Date: 01/17/17 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really nice; I enjoyed the fighting and unresolved feelings between them. This is the kind of a deep oneshot that could easily go on and have many chapters, but in the end, it works on its own really well. I liked the sort of open ending this had; it left things unclear but somehow made this all even better.
Intense!
Date: 05/08/12 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's the second story I've read from this series and I find it totally awsome. Sure you where sick when wrote this plot?
I think that the final "don't fight me" by Bill tells a lot of him and the way he sees his relation with his brother. he sounds so unsure and weak and sweet to me - even if they have kind of a relation since they were children.
Sex scene is amazing - and wild! XD - and I've enjoied it, specially the part in which Tom says "You're so easy" to his brother. I think Bill looks really sexy and done there :)
Thank u for sharing!
Date: 10/05/10 07:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh! So cute ^^
I love the way you write so much! :)
Date: 05/13/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
amazing..really really well written..
Date: 05/06/10 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
aww so sad but so good
Date: 11/21/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's a sad little story. I don't like it when people don't communicate. Becasue they aren't if it was a real game they would have rules and they would both be on the same page and they wouldn't get hurt. I feel bad for them. *pouts*
Date: 11/05/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh, wow.. "don't fight me".. those words seem so mighty to me right now.. I was thinking Tom was fighting the shame of loving his brother, fighting the guilt.. but Bill is so.. different, and it feels like he was being fought by Tom, and not their "sick relationship"..
XD see? you make my braincells kinda work..
anyway, I loved this..
Date: 03/16/09 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
wow.....that was REALLY good!
you could've made that a multi, but...im kind of glad you didn't.
it worked really well as a one-shot......
so good job!!!
Date: 01/25/09 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
that was sad.. but i liked it :) x
Date: 10/15/08 01:05 am Title: Chapter 1
"The anger burns through the shame."
-good line
Date: 09/16/08 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1
that was mind blowingly amazing
Date: 08/04/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. I've never read something like this before, I mean when they are faiting and then have sex, but I think it turned to be pretty good!
Date: 04/01/08 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was good!! =)
Date: 01/13/08 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved it! brilliant idea! please post more!
Date: 12/22/07 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
just fucking brilliant, as usual
Date: 11/06/07 08:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh. Ohh. Ohhh! This was it. What better than twins fight that end up like this?
Date: 10/27/07 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1
This made me want to cry. It was bitter and wonderful :)