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Date: 02/09/10 10:37 am Title: Unwanted Attentions

Your story is what is keeping me preoccupied today. I feel like a young child waiting for christmas. I am supposed to be going to see a dog later today and maybe getting him and I'm growing impatient. Anyway, this is going to be bad. Those men knowing what happened between Bill and Bushido will not be good, at all.

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Date: 02/09/10 10:03 am Title: Keeping Up Appearances

I truly commend Bill. I could never be that submissive to anyone, I get infuriated and retort angrily. I like the way you two write everything though, it sounds like it could truly happen.

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Date: 02/09/10 07:34 am Title: Like New

You know, I passed this story many times, tempted to read it (Bill/Bushido scared me away) and I have to say I'm glad I finally did because lord knows it's amazimg

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Date: 02/09/10 07:02 am Title: To Begin Again

You guys are so dedicated, it's wonderful, truly. You have no idea how much I truly enjoy reading this story and the pleasure I receive from it,(not that way, Pervs) You should both know that your writing is so encouraging. It's given me the will and desire to write my story (which is ALMOST done) and create a whole new idea, which I will start soon.

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Date: 02/09/10 06:25 am Title: Refrain

My goodness, Bill has more visits and advice from the God's than anyone in the bible themselves, I swear. You know I was dreaming about this story tonight, and such is the reason I got up at 5:45A.M. I was dreamig about Ann Kathrin's pregnancy.

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Date: 02/08/10 11:34 pm Title: The Best Course of Action

Hm, very interesting. Politics now threaten to ruin the seemingly, somewhat fixed couple. Tom should of known no good could come of drowning his sorrows in women, oh well. What's done is done.

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Date: 02/08/10 11:20 pm Title: Preempted

HAHA XD! Could you imagine if that had happened in real life. Could you imagine how the fans would have reacted. Anyway, this was a nice chapter, tastefully done. Just enough of everything to enjoy it so.

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Date: 02/08/10 07:07 pm Title: Progress Is A Stony Road

Yeppers, I knew it. For once my guess was actually right. I have to admit I am slightly proud of myself. Anyway, lovely chapter you have here. Andreas and Michael seem very cute but I wonder if they can make it.

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Date: 02/08/10 03:17 pm Title: Invasion

I forgot to mention this last chapter! BUT!!! It occurred to me and I felt so dumb for not saying it earlier but I think Ann Kathrin is pregnant!

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Date: 02/08/10 02:32 pm Title: One Step Forward

I'm very glad to see that they are mending and things are coming to peace. Hopefully they can be okay now, not too many more problems.

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Date: 02/08/10 10:43 am Title: Breaking Point

I really love how Andreas looks in the illustrations, it's amazing. I feel this chapter is a great step, forward, hopefully. You're expressing such an important matter and describing it very well. I feel Bill is bordering on Anorexia, hopefully he does not fall to it.

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Date: 02/08/10 09:09 am Title: Prostration

I feel sorry for Tom as much as I feel sorry for Bill only because I think he wants to be sorry now. I love the title and quote of this story because it's one of my favorite songs of all time.

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Date: 02/08/10 06:09 am Title: Shades of Sin

Damn! The whole family is breaking down. Poor, poor Bill, he's been through so much in such short time. I believe everyone is allowed time to wallow and all but Tom's is beginning to drive me mad. Also, I support Andreas, one hundred percent.

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Date: 02/08/10 05:53 am Title: What's Done In The Dark...

Maybe now Tom will pull his head from his ass and realize Bill does love him, even if he laid with another. Maybe if someone would take the time to listen to Bill they would understand it was by the God's will. I can understand Tom's sorrow and hurt because he's now been cheated on twice but honestly, if he paid attention he would see how hard Bill was trying.

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Date: 02/08/10 05:40 am Title: Celebration

I can't even yell at you I'm in such shock. ...Like wow...

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Date: 02/08/10 12:40 am Title: Labors of Love

Wow, Bill is VERY determined. Hopefully Tom is not disappointed and Jorg doesn't cause too many more problems.

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Date: 02/08/10 12:14 am Title: Contrition

I cannot express how glad I am that I don't have to wait for an update on this because I SO badly wish to continue right now, thank the gods I can. I really like how you're taking things so slow and realistically between Tom and Bill.

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Date: 02/07/10 11:46 pm Title: Patience Is a Virtue

A very interesting crest at that. Now, this definitely getting to be emotionally whelming for the readers too. Perhaps I connect to the characters too well or something but I almost constantly feel the way the characters do (whoever I'm reading about at that moment) Sometimes I find myself snapping at the people around me even though I shouldn't. So needless to say you're both doing an immaculate job of conveying their emotions an feelings on subjects.

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Date: 02/07/10 11:13 pm Title: No Words

And it begins. So much is going to be said and more feelings will undoubtedly be hurt. I do hope things can be worked out between the two of them though, since Bushido is no longer a possibility. Ya know something I thought of that's never been mentioned is the concubine that bared Tom. Who is Tom's technical "mother" anyway?

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Date: 02/07/10 10:41 pm Title: Divine Intervention

Well, it wasn't as I thought it would be, but they were still brought together. Whatever was that vision Bill seen?!?! It aggravates me when I do not know things, as it does everyone. I love how anything I think I have something right and I guess I am wrong.

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