/14/08 02:14 am Title: December 12th
i want to know the hot, sexy dream!!!!!!! nothing like a good Christmas romance.
Date: 12/13/08 03:43 pm Title: December 12th
awe... this is still as sweet as ever >.<
Date: 12/13/08 01:59 pm Title: December 12th
AMAZING!
that's like a regular thing for you though...
you little amazing thing you!!
*giggles*
Date: 12/13/08 05:27 am Title: December 12th
I enjoyed this, a bit on the short side, but it was good. I think Tom over-reacted a bit too much, which I feel didn't seem to make a lot of sense, but when they made up I think that made up for it. You missed possessive apostrophes again, Bill's, Tom's though.
And this sentence: 'They lay down in bed face to face, they were both beyond happy right now, they could not stop smiling even though it has only been a few hours, though, and it had felt like a lifetime to both twins.' was a bit off in my opinion.
I believe: 'They lay down in bed, face to face. They were both beyond happy right now, they could not stop smiling, even though it had only been a few hours, it had felt like a lifetime to both twins.' would sound better.
Other than that though it was truly lovely, this fic really is a good read. Update soon, honey, you have me hooked. *hugs* Oh..and I thought the last sentence was great. :)
Date: 12/13/08 01:54 am Title: December 12th
Awe. What sweetie-pies. :3
Date: 12/13/08 12:59 am Title: December 12th
awww this is one of my favorite stories, its so cute!
i cant wait for more presents lol!
:D
Date: 12/11/08 09:48 pm Title: December 10th
ahahah, supper adorable, cant wait for the 25th of december.. Lol :)
Date: 12/11/08 05:17 pm Title: December 1st
Loved it. Just going to point out the one recurring mistake I kept noticing and that is your tendency to put 'set' instead of 'sat'. Except for that it was adorable as always. Can't wait for the twins to finally confess their love, but I must admit the build-up is so sweet. Good work on the banner, by the way. Update soon, honey. :)
Date: 12/11/08 03:43 am Title: December 10th
Cute as ever ... I am soo looking forward to the end of this story. ^__^ But I know its still a long ways away :D Great work.
Date: 12/10/08 10:56 pm Title: December 10th
love the banner! its so cute!
:)
love the story too!
:D
more please.
Date: 12/10/08 09:22 pm Title: December 10th
This story is the warm and cozy story of my LIFE!
Date: 12/10/08 05:03 pm Title: December 1st
Ooo.. just to let you know, that was about the fifth chapter, just to avoid any confusion. :) Oh and here's the long awaited awwwwwwwww this fic seriously deserves from everyone. :P