Reviews For 1 September
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Reviewer: 200247391 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/13 12:10 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.

poor grammar. Kinda hard to follow the plot. not very well written. :(

Reviewer: SnoWhiteQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/11 12:54 am Title: They've got something to tell us.

this is a really cute story, but it seems kida.. incomplete.. nice though. very nice. good job :)

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/11 07:44 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"

Loved it!

Reviewer: Alda MN Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/10 02:28 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"

You need to work on your spelling and grammar, it's not that good but not that bad either.

Author's Response: yeah, well it's an old one :D thx x

Reviewer: dogxunleashed Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 06:04 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"

This is pretty good. I like it. *contines reading*

Author's Response: Woah! ppl still reading this? :D cool. thanks for the review!! xx

Reviewer: TokioHotelEier Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 05:31 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.

....:S

Reviewer: TKBKGurl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 07:25 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.

Aww.. what a fairy tale!

Author's Response: HEY! thank you SO much for all your lovely comments!!! xx

Reviewer: TKBKGurl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 07:14 pm Title: “I love you too!"

Awww... Popcorn fight...Nice...

Reviewer: TKBKGurl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 07:04 pm Title: A look I know all too well.

RESTRAIN YOURSELF!!
Hahahahaha!!!!
NICE!!!

Reviewer: TKBKGurl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 06:55 pm Title: "Tonight... mark my words.”

MARK MY WORDS..... SO Confident lol..

Reviewer: TKBKGurl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 06:52 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"

Aww..

Reviewer: tamahav Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 02:44 pm Title: "Tonight... mark my words.”

try adding more substance everything just seems a little short and this entire chapter could have been like three if there was more added. but I think you've got something going on.

Author's Response: thx, we wrote the fic in 2 days just because we were bored so it was never supposed to go all deep into things ;D if you watch my (Kyara) other stuff, you'll that normally i write more into details.. but thanks for your review, we allways like honest people who REALLY say what they think.

Reviewer: darma Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/09 11:30 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.

well, i have to say that this story was short, but it was very sweet and enjoyable.

Author's Response: thx for your review x3

Reviewer: Demitria Valentin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/09 07:22 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.

well, this was interesting !
i enjoyed it very much and the endind is freakin adorable !
nice work :D

Author's Response: THANK YOU!! x33

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/09 05:53 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.

Still love it xP I just had to read it again ^^
xx Chi

Author's Response: well aren't you a true fan, reading all my stories!! I'm working on a new one "trip to germany", it'll be up VERY soon =D (then you have something new to read xD) x33

Reviewer: britney Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 01:13 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"

this story is soooooooo stupid

Author's Response: thank you for your oppinion, but could we also know WHY you think it's stupid? so we can use that when we write another story. thank you!

Reviewer: KatteeGoesRawr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/08 11:40 am Title: They've got something to tell us.

Perfection :)
Keep writing stories!

Author's Response: you can read Finding Love if you want :D New stuff is coming after that one.

Reviewer: xoxlucyzxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 11:52 am Title: “I love you too!"

aww how cuticle :D dankeee

Author's Response: :D Glad you liked it!! thx for the review x3

Reviewer: maliciousintent69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/08 07:14 pm Title: "Tonight... mark my words.”

i like it but it would be loads better if you added more details.
update soon :D

Author's Response: yeah, probably xD but it's not meant to be a very detailed story. I said it in the beginning, it's just something really short. thx 4 the review x3

Reviewer: RebelluvsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/08 02:34 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"

I like it please KEEP WRITING!
:D

Author's Response: don't worry it's allready finished. I just need to translate it :D. Thx for the review x3

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