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Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/14 10:58 am Title: Chapter 41

This was a short but brilliant chapter; you've developed the characters so well and made Bill's situation and his emotions so real. And...oh, poor Bill. He's managed to convince himself he's of absolutely no value to anyone, not even Tomi. The only hopeful part of this chapter was Andreas refusing to give up on him. Let's hope that eventually Bill will start to see that he deserves to be loved and cared for as much as anyone else and Andi is the person to do just that. But I'm sure there's a long way to go until that realisation. And how can he think Tomi will forget about him; his brother adores him. I'm so fearful for Bill right now, and I'm already anxious about Tomi waking up and finding Bill's gone. Hoping for another update soon. Love, Helen x

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I always write like it's a script (probably why it's very speech heavy) I tend to speak it out loud and put myself in my characters shoes to really know what they would feel...acting has been very helpful to me! :L I'm really excited to write the next chapter actually :) I always love your reviews, thanks! rnMuch love, Fern xx

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/14 02:31 am Title: Chapter 41

You're welcome! Glad to help. :)

Author's Response: <3

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/14 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 40

So sad. Bill's at the point of rejecting the chance of a new life because he doesn't feel he deserves it. He's pushing Andreas away and feeling so insecure he's going back to the only thing he knows how to do, letting people use his body. But he can't walk away from Andi and his parents; if he does what will happen to poor Tomi? He has to put his own misgivings aside to give his brother some security and comfort. The only thing I'm beginning to wonder is when he'll feel he has to try and repay Andreas' family for their kindness and just how he'll go about that. Will he take on more clients so he feels he's paying his way? What will Andi have to say about that if he finds out? And he will find out, won't he because he'll wonder where Bill got the money. Sorry, there I go again speculating. I just really feel so badly for Bill and Tom. Hoping for another update soon. Hugs, Helen x

Author's Response: I always look forward to your reviews on every chapter! You just get exactly what I'm trying to put across =3 me too! I'm not sure how that's all gonna go down yet but I'm sure the characters will tell me eventually :L rnThanks for being your amazing self! rnFern <3

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/14 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 40

Aww poor Bill :( It's sad that being used for sex is the only thing he's ever known :( I hope things get better and soon!

Author's Response: Haha I hope it all gets better too! This chapters events came from nowhere lol I didn't plan them at all but hey they were good so I ran with it :D rnThanks for reviewing! rnFern xx

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/14 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 40

Not evil enough lol but thanks for the update

Author's Response: Wow you must be really bad if that's not evil enough! Haha ad you're welcome, I'm hoping to get chapter 41 up pretty soon :) rnThanks for the review! rnFern xx

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/14 10:52 am Title: Chapter 39

Mixed emotions in this chapter. Happy for Bill and Tom having found friends and acceptance, sleeping in nice beds, getting enough to eat, Bill not having to go out and prostitute himself every night. But so sad the way the past haunts them both, with Bill hiding in the bathroom from Gustav, Tomi hiding behind Bill from Gustav, and Bill recalling all the horrors of his and Tomi's childhood. The things he suffered to keep his special twin safe, but Tom was a frightened mess too. They need so much love and care to even try and mend some of the damage. I hope they stay with Andreas and his family so they can get used to having a normal family life. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: I always looks forward to your reviews! thanks for leaving me awesome comments and suggestions :) I hope the next chapter wont be too long in writing and that it wont disappoint! rnthanks again <3 rnFern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/14 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 39

oh damn : the end of this chapter made me want to hug them both!

Author's Response: Tehe ^_^ things were getting too comfy in the last chapter :L I wish I could crawl in to my story sometimes and just hug them both too! rnAlways a nice review 💕rnFern xx

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/13 11:59 am Title: Chapter 38

I was so happy to see your update. I love this chapter, love how you write Bill and Tom's relationship. Love the way you describe how strange their new circumstances seem to each of them. Oh, so sad the conclusion Tomi jumped to when Bill came into the bedroom naked. I'm wondering how Tom will take it if (when) Bill and Andi get together as a couple. Since Bill's told Tom friends don't do 'that' to each other he's gonna freak if he discovers Andi and Bill having sex. Okay, I'm jumping ahead there, but you suck me in completely with this story. I think its amazing Bill still has enough morals that he won't 'steal' food, just the pizza he's been told he can have. And now Andi's home so I'm hoping for another update soon. Hope you had a good Christmas and have a Happy New Year, hugs Helen x

Author's Response: Aww good! I'm quite happy with it too :) I know...Bill was getting too happy so I had to drop in a little heartache :L and yeah, it's gonna be a whole load of hurt when it comes out =/ rnBut thanks again for an awesome review! I look forward to them every chapter <3 there might not be another chapter for about 2 weeks as I'm in a pantomime show over the new year so I have little time to write but I'll try my best!! rnSending you much love! rnFern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/13 11:41 am Title: Chapter 38

Aww Bill is too cute in this chapter! Love it :D Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Haha Ikr? I just can't help myself when it comes to Tom and cuteness! The rest of the story is so serious that I need some fluff lol rnThanks for reviewing! rnVielen dank! 💕

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/13 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 37

Finally a slice of comfort :D

Author's Response: Haha yeah! I've tortured my boys enough :L but don't get too comfy! The next chapter has been started :D rnThanks for a lovely review! <3 rnFern xx

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/13 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 37

This chapter made me feel all warm and fuzzy. You wrote the twins with just the right mix of suspicion and gratitude for the change in their circumstances. It was realistic the way they both could only eat a small amount of the pizza because the capacity of their stomachs would have shrunk with hunger. It was just so sweet the way they shared a nice clean, comfortable bed and Bill put his arm protectively around his brother. I'm really looking forward to reading more about them adjusting to their new surroundings and what happens when they properly meet Gustav.

