Date: 03/21/10 02:25 pm Title: The House Of Wax.
OMG i onlY read the first bit of this chapter so far. the twins. the house of wax. that's my favorite movie in the universe!!! i was wishing forever someone would write a story about it it's amazing.I love it so far already!!! i especially love the part when they meet the other twins; the killer twins and omg imma go read themr going into the house!! =DDDD
Date: 11/11/09 10:34 pm Title: Ride the wings of pestilence part 2
I really really like this story because it deals with the crossover between fantasy and reality. Please update soon
Date: 09/28/08 05:53 pm Title: Ride the wings of pestilence
this is getting really confusing....
Author's Response: sorryrnrnHopefully it will make sense in the end though
Date: 09/28/08 12:39 pm Title: Ride the wings of pestilence
You updated! YAY! =D
God, I love the atmosphere of this chapter! Believe me if I say it was very intense. :)
And there's something I have to say; it has been a very good mix to me, because half story was dedicated to Tom's fear for these nasty lyrics, I was really scared and I couldn't help but go on reading xD
And Bill makes the other half of the chapter shine! xD
I meant what I said. U_U
He was just tooooo cute! And he seemed so innocent, too! Please don't make our sweet Billa suffer! :'( *cries*
Aw, yeah, now it was clearer; Tom being confused about dream and reality made me think it was NOT a dream... right? ,)
But I'm by Bill's side. EVEN IF I personally love Tom, but I think you're going to drive him crazy, poor guy! xD
So I'm still with him.
Nice chapter anyway. :)
Go on writing and I will always review; oh, and I'm so happy you think of me everytime you post something! :)
I feel proud ,)
So, please go on soon!!! :)
Many kisses to you (and yeah, many kisses to Liam, too).
I love you!
-Niky-
Author's Response: NEIN! Liam doesn't deserve those kisses XD ANYWAYS yeah...Um...I will drive Tom crazy because he drives me crazy too xD Haha 'Those nasty lyrics' xD yes yes From First to Last does have nasty lyrics! You should Listen to the song "ride the wings of pestilence' because than this will make more sense! xP So anyways...I would like to go on soon :) But i have no idea how to write the nezt chapter =_= I can't think of anything T.T It's so hard to write cos of school :'( *cries* School takes away people's inspiration and makes you bored out of your mind T_T Anyways...I will not make Billa suffer...Atleast I will try not to ;) So yeah...If you have any ideas on how to write the next chapter PLEASE help me! BITTE! hehe if you want my email is x_zimmer483@hotmail.com hehe if you want to help me write anything..or anything else? Haha I THINK I HAVE WRITTEN TOO MUCH NOW XD SO I WILL SEARCH MY BRAIN FOR SOMETHING TO WRITE ABOUT...AFTER I DO MY HOMEWORK T_T BYE! FOR NOW! :D
Date: 09/23/08 05:46 pm Title: When you feel like your being watched, NEVER fucking turn around!
WTF!!! THIS STORY IS WACK!!!!!! LOVE IT THOUGH, JUST A LITTLE CONFUZZLING.
Author's Response: Yeah...I have problems making things clear...But I'll try to make it better in the next chapter ^-^ and, thanks (:
Date: 09/23/08 11:52 am Title: When you feel like your being watched, NEVER fucking turn around!
OMG...
Ok, I have to say FIRST, I haven't read the chapter yet, I'm just reviewng the Chapter Notes ,)
Girl, do you wanna make me cry? xD
Believe me if I say I'm smiling at the moment, showing up all of my teeth! xD
Ah, yeah... I'm Dylan (because Dylan is a very wonderful character of a movie I personally like... but it's because of Bob Dylan, too), my real name is Nicole, as you said (so you didn't make ANY mistake!xD), but friends are used to call me Niky... my plaisure :)
You're such a good, kind person, AND of course author, and I'm glad, really, really glad I found your fiction, not missing a single chapter of it! ,)
(At least, I think so... O_O)
Now, time to read... see you later!
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Read!
Let's say, first of all, I love black. It's absolutely my favourite colour. So, don't think it's just weird if I say this chapter reminds me that colour, it's such a positive thing! :)
Maybe because I was seeing it from Tom's mind. I loved reading about his thoughts, this actually made the story so captivating! The rhythm was chasing.
And when you said Bill, Gustav and Georg laughed at Tom, it totally felt like the exact mood of a dream xD
And THAT dream, let me say it was kinda scary, very direct and resolute.
Now look: "My eyes are failing me. I can feel my body going limp. My hand is clutched to my stomache, where the blood is pouring out."
