Date: 02/09/10 10:37 am Title: Unwanted Attentions
Your story is what is keeping me preoccupied today. I feel like a young child waiting for christmas. I am supposed to be going to see a dog later today and maybe getting him and I'm growing impatient. Anyway, this is going to be bad. Those men knowing what happened between Bill and Bushido will not be good, at all.
Date: 02/09/10 07:02 am Title: To Begin Again
You guys are so dedicated, it's wonderful, truly. You have no idea how much I truly enjoy reading this story and the pleasure I receive from it,(not that way, Pervs) You should both know that your writing is so encouraging. It's given me the will and desire to write my story (which is ALMOST done) and create a whole new idea, which I will start soon.
Date: 02/09/10 06:25 am Title: Refrain
My goodness, Bill has more visits and advice from the God's than anyone in the bible themselves, I swear. You know I was dreaming about this story tonight, and such is the reason I got up at 5:45A.M. I was dreamig about Ann Kathrin's pregnancy.
Date: 02/08/10 07:07 pm Title: Progress Is A Stony Road
Yeppers, I knew it. For once my guess was actually right. I have to admit I am slightly proud of myself. Anyway, lovely chapter you have here. Andreas and Michael seem very cute but I wonder if they can make it.
Date: 02/08/10 10:43 am Title: Breaking Point
I really love how Andreas looks in the illustrations, it's amazing. I feel this chapter is a great step, forward, hopefully. You're expressing such an important matter and describing it very well. I feel Bill is bordering on Anorexia, hopefully he does not fall to it.
Date: 02/08/10 06:09 am Title: Shades of Sin
Damn! The whole family is breaking down. Poor, poor Bill, he's been through so much in such short time. I believe everyone is allowed time to wallow and all but Tom's is beginning to drive me mad. Also, I support Andreas, one hundred percent.
Date: 02/08/10 05:53 am Title: What's Done In The Dark...
Maybe now Tom will pull his head from his ass and realize Bill does love him, even if he laid with another. Maybe if someone would take the time to listen to Bill they would understand it was by the God's will. I can understand Tom's sorrow and hurt because he's now been cheated on twice but honestly, if he paid attention he would see how hard Bill was trying.
Date: 02/08/10 12:14 am Title: Contrition
I cannot express how glad I am that I don't have to wait for an update on this because I SO badly wish to continue right now, thank the gods I can. I really like how you're taking things so slow and realistically between Tom and Bill.
Date: 02/07/10 11:46 pm Title: Patience Is a Virtue
A very interesting crest at that. Now, this definitely getting to be emotionally whelming for the readers too. Perhaps I connect to the characters too well or something but I almost constantly feel the way the characters do (whoever I'm reading about at that moment) Sometimes I find myself snapping at the people around me even though I shouldn't. So needless to say you're both doing an immaculate job of conveying their emotions an feelings on subjects.
Date: 02/07/10 11:13 pm Title: No Words
And it begins. So much is going to be said and more feelings will undoubtedly be hurt. I do hope things can be worked out between the two of them though, since Bushido is no longer a possibility. Ya know something I thought of that's never been mentioned is the concubine that bared Tom. Who is Tom's technical "mother" anyway?
Date: 02/07/10 10:41 pm Title: Divine Intervention
Well, it wasn't as I thought it would be, but they were still brought together. Whatever was that vision Bill seen?!?! It aggravates me when I do not know things, as it does everyone. I love how anything I think I have something right and I guess I am wrong.