Date: 02/15/13 12:10 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.
poor grammar. Kinda hard to follow the plot. not very well written. :(
Date: 12/18/11 12:54 am Title: They've got something to tell us.
this is a really cute story, but it seems kida.. incomplete.. nice though. very nice. good job :)
Date: 07/29/11 07:44 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"
Loved it!
Date: 03/22/10 02:28 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"
You need to work on your spelling and grammar, it's not that good but not that bad either.
Author's Response: yeah, well it's an old one :D thx x
Date: 03/02/10 06:04 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"
This is pretty good. I like it. *contines reading*
Author's Response: Woah! ppl still reading this? :D cool. thanks for the review!! xx
Date: 12/06/09 05:31 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.
....:S
Date: 12/02/09 07:25 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.
Aww.. what a fairy tale!
Author's Response: HEY! thank you SO much for all your lovely comments!!! xx
Date: 12/02/09 07:14 pm Title: “I love you too!"
Awww... Popcorn fight...Nice...
Date: 12/02/09 07:04 pm Title: A look I know all too well.
RESTRAIN YOURSELF!!
Hahahahaha!!!!
NICE!!!
Date: 12/02/09 06:55 pm Title: "Tonight... mark my words.”
MARK MY WORDS..... SO Confident lol..
Date: 12/02/09 06:52 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"
Aww..
Date: 06/03/09 02:44 pm Title: "Tonight... mark my words.”
try adding more substance everything just seems a little short and this entire chapter could have been like three if there was more added. but I think you've got something going on.
Author's Response: thx, we wrote the fic in 2 days just because we were bored so it was never supposed to go all deep into things ;D if you watch my (Kyara) other stuff, you'll that normally i write more into details.. but thanks for your review, we allways like honest people who REALLY say what they think.
Date: 01/27/09 11:30 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.
well, i have to say that this story was short, but it was very sweet and enjoyable.
Author's Response: thx for your review x3
Date: 01/18/09 07:22 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.
well, this was interesting !
i enjoyed it very much and the endind is freakin adorable !
nice work :D
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! x33
Date: 01/17/09 05:53 pm Title: They've got something to tell us.
Still love it xP I just had to read it again ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: well aren't you a true fan, reading all my stories!! I'm working on a new one "trip to germany", it'll be up VERY soon =D (then you have something new to read xD) x33
Date: 11/08/08 01:13 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"
this story is soooooooo stupid
Author's Response: thank you for your oppinion, but could we also know WHY you think it's stupid? so we can use that when we write another story. thank you!
Date: 10/14/08 11:40 am Title: They've got something to tell us.
Perfection :)
Keep writing stories!
Author's Response: you can read Finding Love if you want :D New stuff is coming after that one.
Date: 10/13/08 11:52 am Title: “I love you too!"
aww how cuticle :D dankeee
Author's Response: :D Glad you liked it!! thx for the review x3
Date: 09/26/08 07:14 pm Title: "Tonight... mark my words.”
i like it but it would be loads better if you added more details.
update soon :D
Author's Response: yeah, probably xD but it's not meant to be a very detailed story. I said it in the beginning, it's just something really short. thx 4 the review x3
Date: 09/21/08 02:34 pm Title: "did you see those two boys yet?"
I like it please KEEP WRITING!
:D
Author's Response: don't worry it's allready finished. I just need to translate it :D. Thx for the review x3