Date: 04/23/17 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ugh Bushido is an asshole. Tom was so frightened and he didn't give a shit. I'm proud Bill tried to stand up for himself later but it just got him hurt. :( But maybe a sign that he really wants to break away now.
Date: 04/23/17 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my holy God, how have i only just found this fic now? Only 700 words in i am totally fucking hooked and scared for BIll and want to know more about the situation he and Tom are in. I'm imagining the guy in the car was Bushido, but at least they have some money for food for the week. I wonder what Tom is doing? :( This is amazing!!
Date: 06/21/15 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 46
Is it really the end ?
Well, I loved reading this story !
The way you described Tom was very tender.
And Bill's way of thinking was very close to what a human living such a life could thing of himself and the others.
And of course, it was difficult to imagine Bill being definitely out of danger after being back in his dad's hands. But it's hard to just finish like that.
Could we imagine that finally, Andy has given the call and the police arrives quickly enough to save them. And after a long time in hospital, Bill finally manages to get over all this horror and goes back to Andy's to find Tom...
Well, anything sweet and sugary but no death end, please :)
But anyway, it was a very nice story and even if you decide to keep it realistic, I really loved it.
Author's Response: Surprise! It's not the end there's another chapter or two left! I'm just always super busy so it's taking a while to finish but I'm glad you stuck with it and enjoyed it! rnFern xx
Date: 03/26/15 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
Little quibble I guess, and it's probably a bit late to be picking on this detail now, but prostitutes tend to make more money underage. The taboo market is huge and people will pay a lot if you even look too young. Good fic though, I'll keep reading.
Date: 03/22/15 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 46
Thank you for updating, so sorry you've been having a shitty time. I'm so happy they've found Bill...but how can you leave it there!!!! Gustav has to be alright, and please God that he shot Gordon before the man could stab either of the boys. Please, please update again soon. Love and hugs, Helen xx
Date: 12/26/14 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 45
Thank you for updating at this time of year. I want them to find Bill soooo badly. I know he'll be an absolute mess when they do and it will be just as hard to get him to accept help and to see that he is worthy of a better life but I can't wait for his reunion with Tomi and to see where the relationship with Andi might go. Please, please tell me things are going to get better soon. Fingers crossed. Hope you had a great Christmas and you have a happy New Year. Love, Helen xx
Author's Response: Same! And i hope it gets better, but tbh it all depends on my personal headspace, if I'm feeling shitty then someone's probably gonna die in a fiction :') but they are gonna find him next chapter, but we'll have to wait for his reaction :L I had a relatively quite Christmas but that's the way I like it :) and same to you dear, thank you for being such a loyal reader <3rnFern xxx
Date: 09/30/14 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 44
Gustav's story is so sad, but it makes him able to empathise with Bill. I love that it's Tom who has given them the clue to Bill's whereabouts. Now they just have to find him and race to the rescue. Another great chapter, thanks for updating.
Author's Response: Thanks for a lovely review, and yeah I needed someone to understand what he's going through and I needed it to be Tom because he is the only one who knows! Thanks again!rnFern xx
Date: 07/30/14 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 43
Quick review using my phone coz I'm on holiday in Scotland right now. So happy to have an update but what a sad chapter. My heart aches for Tomi, and Andreas having to deal with Tomi's grief and acting up while fretting over Bill's disappearance himself. And Bill kidnapped by Gordon, stripped-down and chained to the bed...saddest of all, knowing it could have been avoided if he's stayed with Andi and Tomi. I hope you'll update again soon after such a cliffhanger. You certainly know how to keep the tension going. Not such a short review after all...but too much to comment on. Hugs, Helen x
Author's Response: Aww bless you! I hope my depressing story doesn't ruin it for you! But I hope you're having a fabby time <3 haha I'm terrible with cliff hangers lol but hopefully the next chapter won't be too long in coming since it's already started, trouble is I'm so busy! But thanks (as always!) for a lovely review and I hope you enjoy Scotland! rnFern <3
Date: 06/07/14 03:10 am Title: Chapter 42
OMG. What a cliffhanger. I'm guessing its Gordon since he called Bill his toy and Bill thinks of him as 'daddy'. The last thing they need is him turning up. Poor Bill, trying so hard to do the right thing but never really getting a break. Would love an insight into how Tomi's been coping without his brother. I love Andreas' loyalty, especially as Bill's tried so hard to push him away. Please update again soon. Love Helen x
Author's Response: Haha I'm sorry! I wont keep you hanging too long I promise :) and well guessed! I know, I feel sorry for my characters sometimes lol :L I will make things right for him eventually! I will hopefully be getting the next chapter written this week as I'm about to receive a new iPad Air for my birthday on Thursday so I'll want to get using that more for my word processing :) rnThanks for being such a lovely reader! I always look forward to your comments <3 rnFern xxx rn
Date: 06/07/14 12:01 am Title: Chapter 42
Oh who could it be?!?! =) thanks for the update and can't wait for more
Author's Response: Hehe, you're going to hate me when you find out! and you're welcome <3 thanks for always rnleaving me nice comments <3 <3 rnFern xxx
Date: 04/19/14 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 41
Omg he plans to leave Tom there I can imagine the freak out.
Author's Response: I know! Things aren't going to be easy for him, for anyone really...new chapter will be coming soon! Thanks for leaving me a review <3 rnFern xx