Date: 11/27/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
Loved it!
Date: 06/23/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
I like it... it has a lot of potential. :) But it can be a little confusing, especially at the end. Try reading it out loud, or have a beta. That'll help :) You're a great writer!
Date: 04/04/09 07:12 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
oh yeah... i love it..
please write another chapter!!
really good first chapter, you wouldn't think that this was your first fan fic =)
good luck with the next chapter =) x
Date: 01/10/09 01:01 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
I reallllly like it.
Date: 11/27/08 06:16 pm Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
Oooh, I really do like it! I hope you update soon!!
Date: 11/14/08 05:19 pm Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
I love it, write more soon! i will read more of this!!
Date: 11/10/08 09:06 pm Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
im not sure if i already reviewed... but ill review again :)
this is amazing... i got chills reading it and it ONLY the first chapter!
please hurry with the rest!
great job!
Date: 11/01/08 01:06 pm Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh wooowww
cant wait till the next chapter...
it sounds sooo good!
great job!
Date: 10/31/08 11:43 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
That was a very nice chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
Date: 10/27/08 01:38 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
interesting story.....
I like the ending of it hehe.....kinda like happy.....but she tried killing herself 0.0
I wonder what she wrote in the diary
update soon ^0^
Date: 10/26/08 12:03 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
Wow, this is freaky.
I hope you make another soon, it's interguing(sp?)!! =)
I love the detail.
Date: 10/25/08 02:27 pm Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
awww she tryed to kill her self that sad..
keep writing, u are really good at this.
Date: 10/23/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
this is is amazin update soon i love it
ly
x
Date: 10/23/08 07:10 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
that was so...deep! i need more! lol:-]
Date: 10/23/08 07:09 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
oh wow, that was amazing! please write more^^
Date: 10/23/08 07:02 am Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
Ohh, please write more? This is just a great story!
Author's Response: lol, :]
Date: 10/22/08 11:59 pm Title: Chapter One: Bloody Tiles
oh my god i love this! i'm excited to read more =]
Author's Response: lol, thanks:)