Author's Response: im so glad you think I got that balance right! I struggled so hard with it! so thanks so much! and yeah originally I had it like they just gorge but then I thought nah cos irl it wouldn't be that way so I changed it :) haha don't get too warm and fuzzy, in true me style, things don't stay good for long! :L ive already got the next chapter started so hopefully it wont be long before 38 is out! rnthanks for a great review as always! <3 <3 <3 rnFern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/13 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 37

Aww! Tom is too cute, they're both too cute! I love it :D

Author's Response: tehe ^_^ I love it when I get to make them both a little bit cute :) cos Bill is usually just so controlled, I like to take him out of his depth a little :L rnthanks for leaving me a review! <3 <3 rnFern xx

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/13 03:12 am Title: Chapter 36

Don't know what you didn't like about it, it was a brilliant chapter. Of course Bill was going to be uber suspicious and feel betrayed that Andi had told his dad about him and Tom, but I'm glad Andi stood his ground and made Bill listen to him. And I loved the way you wrote the almost-kiss. Bill's going to have trouble with real affection, I should think, and will probably consider himself dirty and not good enough for someone like Andi anyway with all he's had to do to make money. Oh, I can't wait for when they get to Andi's and Tom's reaction to having a bath and sleeping in a clean bed and getting enough to eat. Hoping for an update soon.

Author's Response: I dunno the flow just felt wrong ...haha yeah it felt weird writing it but it turned out how I hoped and yeah he is...it isn't going to be all sunshine and flowers with Andi Gustav and Nikki... And I'm looking forward to writing that side of things! I'll be back on it in the next few days, just need a bit of time to catch up on my sleep :L thanks for being such an awesome reviewer <3 much love! rnFern xx

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/13 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 36

Finally they are getting something good. And there is nothing I love more than a slow Tom XD (I have no idea why)

Author's Response: Haha I adore slow Tom...I wrote it this way round because a damaged Bill has been so overdone...I rarely read about a slow Tom :L and yeah finally! It took a long time for me to get them this far :L thanks for leaving me a lovely review! rnFern xx

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/13 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 36

Yaaay hopefully good times will actually come for tom and bill x3

Author's Response: Yeah :D it took a loooong time to get the twins to this point! Thanks for a lovely review! rnFern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/13 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 36

Aww yay! I knew Bill would take to the idea :D And poor Tomi being scared shitless...can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Haha same but I never know with Bill, sometimes he surprises me :L and Toms always scared shitless and is it any wonder? :L thanks for the review! Much love! <3 rnFern xx

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 04:54 am Title: Chapter 35

So happy you updated. I love that Bill is starting to feel something for Andi; hopefully he'll be a little less harsh on him when he finds out Andi told on him to his father. It was so sweet the way Andreas tried to soothe Tom by fetching his teddy bear. It breaks my heart though, that poor Tomi is left all alone while Bill goes and does what he has to to get them money. If Andi can get into the house so easily, then so can anyone. Fingers crossed here for Bill accepting Andi and Gustav's offer of a place to stay, somewhere he and his brother can be safe. The twins deserve a little comfort, a bed and a hot meal and folks who care about them. But first Andi has to break the news to Bill and I'm sure Bill will be more than a little suspicious of Gustav's intentions. Update soon please.

Author's Response: I had to start bring that side of things in (though I have to admit, lovey dovey mushy stuff is not my strong point!)because Andi's been feeling it for a while now, I need to know Bill was feeling it too :L and yeah it sucks but what else can he do? he took Tomi once before and look what happened?? =/ I dunno what Bills gonna do yet XD I don't know anything until I write it I just let the characters drive :L thanks once again for being such a wonderful reader! your comments are always immense <3 rnFern xx

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 12:35 am Title: Chapter 35

Aww poor Tomi...I'd say I'd hug him, but that would scare him to no end to have a complete randomer give him a hug.

Author's Response: indeed it would, hell I wrote the damn character and I wouldn't just hug Tom he might hurt me! we may see a little more first hand of Tomi's violent streak ;) rnFern xx

Reviewer: jaydodger_95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/13 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 34

YES! Bill and Tomi may finally get something good happen to them! AHH, I could hug you! You've been on such a roll lately it's really picking up pace. You got me all excited to find out what happens next. A+, 5 stars! Keep it up!

Author's Response: wow thank you so much! -ubermassivehugs!!!- its getting awesome responses from you guys that keep me writing so thank you! <3 the next instalment is being written as we speak but keep an eye on here or twitter of my facebook to know when I next post! rnthanks again! sending you much love! rnFern xx

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/13 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 34

So happy for another update. I'm really glad Andreas spoke up, and that Gustav actually listened. I just hope Bill won't feel Andi betrayed his trust. And I think Gustav is right, I'm also wondering how on earth Bill and Tom will manage to live with an ordinary family after all they've been through. Keeping my fingers crossed for them, though, they both deserve some happiness, and maybe a little romance for Bill and Andi...?

Author's Response: Me too! I'm gonna be so lost when it ends! =/ there's light at the end of the tunnel, but it's always gets darker before it gets lighter >;) an I don't yet know how Bill is going to take anything! If he takes it at all! But there is defiantly some kind of romance for him and Andi =3 rnThanks for always leaving me really lovely reviews! Much love! rnFern xx

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