Ok, those were the sentences I liked the most, because they reminded me a lyrics writer I like... I'm talking about Amy Lee, the lead singer of Evanescence (come on, I'm sure you know them! XD); and telling the truth, those lines you wrote remind me of a song by Evanescence ('Tourniquet'), one of my favourites. That song makes me feel like I've got this black atmposphere all around me, just like your chapter does. ^^
It was very clear, and kinda cold. ^^
And in the end, don't you worry for that emo joke xD It was pretty funny.
Ah! So these dreams have got a reason, right?
Ok, now you have to update soon U_U
And I want to know why Tom wakes up in an hospital ,)
So... thank you again, sweetie, that was one of the cutest things someone has ever done for me :)
I love you!!!
(Hoping to see you soon...)
Kisses!
-Niky-
Author's Response: Yay! Evanescence is awesome! But i can never spell it right XD and when I saw the length of your review, i was like "Oh my god!" and then I read it and it made me so HAPPY! :D AND I want to update soon...But i don't know how to write the next chapter. :(rnrnPaha he ends up in the hospital, because, maybe it wasn't a dream! Maybe it really happened ;) that's actually what i was tryna say in the story o_o guess it didn't come out very ;D heh...ANYWAYS. THANK YOU SO MUCH you always make me so happy, and from now on, all the next chapters are dedicated to YOU! :D Cos I love you too XD AND NOW. I AM GOING TO GET MY ASS OUT OF THIS CHAIR AND GO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER XD *Hugs* DANKE DANKE DANKE AGAIIINNN :D I'm so happy now xD BYE for now! hehe <3
Date: 09/22/08 07:06 pm Title: Prologue
I love this story, its so different and i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yeeee awesome ^-^ Thanks a lot :) that means so much to me ^-^ I'm glad not everyone hates it after all! DANKE DANKE! *bows and hugs gigantically*
Date: 09/22/08 01:48 pm Title: Grim Goodbye.
Aha the first thing I can think about is 'Poor Tom' xD
Everytime he has to have a scary dream and then he wakes up ^^
I have to say, this time his dream was very fast and sad. I felt like Tom was really going crazy (:
But it seemed even he knew he was dreaming... in the beginning (about at half of the chapter). Then he fell again into the fantasy xD
I LOVE when Bill makes himself being wanted :) He seemed so precious...
(Even if, I have to say, he was not that kind in his letter... U.U).
I like this fic, it is so... ahem... coloured xD Everytime it is something different ,)
Little question: are these weird dreams due to something? Maybe something that had shocked Tom... xD
Anyway I loved it! Kiss!
-Niky-
Author's Response: DANKE! That was the first NICE response to this one XD And it will all make sense in a couple chapters :PrnrnAnd I truly love you for your wonderful responses they make me so happy ^-^
Date: 09/21/08 09:48 pm Title: Prologue
this story makes absolutely no sense and i can't follow it one bit
Author's Response: Yeah sorry..This one kind of was bad... :(
Date: 09/21/08 07:26 pm Title: Grim Goodbye.
WTF?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Author's Response: Euhhmm...Sorry? :S
Date: 09/20/08 03:52 pm Title: The House Of Wax.
Hey, FINALLY!!! ^_^
You updated! *clapps*
Mh. I personally think THIS is your best chapter xD
Ok, I confess I've never seen that movie, 'House of Wax'...? But it's ok, I enjoyed the chapter as well, I love the contrast you create everytime; from the scary, weird dream, directly to the reality xD
It makes my mood change so fastly! xD
It's fantastic, you know, I was on the edge of my chair, an then Tom woke up! ,)
Really nice chapter, I'm glad you posted it :)
Aaaand... what about the number four? I hope to read it soon (so soon!).
Kisses!!!
-Niky-
Author's Response: Woot thank you! I love your reviews ^-^ They make me happy :PrnAnd I want to post it soon! But school is EVIL! So much homework :( But hopefully I shall post it tomorrow or sometime this week! XD
Date: 08/26/08 10:10 pm Title: The first dream.
keep writing
Author's Response: Will do :)
Date: 08/26/08 10:05 pm Title: Prologue
loves it
Author's Response: Danke ^^
Date: 08/26/08 09:23 pm Title: The first dream.
Woah..thats crazy..
I cant believe this is based of a dream you had.. must have been some creepy one. I cant wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Thanks :) and yes...it was really creepy o_o
Date: 08/26/08 08:54 pm Title: The first dream.
kewl i like it alot ^^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That means the world to me ^^
Date: 08/26/08 08:40 pm Title: Prologue
i love ur prologue
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 08/26/08 05:44 pm Title: Prologue
This sounds like a very interesting idea! I'd really like to see where it goes. (:
Author's Response: Thank you sweety I'm writing the first chapter right now :)