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Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/13 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 7

They're all such dorks lol. Reminds me of me and my friends. :P

Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/13 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 6

Now I wamt chocolate cake! Minus the fly of course...

Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/13 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

Okay I love Lani. Her spunk is awesome! lol.

Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/13 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awwwh don't cry :( lol.

Anyway, her mother is a bitch and doesn't deserve her tears. Oh well, onto the next!

Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/13 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

That's sweet, the whole music thing. Just thinking of Bill singing to me mkes my belly flutter lol.

Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/13 11:40 am Title: Chapter 2

That would never happen! Breaking the rules would not get you to meet the band! I know I know, this is just a fan fiction, it's not supposed to be very realistic but still...

I liked the thumb thing, lol that made me laugh :)

Reviewer: Dancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/13 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1

I don't like all her fat talk, and nor do I think fans are that crazy. Then again, I've never been somewhere like that so...

Onto the next.

Reviewer: loli2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 7

xD cuteee

Reviewer: LosingSanity Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/12 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 7

this story had to be like the best i have read so far but please keep up the good work

Reviewer: MidnightsRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/12 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 7

nooooooooo write more please i think i'm in love with this fanfic

Reviewer: DarkFantasy18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 7

ahhh I love this story. :]

Reviewer: KellanKellan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 7

I LOVE this story !!!
The only thing I don't like is how antisocial they all seem with the constant awkward silences. But that might just be me. I wish there were more chapters!

Reviewer: KatalinaLeggett Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/26/11 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1

This is interesting! Funny as well because I laughed out loud a lot! :D

Reviewer: Blacknailpolish Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 02:20 am Title: Chapter 7

I really like your Story would you please!!! Keep on writing it???

Reviewer: Blacknailpolish Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/11 02:11 am Title: Chapter 7

I really like your Story would you please!!! Keep on writing it???

Reviewer: Asher Wolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

No offense, but to be honest I fing the main girls to be just as stupid and typical as the fan girls, whom you make out to be retards. Maybe if you had them listen to different music other than Tokio Hotel then they would more original and free thinking. When the guys actually do find the girls they fall in love with, they won't be as perfect as the requirements they mention in interviews. Bill's girl doesn't have to have perfect hands, and maybe in stead of making Tom's girl have only pudgy thumbs she should actually be bodily pudgy because that's more realistic...
These are just my thoughts, and I wanted to be honest because your writing is pretty strong and interesting but the character deveoments strike me as stereotypical and redundant of lame fan girls writing unrealistic fan fics...
P.S. I'm really sorry if I offended you in any way...

Author's Response: Since theses are just the beginning chapters of the story, of course the characters will seem like usual TH fans....cus they are. But there will/would be more character development in later chapters. And it's funny that you mention the main character having a pudgy body because oh spoiler alert: She does. :3 I haven't had the motivation to continue the story since I lost some of the important chapters. In the most recent chapters there are mentions of characters listening to other music. Thank you for your feedback :3

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 06:41 am Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 06:27 am Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

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